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Well into the night, Bette gingerly slid out of her bed for some snack and she heard a small knocking on her door. She opened up and saw her boss standing outside. “Boss?” She gave him a smile so bright that surprised the man. He had not seen a smile like that in years. “Are you spying on us now?”
Jorge looked to the blonde sleeping in the bed and motioned her to let him inside.
Of course Bette stepped out of his way.
It was when Tina had woken up to the light from the hallway. Jorge talked in a very secretive, low voice that captured her attention. She tried to regulate her breathing so she could hear him better.
“I have a mission for you, tomorrow at 10 sharp go to lot 41 at the Hutchinson pier, we have a deal with the Iowa’s.”
“Ok?”
“It’s the agreement with the Irish. Most of us will be there. But I need you to go first, give them a quarter of the new import, secure the first fifteen grand in a grey saab. I and the others will go in two black mustangs. See the mustangs, then leave immediately.”
It sounded like Bette contemplated for a while but she couldn’t see them with her back to them.
“So I’ll be the bait?” Bette finally asked.
“You know I hate to use you as bait but it’s very important. I need to trust you to it, Vincent.” Jorge sounded a bit nervous. “See the mustangs, leave, understood?”
“Understood.”
Then the door closed.
She could hear Bette’s footsteps back to the bed.
It seemed like the woman stood there, trying to see if she was really asleep, so Tina did her best to relax completely.
The brunette never came back to bed that night, instead she went to sleep on the sofa.
And it left the blonde in a real struggle. She was now awake, to reality. Bette was still the drug dealer and she had the duty to report the intel in order to catch them. Besides, Jorge said that most of them would be there. It was a once-in-god-knows-how-long opportunity.
She had to, get the information out by tomorrow. Maybe Bette would escape because she was ordered to leave the scene earlier. But even if it meant that Bette could be caught, and sentenced to ten years to life, she had to do it.
Tina quietly sobbed into the pillow that night, and the smell of Bette’s hair shampoo on the pillow made her cry even harder. She just wished there had been more days, even one more, for her to fall in love with the woman she was not supposed to love.
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Ahhh god damn it thought it’d be 10 pages as well. Well, might as well break the pattern coz I’d go seriously OCD over it. A little bit longer and more actions this time.
SO to the ladies reading and commenting on my story, pikiangelica, TN1, Pie, simonem, SG, doc, lipitora, bibi, ut, wkm, mscully, cvu, martha, thank you guys for stopping by! I’m trying to measure up. Oh and the silent readers, don’t be shy! Tell me what you think.
There’s literally no other sound in the entire building now. It’s creeping me out, especially after watching the Hannibal series! Off to bed, ladies! Have a good night.
Peace :)
wasn’t expecting them do the deeds this early, but I’m more curious about how you will do the next few scence.
I really liked this chapter with the danger and sensuality. Your writing is superb, RT! Thank you so much for posting!!!
Tina is not the only one that wished for at least one more day!
Let the action begin, but make sure Bette and Tina will get out in one piece.
Don’t care what happens with the others, and i hope Henry will get his punishment.
Thank you for the quick update!
Wow! It was really unexpected. they make love soon. but I understand why you did it.
It’s be as long as, they are in contact with each other for a while, if Tina makes reference to her bosses.
or Bette will be able to escape or she will be jailed, and Tina can’t does anything.
this is certainly a terrible situation.
would not be writing a screw? :P
somehow a way that they are safe to be together?
Oh yes you have me really hooked on this one now! I really want to know where you are taking us with this story, so as they say PPS!
Loved it, thanks
Thoughts of a silent reader… This may be my Tibette story ever. I love the pace and tone that has been set, Both Tina and Bette have exposed strengths and weaknesses in this story. The need each other to survive in multiple ways and worlds. I love that you aren’t rushing the story, but letting it take place at a pace that “just seems right”. The fine details bring the reader into the story fully… the soft touch, the glances, the scents. Well, I think I have expressed too much for a silent reader. Thanks for the posting.
Wow I’m so blown away at your writing skills to even make a comment…sigh you just so brilliant as I always tell you but can’t help it…Anywhooo, damn I feel for Tina, this is a hard choice she will have to make but I’m so hoping that if Bette gets caught it turns out she some kind of spy or FBI. I don’t know just please don’t let her go down…oh and I don’t think they slept together too soon I could totally understand why they did it (get it “did it”lol) I wished it would’ve been sooner but your pace is way more better. This is a entertaining story for sure, I feel like I’m watching a movie and I love movies so bravo to you my friend
Brilliant story. I enjoyed reading it. Can’t wait to see what happens next! Please post soon!!
Loved this chapter.10 stars
This was another amazing chapter.. I love how they have this connection from way back when and that is what’s helping them survive.. I also love the sensuality of the scene, the just barely there love making which was enough to want more but be satisfying on its own..
But now to the trouble please not to much angst my heart couldn’t take it they have to be together and get through this.. And I’m loving Bette as the criminal with a heart!!!
Kudos to you for yet another beautiful story!!!