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Discovering Aphrodite
“The moon instead?”
“I like the moonlight…” Tina replied with a smirk.
“I had a feeling you might…” Bette said as they walked hand in hand toward the harbour where they had spent the previous evening.
Bette sat on the steps, Tina sitting between her legs as they overlooked the Medieval Fort. Bette wound her arms around Tina’s shoulders as she felt the slight shiver from her. Tina leaned back into Bette’s arms, she turned her head slightly, resting her head against Bette’s chest as they watched the moon rise above the Fort.
“It’s so beautiful here…”
Bette smiled as she rest her lips against the top of Tina’s head, she kissed her gently, inhaling her scent, memorising it as if she would never smell it again. It wasn’t as if she would ever forget, but she wanted to make sure regardless.
The moon rose higher in the sky as they continued to sit in relative silence, taking in the view as the shimmering light caught the calmness of the ocean. Bette’s hands gently ran along Tina’s arms, making sure she was warm and comfortable.
Tina leant her head back, moving her face closer to Bette’s, their eyes met. Bette leaned closer, she felt the beating in her chest increase in what she could only describe as an instantaneous electricity charged moment. She brought her lips to Tina’s, tenderly kissing her lips. They felt soft, soft but slightly bruised from their earlier ferocious dual.
She couldn’t get over how her body reacted to kissing Tina, it was as thought her body was plugged into a socket as their lips met and the electricity surged through her, whether it be a soft kiss or the passionate embraces they had shared.
“You wanna make our way back now?” Bette whispered as she nuzzled Tina’s neck following the sensual kiss.
“Yeah…”
Bette brought her arm around Tina’s shoulders as they slowly walked through the thinning night time crowds. Tina’s arms snaked around Bette’s waist, pulling her close as they walked hip to hip.
The hotel was soon upon them as they made their way along the now familiar winding paths from the main road. They came to the pool area, halting their steps as they had the previous night.
Tina turned in Bette’s arms, winding her arms around her waist tightly, burying her head in Bette’s neck, kissing her softly.
Bette smiled at the small kisses travelling across her neck, her eyes closed to the sensation they were yet again evoking within her. She was like a woman starved and being shown food the first time, she couldn’t get enough, she wanted to gorge herself past being full, past being hungry.
She brought her lips to Tina’s hair, kissing her in response, nuzzling her, her slow warm breath near her ear.
Tina took a deep breath as she felt the heat in her ear, felt Bette’s lips catching her ear lobe, gently nipping, taking it in her lips as her breath floated on her skin, she felt the hairs on the back of her neck stand on end, the erotic shiver travel down her spine…
Bette’s lips came to Tina’s ear, she softly licked the lobe before she quietly, tenderly whispered in her ear, “spend the night with me…”
Tina couldn’t reply in words, but the soft moan that escaped her lips was the only sound Bette needed to hear as she took Tina’s hand and led her back to room 121…
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well the room number says it, it is probably going b an amazing 121:)
i love this story,Also the ‘fuckhair’ was very realistic, tina has always fuckhair indeed:)
So beautifully written, like poetry. Loving it!
Hi Jo, This is just perfect. I do love the bold and go getting her attitude that Tina has. I am so used to Bette being the one doing all the chasing but this story has these gals equally matched. It is just so precious seeing them at the habourside in the moonlight, wraped in each other’s arms. Absolutely delicious. More please of thie divine delight. Your Loyal Fan.
It appears that we will have another NC-17 to look forward to in the next little bit. Thank you so much for posting this chapter so quickly. Now back to JB’s picture that you look at everyday, you lucky devil. Where on earth did you find it and can we find one anywhere? If we can’t find one, it would really be nice of you to show it to us. Maybe??????????? Thanks for posting.
****sighs*****
Oh wow, you sure know how to make a girl happy… no pun intended, or is it lol? Just read all the 5 chapters so far and as I’m not as good with words as you I have only one thing to say – AMAZING! A pleasure to read just before bedtime, thank you!
Insatiable days coming up, huh? Also romantic and well written! My favorite!
*Sigh*…yet again! Loving every bit of this story..and like i keep saying they are barely into their week,so much can happen!!..lol.im very much looking forward to the romantic week ahead..I love the assertive Tina..she`s great…but im also loving that Bette is feeling more confident with how things are developing between them!..wonderful chapter :)
Well Jo, that’s the end of another bank holiday – just a couple of weeks to the next one! As usual your writing is second to none. I can go to bed with a smile, even though it’s work tomorrow! Awesome!!!!!
That was beautiful, Jo.
Absolutely fantastic. Jo, your writing is addictive. Please give us another fix soon.
Amazing!! Looking forward to more:)
Beautiful! Thank you for this and i really hope it becomes more then just a holiday romance! Awesome! :)
What can I say that hasn’t been said before? So romantic. They are treating each other’s heart w/great care and tenderness. Just beautiful. It is obvious that Bette has fallen hard for Tina. Tina seems to have a bit more restraint but is starting to realize that this could be much more than a HR. They are meant to be together. It’s kismet. Lucky you to be able to peruse the naked body of La Beals every day, all day!!
Everyone is right Jo, your writing is like reading poetic literature. Each sentence carefully constructed to invoke in the reader the same sensory pleasure the characters are experiencing.
oooh nice. PPS
you just always leave me wanting more…just so beautiful and romanticl. Thank you and I can’t wait to see where all this leads. pps
After reading this story, it’s clear that I really need another vacation!
So utterly tender the way these two are dancing around the eliment of time. Another couple would not be that close for a while yet holiday or not. Please no heart breaks Jo. Thank you, Md aka Oma
I feel like I am melting. Bette’s whispered voice sends shivers down my spine. I am giddy with delight in how this holiday romance is moving along. I too hope that the romance is a lifetime romance.
AMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAZING!!! PPVVVVVS!!!
FANTASTIC!
Simply amazing! I love this story PPS
I think this is moving right out of the realms of something short-lived…. and it’s only day 2 of them acknowledging their connection. Great update, Jo. Thank you.
so beautiful and romantic…thank you…i hope their holiday romance will turn into lifetime romance :)
SPEECHLESS!!!! PPVVVVVVVVVVS
Ah mate, you’ve done it again I’m hooked… I knew this was going to be an amazing story from the moment I read the first chapter! I’m glad you were inspired on your holiday and that you’ve had ME time to get this tale going… there’s nothing like coming back home to a few updates. You absolutely rock mate, I love this! xoxo
wonderful as always! love how romantic this story is. would be interesting to see who gives in first and asks that this not be limited to a holiday romance. love it!
damn. i’m still recovering from the previous chapter and now this. the fact that i’m in the office is not helping either. bravo!
I’m so glad I got to read this hun… WOW…absolutely beautiful & definately transported me to another time and place. Problem is it’s made me want to go on holiday! Can’t wait for the next chapter. x
that was special…thk u. is this really to b just a HR? Bette’s already totally hooked and worried about losing the confident blonde. Don’t break her heart, plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
Tina was right. No comparison.
Fantastic is right. Lovely. I want to be in Greece now. Thank you.
I love the visual quality to your writing! It really makes me feel like I’ve been there. Love this story! Thanks for posting!
Hi, dear sweet Jo! You made our hearts warm with this beautiful and romantic story of yours. We are loving every bit of it, like we were tasting the best wine to the palate. Absolutely AMAZING, dearest friend. Thanks for sharing it with us. PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks.- Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick and Tias Adoradas to Patpez)
Love it!
Jo, So AMAZING AND BEAUTIFUL!!!!!! Thank you