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    Dance With Us 3

    Story written on February 27, 2009 by tibette417.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=72737
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    Coming Home

    Kit (nodding; she hadn’t expected to see Jodi back here): All right (turning around to leave only to feel Jodi’s hand on her arm.) Listen what you did to my sister and Tina I will never forget. Right now your lucky your still talking through your mouth.  
    Jodi (biting her lip): I didn’t come here to start something. I’ve learned my lesson. I’m just here for a few days then I’m going back up to San Francisco.  
    Kit (nodding): Make sure you do that. Because you caused a lot of trouble and its not so easily forgiven.
    Jodi (bitting her tongue): No you’re right. I’ll stay out of everyone’s way…
    Papi (walking over): Problems baby. Someone I can remove or maybe I can remove an offending body part…
    Kit (placing her hand on Papi’s stomach): No baby. I’m sure she knows where the exit it. Come on while it’s quiet I’d like to have a dance with you…
    Papi (looking at Jodi): I’d like a little more than that (waiting until Kit was out of earshot. Looking Jodi dead in the face) you go near anyone of my family I’ll rip you apart, you got me. (Jodi nodded) then enjoy yourself
    (following Kit and wrapping her arms around her.) I love you (kissing her softly.)
    Kit (knowing what Papi had done): You big softy you…
    Papi (smirking): Nothing about me is soft baby especially (grinding her sex on Kit’s thigh) this…
    Kit (grabbing her ass and pulling her closer): Don’t I know it…

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    Helena leaned on the false balcony drinking from a second bottle. Actually it was still only the first bottle she had divided the Jack into two after she retrieved her coke. Now she was well and truly buzzed. A hand on her arm startled her and she looked right into blazing eyes…

    Bette (her voice low): I would never, ever think in a million years you would betray me like this…
    Helena (fighting the tears that threatened to fall): Bette, I…
    Bette (shaking her head): No. I’m talking now. You shut the bloody hell up (Helena nodded) I thought I could trust you with my most precious gifts. A Godmother to our daughter and confidante of my fiancé. (Taking a deep breath) now your boss. The first opportunity you had you seduced her. You fucked her in her office not twelve hours afterward. I trusted you and you betrayed me, lied to me…
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    Comments

    1. I wanted to read through the whole chapter, but I really had a hard time following the dialogue because of all the descriptions you added in parenthesis. I understand that this is how it is done in script form, but because there is no spaces between the characters lines, it really is hard and confusing to read. I wanted to though!! If you change the format let me know. Thanks!

    2. Okay, I read it. You’ve got the makings of a really interesting story here, but to echo what Seahurst said, the formatting makes this fairly difficult to read. If you need a hand with formatting or whatever else, PM me and I’ll be happy to help. Cheers

    3. WOW! First I was like WTF, then I was like what she raped her, then I was like man what is Bette doing now I’m just confused I don’t know what to think.

    4. I have received a lot of WTF’s (lol.) I’ll give a short explanation. Helena’s a mess and is drowning in alcohol, pills and her past. Bette and Tina are the only ones to reach her. However, Bette has to push Helena to her limits of losing all control before they can get through the walls. The passion between Helena and Tina was bordering on consensual and non consensual. Between Bette and Helena however, it was Bette pushing her control so Helena would let her walls down.

    6. Thank you for the suggestion. I’m still getting the hang of this and appreciate any tips or advice. It’s been re edited for viewing and if it needs more drop me a line.

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