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    Dance With Us 3

    Story written on February 27, 2009 by tibette417.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=72737
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    Coming Home

    Bette (angrily): Your daughter just fucked my fiancé. I’m not taking it out on Tina (sneering) yet. Your daughter however is dead. She knew that the minute she put her hands on Tina…
    Peggy (grabbing Bette’s hands and puling her to her knees): Listen to me (her voice low and menacing) there’s more going on here than that…
    Bette (growling): No Helena fucked Tina end of story…
    Peggy (shaking her head): Not maliciously, not to hurt you or Tina or anyone else. She’s seeking comfort from the one person who has not tried to destroy her.
    Bette (rolling her eyes): By fucking her…
    Peggy (seeing Tina coming down the hall): Listen, let me tell you what else is going on. Then (pausing) then if you still want to put my daughter over your knee and beat her so bad she can’t sit right for the rest of her life then I’ll stand back no questions. (Looking at Bette) just hear me out. That’s all I’m asking…
    Bette (not wanting to hear it): So you can justify her actions (slamming her hand into the wall.) This is absolutely incredible. You know everyone was worried and I’ll take a guess and say there was money laid down as to how long I could keep it in my pants. How long I could keep my hands off another woman?  
    Peggy (silently forestalling Tina): No one thought that of you (seeing Bette’s look of shock) maybe at first but not anymore. (Holding her hand up) hear me out. Give me this one chance to save my daughter and if you still believe she deserves to be beaten within an inch of her life I will walk away (Bette nodded and waited.)
    The Hit Club
    Kit (pouring drinks for some VIPs in the corner and handing the tray to her waitress): Make sure they tip you honey. (The waitress nodded and she looked over to a group of girls in the corner talking rather loudly) dam drama Queens. Cursing she marched over there and stepped between them) take your scrawny asses outside.  
    Jodi (stepping forward): Sorry Kit, we’ll keep it down…
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    Comments

    1. I wanted to read through the whole chapter, but I really had a hard time following the dialogue because of all the descriptions you added in parenthesis. I understand that this is how it is done in script form, but because there is no spaces between the characters lines, it really is hard and confusing to read. I wanted to though!! If you change the format let me know. Thanks!

    2. Okay, I read it. You’ve got the makings of a really interesting story here, but to echo what Seahurst said, the formatting makes this fairly difficult to read. If you need a hand with formatting or whatever else, PM me and I’ll be happy to help. Cheers

    3. WOW! First I was like WTF, then I was like what she raped her, then I was like man what is Bette doing now I’m just confused I don’t know what to think.

    4. I have received a lot of WTF’s (lol.) I’ll give a short explanation. Helena’s a mess and is drowning in alcohol, pills and her past. Bette and Tina are the only ones to reach her. However, Bette has to push Helena to her limits of losing all control before they can get through the walls. The passion between Helena and Tina was bordering on consensual and non consensual. Between Bette and Helena however, it was Bette pushing her control so Helena would let her walls down.

    6. Thank you for the suggestion. I’m still getting the hang of this and appreciate any tips or advice. It’s been re edited for viewing and if it needs more drop me a line.

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