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Bette was quick to discover the smallest changes of the woman’s body and she was fascinated. What she did next was shocking to the both of them, shocking and erotic. With a thin layer in between her mouth and the blonde’s bare skin, she took one breast in and teased the little hardened knob with the tip of her tongue.
“Oh god…Be—” Tina sucked in a relatively large amount of air in attempt to regain her composure but it was of little use. She lifted her body unintentionally to welcome the teasing and flicking at her nipple. And she put the back of her hand over her mouth as Bette pinched the other rose bud with her thumb and index finger. The tongue was so warm, so soft yet so determined. She closed her eyes and embraced the euphoria.
Quite content with her ability to arouse a woman, Bette encouraged Tina to explore her a little as well. She took her hand and guided it underneath her tank top.
And the blonde was quick to pick up with the rhythm of their loving caresses. The inexperienced, curious fingers took interest in everything they found, first the contracting muscles, then the curve of the ribs, then the soft mound with a precious jewelry on it. She cupped the full and rounded breast in her hand, and felt the delicate swelling in her palm while Bette was doing all kinds of things to her that she didn’t even understand.
The brunette danced her fingers across Tina’s abdomen, and got bolder, sliding further south. Her hand found its way into the pants but respectfully, or not so respectfully, lingered at the brim of those lacy panties. When she sensed the blonde lifting her hips against her hand, she dared to go down more.
It was unimaginable, for Tina, to fathom the thought that Bette was gently rubbing at her crotch. She felt so wet, and embarrassed.
By the moisture seeping through the material, Bette could tell how much the blonde wanted her. She smirked and put on a little pressure at the swollen pearl she found through the underwear.
Tina jumped at the orgasmic touch. Then she tried to brush against Bette’s hand again to get more of it.
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Ahhh god damn it thought it’d be 10 pages as well. Well, might as well break the pattern coz I’d go seriously OCD over it. A little bit longer and more actions this time.
SO to the ladies reading and commenting on my story, pikiangelica, TN1, Pie, simonem, SG, doc, lipitora, bibi, ut, wkm, mscully, cvu, martha, thank you guys for stopping by! I’m trying to measure up. Oh and the silent readers, don’t be shy! Tell me what you think.
There’s literally no other sound in the entire building now. It’s creeping me out, especially after watching the Hannibal series! Off to bed, ladies! Have a good night.
Peace :)
wasn’t expecting them do the deeds this early, but I’m more curious about how you will do the next few scence.
I really liked this chapter with the danger and sensuality. Your writing is superb, RT! Thank you so much for posting!!!
Tina is not the only one that wished for at least one more day!
Let the action begin, but make sure Bette and Tina will get out in one piece.
Don’t care what happens with the others, and i hope Henry will get his punishment.
Thank you for the quick update!
Wow! It was really unexpected. they make love soon. but I understand why you did it.
It’s be as long as, they are in contact with each other for a while, if Tina makes reference to her bosses.
or Bette will be able to escape or she will be jailed, and Tina can’t does anything.
this is certainly a terrible situation.
would not be writing a screw? :P
somehow a way that they are safe to be together?
Oh yes you have me really hooked on this one now! I really want to know where you are taking us with this story, so as they say PPS!
Loved it, thanks
Thoughts of a silent reader… This may be my Tibette story ever. I love the pace and tone that has been set, Both Tina and Bette have exposed strengths and weaknesses in this story. The need each other to survive in multiple ways and worlds. I love that you aren’t rushing the story, but letting it take place at a pace that “just seems right”. The fine details bring the reader into the story fully… the soft touch, the glances, the scents. Well, I think I have expressed too much for a silent reader. Thanks for the posting.
Wow I’m so blown away at your writing skills to even make a comment…sigh you just so brilliant as I always tell you but can’t help it…Anywhooo, damn I feel for Tina, this is a hard choice she will have to make but I’m so hoping that if Bette gets caught it turns out she some kind of spy or FBI. I don’t know just please don’t let her go down…oh and I don’t think they slept together too soon I could totally understand why they did it (get it “did it”lol) I wished it would’ve been sooner but your pace is way more better. This is a entertaining story for sure, I feel like I’m watching a movie and I love movies so bravo to you my friend
Brilliant story. I enjoyed reading it. Can’t wait to see what happens next! Please post soon!!
Loved this chapter.10 stars
This was another amazing chapter.. I love how they have this connection from way back when and that is what’s helping them survive.. I also love the sensuality of the scene, the just barely there love making which was enough to want more but be satisfying on its own..
But now to the trouble please not to much angst my heart couldn’t take it they have to be together and get through this.. And I’m loving Bette as the criminal with a heart!!!
Kudos to you for yet another beautiful story!!!