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Do you remember when… Chapter 11
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Do you remember when… Chapter 11
Tina stood, watching the woman she was still so totally in love with, how could her feelings be deeper now seven years on than they ever were, she smiled to herself, the reason popping into her mind instantly, ‘it’s because every day I fall that little bit more, and seven years of falling, that’s a deep place to be…’
She allowed her eyes to wander over the vision that was her soul mate, she started at the bottom, the bare feet peeking out from under the faded denim, her eyes moved higher as her eyes became drawn to the highly illegal magnetism that was Bette Porter in Levis.
Bette turned the tap off, checking the water in the sink as she prepared to wash their dinner dishes, she turned suddenly, feeling Tina’s gaze on her, feeling her presence as they always could with one another.
She looked at Tina, standing by the kitchen counter, resting one hip against the side, one arm folded across herself, the other holding her partially finished glass of wine. Her eyes, looked glazed, her mind far away.
“T…”
Tina’s eyes took in the clinging denim, so close to Bette’s legs, caressing her thighs, snugly furnishing her curves with a delicacy that Tina could taste, she licked her lips as her eyes roamed the curve of Bette’s bottom, the small frayed hole at the base of one cheek, the hole she often slipped her finger into, just to touch the erotic zone that made her head swim.
Bette smiled as she watched Tina’s eyes travel, in all of their seven years together, it was always the Levis that seemed to affect Tina the most, she could be dressed in the most expensive outfit ever, and Tina would always whisper that although she thought she looked amazing, she preferred the Levis… every single time. “T…”
Tina looked up, shaking her head slightly, clearing her thoughts, “huh…”
“Are you okay?” Bette asked with a smirk.
“Uh… yeah… sure, why do you ask…?”
“You looked miles away…”
Their eyes met and Tina smiled, “I was admiring the view…”
“Come here babe… Touch the view…” Bette whispered.
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Hey..Im trying to think of what this chapter conjures up in my mind….apart from the very obvious..its passion…and sensuality…..but at the risk of sounding like a complete mush!….my first thought was magical….it just has that certain something…Sharing a private emotion..or place, has to be considered a special gift…and you`ve more than created that in this chapter….And then theres the Levis!!!!..lol…Really beauitful…Thanks!
WOW… Thanks for sharing your beautiful vision of love. To LOVE cheers!
SWEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTT longer
God, you write so well!
Jo, you’ve got me reading slowly again. And it is not due to dyslexia.
I love this Jo…just love it!
Jo, where is this place? It sounds so beautiful….is it real? Do they sell tickets? Is there a memorial that says, ‘Tibette was here’? There was such a beautiful melodic flow of nature and emotion.
This as fantastic….zi love this and the third request…U r a very clever writer…there is no need to disable the rating…5 + all the way….
Wow that was amazning and beautiful, love it. Let see whats next, thanks!
That was breathtaking JB! Thanks to you, now every time I see a stained glass window I will be forced to imagine a picture of your “healthy obsession” in my mind. Your writing in exquisite; and this story is divine. More…please!
WOW!!!! The visual imagery was over powering. In my mind I could see the blue color of the sky, the green grass growing throughout the scene, the birds flying and singing to their mates, and the gentle breeze of the lazy afternoon. Then the beautiful visual painting within the churches walls of the two women’s arms wraped around each other as their soft lips join together. Bette’s levis to you is like Tina’s black bra is to me, an obession.
-You have an “interesting” concept of what a “healthy obsession” is, Jo! lol Once again, a beautiful union, filled with love. passion and vulnerability!
You write T&B to perfection, this was such a deep, and very beautiful written chapter, you peel away at the layers and as always your written word for these two characters is truly amazing. Thank you.
Hey Smasher (thanks JT LOL) – I just couldn’t start the day before reading this….and don’t worry mate, it IS a healthy obsession and we definitely share it :o)) I can’t find the right words to describe the feelings I’ve running throught me after reading this!!!!! Thanks mate, you know I love The Jeans :o)) and is The Look next LOL….
Bette, Levis, Temple! makes for a great story in my book. I agree 100% that there is something about Bette Porter in a pair of jeans, I mean the woman can work a business suit but she totally brings life to a pair of boring denims.
Wow! Breathtakingly beautiful! Your writing just takes my breath away! Thanks Jo.
i want to believe that this kind of love really exists *sigh* wonderful chapter
Of course my dirty mind was thinking, “OMG they are so going to defile the church.” ;) I think we all have a places or places where we can go and think and find peace. When I was in college there was a stone near the chapel where I often sat and thought. Then at night I could walk off to the right toward the rear of New Main and look out over the small town. The way some of the lights were formed seemed to spell the word “Joy.” But I have yet to find a place that’s totally private. Beautiful chapter, Jo!
I seem to find hope and the utmost joy in this post. Fantastic as always, Jo.
OMG….what a chapter!!!! You’re the best, but don’t let it get to your head LOL……see a talking Christmas dec. :o))
Don’t you EVER get cured for this little obsession of yours for a certain pair of Levi’s!!! It would kill us all! ;)… Jo, once again you had me! Totally and beautifully… But hey, this happens every single time, so… Thanks a million!