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Criminal
Chapter 4. Do you hear me?
It had been days since she last saw the brunette woman, well since she kissed her and pushed her away. Tina couldn’t help but miss Bette, every second of every minute of every day. She just wanted to see her, and know that she was alright, although she highly doubted it would be the case. She even hung out more in Jodi’s room, tolerating the annoyed woman.
Jodi routinely went nuts and yelled at her whenever she wanted to give her a shot. The crazy woman constantly complained about the pain in her chest and required to see Vincent on a daily basis. It was the reason why Tina would still stick at her bedside after taking care of everything. She hoped Bette would come in and check on Jodi.
“What did you do, you sneaky little bitch? Where did you hide my Vincent?” Jodi tossed in her bed and glared at her nurse.
Tina sighed deeply. She wished she knew where the brunette was. “Jodi, I didn’t do anything…” That was not true, she did everything and now Bette wouldn’t even show up.
“Vincent volunteered to secure a new route. She’ll be back this afternoon.” Jorge was in the room as well, on the one hand he wanted to spend more time with his new dig, on the other hand, he felt guilty because he was still married to Jodi. To make up for that guilt, he was unusually patient. He glanced at Tina, who seemed instantly relieved for some reason. Vincent…hmmm she was quick to win over some girl’s heart. “Kristen, it’s almost time for lunch, why don’t you, um, come with me?” He flashed a smile that reached his crystal eyes.
The blonde discarded her medical gloves, wanting to shake her head. Jorge had been particularly nice to her, and she knew it was his game. She didn’t find his effortless charisma endearing, she found it annoying and intimidating. And all she wanted was this kind of attention from a brunette woman. No, she didn’t want that attention, she corrected herself, she was not allowed to have want for Bette.
On the way down to the dining hall, she ran into Henry again. He had been avoiding her since day one and lately he had been totally absent at any occasions that might involve her. “Eric. Can I talk to you for a second?” She called her, earning a look from Jorge. “You’re Polish right? I was just wondering if you know what kind of gravy to put in a Kopytka?”
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Ahhh god damn it thought it’d be 10 pages as well. Well, might as well break the pattern coz I’d go seriously OCD over it. A little bit longer and more actions this time.
SO to the ladies reading and commenting on my story, pikiangelica, TN1, Pie, simonem, SG, doc, lipitora, bibi, ut, wkm, mscully, cvu, martha, thank you guys for stopping by! I’m trying to measure up. Oh and the silent readers, don’t be shy! Tell me what you think.
There’s literally no other sound in the entire building now. It’s creeping me out, especially after watching the Hannibal series! Off to bed, ladies! Have a good night.
Peace :)
wasn’t expecting them do the deeds this early, but I’m more curious about how you will do the next few scence.
I really liked this chapter with the danger and sensuality. Your writing is superb, RT! Thank you so much for posting!!!
Tina is not the only one that wished for at least one more day!
Let the action begin, but make sure Bette and Tina will get out in one piece.
Don’t care what happens with the others, and i hope Henry will get his punishment.
Thank you for the quick update!
Wow! It was really unexpected. they make love soon. but I understand why you did it.
It’s be as long as, they are in contact with each other for a while, if Tina makes reference to her bosses.
or Bette will be able to escape or she will be jailed, and Tina can’t does anything.
this is certainly a terrible situation.
would not be writing a screw? :P
somehow a way that they are safe to be together?
Oh yes you have me really hooked on this one now! I really want to know where you are taking us with this story, so as they say PPS!
Loved it, thanks
Thoughts of a silent reader… This may be my Tibette story ever. I love the pace and tone that has been set, Both Tina and Bette have exposed strengths and weaknesses in this story. The need each other to survive in multiple ways and worlds. I love that you aren’t rushing the story, but letting it take place at a pace that “just seems right”. The fine details bring the reader into the story fully… the soft touch, the glances, the scents. Well, I think I have expressed too much for a silent reader. Thanks for the posting.
Wow I’m so blown away at your writing skills to even make a comment…sigh you just so brilliant as I always tell you but can’t help it…Anywhooo, damn I feel for Tina, this is a hard choice she will have to make but I’m so hoping that if Bette gets caught it turns out she some kind of spy or FBI. I don’t know just please don’t let her go down…oh and I don’t think they slept together too soon I could totally understand why they did it (get it “did it”lol) I wished it would’ve been sooner but your pace is way more better. This is a entertaining story for sure, I feel like I’m watching a movie and I love movies so bravo to you my friend
Brilliant story. I enjoyed reading it. Can’t wait to see what happens next! Please post soon!!
Loved this chapter.10 stars
This was another amazing chapter.. I love how they have this connection from way back when and that is what’s helping them survive.. I also love the sensuality of the scene, the just barely there love making which was enough to want more but be satisfying on its own..
But now to the trouble please not to much angst my heart couldn’t take it they have to be together and get through this.. And I’m loving Bette as the criminal with a heart!!!
Kudos to you for yet another beautiful story!!!