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Do I know you? Part 7 (Revised)
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"I guess that keeps it simple. Maybe I should become more like that."
"Maybe you should". The words barely left Candi’s lips when she put her hands under Helena’s t-shirt, pulled it up and began playing with her nipple. Before Helena could protest, Candi’s mouth had moved over to her now erect nipple and her hand was rubbing the other.
Helena breathing became deeper. She breathed out, "Candi you are going to make me crash this fucking car."
Biting Helena’s nipple gently she said. "No I think you might crash this car fucking. So how far away is your apartment?"
Candi continued to work on Helena nipples. As she reached into Helena pants her hand was greet with Helena’s grip pulling her hand away. Candi laughed and moved back over to her seat. "Well so much for foreplay".
Candi’s assault on Helena’s will power continued as they entered the elevator leading up the Helena’s condo. Helena could not deny that she was incredibly aroused. The tune, "If you can’t be with the one you love then love the one you are with." came to mind. Helena could barely get the door to her condo open when she felt her borrowed t-shirt being pulled over her head. Candi pushed her up against the door and expertly made her way through Helena’s erogenous zones. Helena pulled her in close and kissed her deeply. Helena reached behind Candi’s back, unzipped her body suit and pulled it down leaving Candi’s perfect upper body exposed. It was good to feel another woman’s touches and naked body over her body.
Candi realized she could meet Helena’s physical needs without any emotional ties and she was more than willing to oblige. She pulled Helena’s pants down slightly and began to rub her clit. Helena moaned and pulled her in again for a kiss. Candi began her downward approach on Helena’s body with her mouth by next savaging her neck. Candi moved down to Helena’s breasts, both aching for attention. One got attention from Candi’s free hand the other from her mouth. She began to rub her clit harder and faster.
Helena began to flash back to her recent union with Bette. She began to question herself, why am I going this. I don’t want this woman? I don’t these meaningless encounters any more. Again she grabbed Candi’s hand away. She put her head on Candi’s shoulder and said. "As much I am sure you can satisfy me sexually this is not what I need or want right now.
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This is very good but I think the first version worked just fine too. Excellent HOT fic.
What I mean to say is that the first version was in its way more desperate and quite sad and I actually thought it rang truer.
liked the first one too…but i also liked that H didn’t sleep with Candi, she’s kinda putting a stake in the ground about what she wants…go girl!!
I liked both versions really…but I like the fact that she didn’t sleep with Candi in this one because she doesn’t need that, even if she thinks that’s what she needs…she needs TLC from somebody who cares
The Helena/Candi hookup was hot, but I prefer this alternate version. It makes perfect sense that Helena would be overwhelmed by memories of her scorching encounter with Bette.
I agree with Halfofone here, I liked both versions, for different reasons : the first one was more desperate, and also more realistic, given the situation (after all Bette still is with Jodie, Helena is legit’ in having a one-night stand with someone nice), but the second shows an Helena who already made a choice : having Bette and being true to her (it’s a difficult choice, and I think it’s less true to Helena’s character, even if it probably is the ‘right thing to do’ — now, I think that, in both case, B & H will have a lot of things to tell each other tomorrow ;-)
I’m glad that she didn’t sleep with Candi in this version. After all, she and Bette had their first sexual experience together in that bar, on that night…if she really loved her, whether Bette is with someone or not, why would Helena want to erase that perfect memory with someone elses fingers…someone elses lips on the very same night? Thanks!!
Thanks folks. I agree with you totally Seahurst. I think Helena would not that night fuck someone else because she is in love. But she’s really vulnerable and disappointed to know that Bette is now with Jodi doing whatever.I’ll contemplate this one and try to be true to Helena’s character as I know it. I have to go back to season 2 to find a comparable situation after Tina wants to date other people it doesn’t take her very long to be hitting on someone else.Yet if you look at her with Dylan. There is no way she would have picked up someone in a bar after Dylan. Perhaps she’s growing. Perhaps. I know the answer to my dilemna. NOT!
“why would Helena want to erase that perfect memory with someone elses fingers…someone elses lips on the very same night?” Perhaps that’s exactly why she would – to erase the memory.
Caught up at last! Wow, what a tale, what a tale. Frankly, I’m torn about my preferred version! It does make sense that Helena would let Candi “boink” her for the reasons stated, but I like the fact that refusing her, even in that aroused state, shows a conscious effort to stay faithful to her deep yet not fully acknowledged feelings for Bette. What–no other chapter yet?