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Do I know you? Part 7 (Revised)
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"Don’t be. It was beautiful. I didn’t hear about it. I saw it. I had been watching you all night. I was on my way over to talk to you when I asked the bartender to let me put my bag behind the bar. I looked up and there you were grinding away. Actually it was pretty fucking hot and amazing"
"God, I don’t think I will ever show my face in this town again. Despite that you still wanted to talk to me or did it make you want to talk to me more"
Candi reached over and held Helena’s hand and said reassuringly. "Helena it really was beautiful. You two obviously have something special. You were lost in your own world. Fuck what anybody has to say. You know who and what you are. Trust me I should know. To grow up with the name Candace Cain. I’ve been the butt of many jokes. Any joke you can come up with candy, sweet or tasty, I’ve heard it. After a while I said fuck it, it’s my name. I’ll just own it. Now I can out joke anyone about it. So that’s what you do. It’s your business. As far as I can tell you both enjoyed it. I think anyone will wish they could share something so special. So don’t worry. I wanted to talk to you because I surmised you were not her girlfriend when she got all bent out of shape when that deaf woman came over. So what’s up with you two anyway?"
"It’s a long story, but bottom line, she’s got a girlfriend"
"And you are in love with her."
"No I wouldn’t say that."
"She’s probably in love with you too. Some women are just afraid to commit to something that might be too much for them, especially if they’ve had their heart broken before".
"So who made you the expert of matters of the heart"?
"I’m not. I just love women and I listen to them. I’ve met many women in your same position and it’s usually not a good outcome. I say ‘either you shit or get off the pot. Don’t lead me on’. Me I don’t play the games. I am straight up. I just want to fuck you. No strings. No U-haul. No meet the parents. No selecting the right color match for the bedroom.
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This is very good but I think the first version worked just fine too. Excellent HOT fic.
What I mean to say is that the first version was in its way more desperate and quite sad and I actually thought it rang truer.
liked the first one too…but i also liked that H didn’t sleep with Candi, she’s kinda putting a stake in the ground about what she wants…go girl!!
I liked both versions really…but I like the fact that she didn’t sleep with Candi in this one because she doesn’t need that, even if she thinks that’s what she needs…she needs TLC from somebody who cares
The Helena/Candi hookup was hot, but I prefer this alternate version. It makes perfect sense that Helena would be overwhelmed by memories of her scorching encounter with Bette.
I agree with Halfofone here, I liked both versions, for different reasons : the first one was more desperate, and also more realistic, given the situation (after all Bette still is with Jodie, Helena is legit’ in having a one-night stand with someone nice), but the second shows an Helena who already made a choice : having Bette and being true to her (it’s a difficult choice, and I think it’s less true to Helena’s character, even if it probably is the ‘right thing to do’ — now, I think that, in both case, B & H will have a lot of things to tell each other tomorrow ;-)
I’m glad that she didn’t sleep with Candi in this version. After all, she and Bette had their first sexual experience together in that bar, on that night…if she really loved her, whether Bette is with someone or not, why would Helena want to erase that perfect memory with someone elses fingers…someone elses lips on the very same night? Thanks!!
Thanks folks. I agree with you totally Seahurst. I think Helena would not that night fuck someone else because she is in love. But she’s really vulnerable and disappointed to know that Bette is now with Jodi doing whatever.I’ll contemplate this one and try to be true to Helena’s character as I know it. I have to go back to season 2 to find a comparable situation after Tina wants to date other people it doesn’t take her very long to be hitting on someone else.Yet if you look at her with Dylan. There is no way she would have picked up someone in a bar after Dylan. Perhaps she’s growing. Perhaps. I know the answer to my dilemna. NOT!
“why would Helena want to erase that perfect memory with someone elses fingers…someone elses lips on the very same night?” Perhaps that’s exactly why she would – to erase the memory.
Caught up at last! Wow, what a tale, what a tale. Frankly, I’m torn about my preferred version! It does make sense that Helena would let Candi “boink” her for the reasons stated, but I like the fact that refusing her, even in that aroused state, shows a conscious effort to stay faithful to her deep yet not fully acknowledged feelings for Bette. What–no other chapter yet?