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Discovering Aphrodite
Bette laughed and shook her head, she had a feeling that there were going to be some insatiable days coming up, “red or white…?”
“You choose…” Tina said, not caring in the slightest what she was going to be drinking with her meal as long as she was sat opposite the gorgeous woman in front of her.
“What do you usually drink?” Bette asked, wanting at least some guidance as to the colour she could choose.
“White…”
“Okay…,” Bette looked over the wine list, remembering what went with what, and the best to compliment their meal, “what about the Acacia Chardonnay?”
“Sounds good…” Tina said as she sipped the glass of water the waiter had already delivered to their table.
“Can I ask you something?” Bette said as she followed the rim of her glass with her finger.
“Of course…, anything you like.” Tina said as she pondered the faraway look seeming to cast a haze over Bette’s eyes.
“The question you asked me last night…, at the fort…”
Tina gave a small smile, “the ‘HR’ question?”
Bette laughed, “yeah that one.”
“What about it?” Tina replied, suddenly not sure whether she was intrigued or concerned.
“Was it ‘just a question’ or was it a uh…, I don’t know, an invitation?”
Tina smiled at the concerned look in Bette’s face, this woman had many layers and it seemed the more time they spent together the more layers she was seeing. “Initially it was just a question, I don’t even know where it came from…, just us being there together I guess, having only met that day and the way we just clicked…”
“Initially?” Bette asked, slightly confused with why it would have started out as that but maybe not ended that way.
Tina took a deep breath before speaking, “I didn’t consciously think about it…, just that it was nice spending time with you…, I enjoyed your company.”
“Have you ever had a holiday romance?” Bette asked, satisfied with Tina’s answer to something that had crossed her mind more than once during the previous nights restless sleep.
“Before now?” Tina asked with a smirk.
“Yes…, before now…”
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well the room number says it, it is probably going b an amazing 121:)
i love this story,Also the ‘fuckhair’ was very realistic, tina has always fuckhair indeed:)
So beautifully written, like poetry. Loving it!
Hi Jo, This is just perfect. I do love the bold and go getting her attitude that Tina has. I am so used to Bette being the one doing all the chasing but this story has these gals equally matched. It is just so precious seeing them at the habourside in the moonlight, wraped in each other’s arms. Absolutely delicious. More please of thie divine delight. Your Loyal Fan.
It appears that we will have another NC-17 to look forward to in the next little bit. Thank you so much for posting this chapter so quickly. Now back to JB’s picture that you look at everyday, you lucky devil. Where on earth did you find it and can we find one anywhere? If we can’t find one, it would really be nice of you to show it to us. Maybe??????????? Thanks for posting.
****sighs*****
Oh wow, you sure know how to make a girl happy… no pun intended, or is it lol? Just read all the 5 chapters so far and as I’m not as good with words as you I have only one thing to say – AMAZING! A pleasure to read just before bedtime, thank you!
Insatiable days coming up, huh? Also romantic and well written! My favorite!
*Sigh*…yet again! Loving every bit of this story..and like i keep saying they are barely into their week,so much can happen!!..lol.im very much looking forward to the romantic week ahead..I love the assertive Tina..she`s great…but im also loving that Bette is feeling more confident with how things are developing between them!..wonderful chapter :)
Well Jo, that’s the end of another bank holiday – just a couple of weeks to the next one! As usual your writing is second to none. I can go to bed with a smile, even though it’s work tomorrow! Awesome!!!!!
That was beautiful, Jo.
Absolutely fantastic. Jo, your writing is addictive. Please give us another fix soon.
Amazing!! Looking forward to more:)
Beautiful! Thank you for this and i really hope it becomes more then just a holiday romance! Awesome! :)
What can I say that hasn’t been said before? So romantic. They are treating each other’s heart w/great care and tenderness. Just beautiful. It is obvious that Bette has fallen hard for Tina. Tina seems to have a bit more restraint but is starting to realize that this could be much more than a HR. They are meant to be together. It’s kismet. Lucky you to be able to peruse the naked body of La Beals every day, all day!!
Everyone is right Jo, your writing is like reading poetic literature. Each sentence carefully constructed to invoke in the reader the same sensory pleasure the characters are experiencing.
oooh nice. PPS
you just always leave me wanting more…just so beautiful and romanticl. Thank you and I can’t wait to see where all this leads. pps
After reading this story, it’s clear that I really need another vacation!
So utterly tender the way these two are dancing around the eliment of time. Another couple would not be that close for a while yet holiday or not. Please no heart breaks Jo. Thank you, Md aka Oma
I feel like I am melting. Bette’s whispered voice sends shivers down my spine. I am giddy with delight in how this holiday romance is moving along. I too hope that the romance is a lifetime romance.
AMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAZING!!! PPVVVVVS!!!
FANTASTIC!
Simply amazing! I love this story PPS
I think this is moving right out of the realms of something short-lived…. and it’s only day 2 of them acknowledging their connection. Great update, Jo. Thank you.
so beautiful and romantic…thank you…i hope their holiday romance will turn into lifetime romance :)
SPEECHLESS!!!! PPVVVVVVVVVVS
Ah mate, you’ve done it again I’m hooked… I knew this was going to be an amazing story from the moment I read the first chapter! I’m glad you were inspired on your holiday and that you’ve had ME time to get this tale going… there’s nothing like coming back home to a few updates. You absolutely rock mate, I love this! xoxo
wonderful as always! love how romantic this story is. would be interesting to see who gives in first and asks that this not be limited to a holiday romance. love it!
damn. i’m still recovering from the previous chapter and now this. the fact that i’m in the office is not helping either. bravo!
I’m so glad I got to read this hun… WOW…absolutely beautiful & definately transported me to another time and place. Problem is it’s made me want to go on holiday! Can’t wait for the next chapter. x
that was special…thk u. is this really to b just a HR? Bette’s already totally hooked and worried about losing the confident blonde. Don’t break her heart, plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
Tina was right. No comparison.
Fantastic is right. Lovely. I want to be in Greece now. Thank you.
I love the visual quality to your writing! It really makes me feel like I’ve been there. Love this story! Thanks for posting!
Hi, dear sweet Jo! You made our hearts warm with this beautiful and romantic story of yours. We are loving every bit of it, like we were tasting the best wine to the palate. Absolutely AMAZING, dearest friend. Thanks for sharing it with us. PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks.- Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick and Tias Adoradas to Patpez)
Love it!
Jo, So AMAZING AND BEAUTIFUL!!!!!! Thank you