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Do You Remember When? – CG’s Chapter
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“Bette, sweetheart, just tell me what we talked about.” said Tina, running her hand down Bette’s chest, through the valley between her breasts, trying to soothe her.
“OK, we talked about how far we’d come since that night at the gallery. About how just one kiss turned our whole lives around and…”
“I remember telling you about how crazy I was for you, that I loved you more that day than I ever had before. Do you remember that?”
“Yeah, I remember. I also remember barely being able to concentrate on driving the car while you were telling me all of this, but also thinking that it was a strange time to be telling me that.”
“I told you because I wanted you to know that it was always, and only, you Bette. Nothing was going to become between us. Maybe that’s the mistake we’ve been making recently.” said Tina, the tinge of sadness coming back to her voice.
“I’m trying to put that right.” replied Bette, quickly.
“I know, and so am I” answered Tina, smiling right into Bette’s eyes, wanting her to know that they were in this together.
“He was really disappointed with me that we were late.”
“But wasn’t it worth it?”
“In hindsight, yes, but maybe not at the time.”
“He was so stern and imposing, but I could see the love that he had for you pour out of him, and how proud he was of you.”
“I always wanted him to be proud of me.” replied Bette, quietly, looking off into the middle distance.
They were both quiet for a few minutes after Bette revealed some of her insecurity about how she wanted her father to believe in her. Tina instinctively knew that this was not something that came naturally to Bette, even when it was just the two of them. Tina waited until Bette met her gaze again and when she did Tina ran her fingers down Bette’s cheek and further down her neck. She smiled when she felt Bette give an involuntary shiver from the sensations that Tina was creating.
“He is proud of you Bette.” whispered Tina, pulling Bette into her arms, stroking her hair, trying to reassure her.
“But he’s never accepted you, or anything about that part of my life. How could he be proud of me if he’s never going to acknowledge how important you are to me.”
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What a wonderful conversation, among other things. :-) Something we will never see on the show…Bette and Tina actually talking…saying things that can’t fit into one short sentence. Thanks!
Great dialogue…..Cannot wait 4 round 2…bio….
WOW, Melvin and sex in one chapter!!! And the three hour and eighteen minute kiss!! LOL That was really great mate. You still really don’t realise how good your writing is do you?? You know, when we talked about which chapter you wanted to write as part of our deal I certainly never expected to see and NC17 and Melvin!!! LOL Perfect B&T mate – thank you so much.
Great post… and great dialogue between Bette and Tina. They actually talk about there feelings, which is what most people do in a relationship, but I guess IC is a bit off. Who would have thought that talks about Melvin could lead to sex on the kitchen counter. Can’t wait for the update.
Great, as usual!
What a cliffy….I hope Jo let you write a follow-up :o))
Wow…so “sitting” on the counter is unhygienic….lol. BOTH of you ladies blow me away with your writing…it’s crazy. If only Melvin could see them now…and to know talking about him was foreplay…lol. Keep posting! Both of youse.
this was wonderful, the talk, the memory, the loving…wonderful
So much of what you both write, as well as as others is the talking, the communication, the description, the dialogue, banter…it all forms to create a beautiful tale. A brilliant chapter, thankyou!
wow
That was a very enjoyable post. : )
hotttttttttttttttttttttttt
Who knew talking about a diapproving parent could get Tina, Bette, and the rest of us so hot? Unhygenic? Well, the old folks have a saying that everybody eats a peck of dirt in their life. I’m willing to bet Bette’s partaken of Tina’s ass a time or two already, so what’s the problem?
that was very sweet and very funny PPS
Love the mixture of sex and talk! Round 2 coming up???
Awesome chapter – what a great conversation and I love where it led them and us. thanks for teaming up on this one.
Excellent, the dialogue, their interaction and the love they share, if only this will happen sometime in S4, you doing great!
Love this now lets see how Jobadge does. You did very well. considing you were writing about Melvin thanks
Wow, Bette is standing up to her dad to protect the love of her life. I just wish that you would write more happy stories about B&T not sad ones.
Melvin and hot sex–who would have expected those two in the same chapter? Hope you get to do a follow-up!
Well, citygirl, gotta say, you certainly have guts! It takes a hell of a writer to accept the challenge to write one chapter of Jobadge’s “Do you remember when…”! And I won’t lie by saying that I didn’t have myself some expectations…;) Well, I think it’s safe to say that you’ve more than definitely met them!!! It was a great chapter, tender, loving, hot, but also very smart and, I’ve gotta say, very loyal to Jo’s storyline!!! So, congratulations to you, and thanks a lot for this moment of pure pleasure! K.
The topics of Melvin and sex remind me of “Melvin at the Beach” or whatever B&T named that sex tape in AmandaMG’s story. xD Nice chapter!
That was a wonderful chapter, Citygirl! Thank you so much!
excellent story. I’m missing your writing, pleas come back with anoher story.
Melvin was a asshole some times but he just come from a different time were lesbians weren’t really the right thing especially not a biracial couple, but he eventually he came along just a lil too late, and Tina still love Bette despite it all