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Do you remember when… Chapter 11
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Tina smiled as she put her glass down, she pushed herself off the counter as their eyes maintained their intense contact, she slowly and deliberately walked the few steps toward Bette, the closer she got the bigger the smile got that was meeting her gaze.
She stood behind her, as Bette’s soapy hands stilled in the hot water at the sink; Tina slipped her arms around Bette’s waist as she rested her cheek against the back of Bette’s shoulder.
“Mmmm…” came Tina’s contented sigh.
“You okay babe…”
“Yeah, I am now I have you in my arms…”
“I love you sweetie…”
“I love you too babe, and I love you even more today…”
Bette smiled, she knew what was coming, “and why do you love me more today…?”
“I think you know why…”
“I want you to tell me T…”
Tina smiled, she moved her hand and placed it on Bette’s rear, her hand gracing the surface softly, her fingertips moving over the curve, her palm cupping the full cheek, her index finger circling the frayed hole, before slipping beneath the material as she gently touched the sensitive skin encased in the faded denim, they always played the same game, and it made her smile every time, “I love you in Levis…”
“I love you in nothing…”
Tina smiled at the words, “I think that can be arranged…” Tina nuzzled Bette’s neck as her hands continued to wander.
“I think I had best finish these dishes…”
“No… I think you should take you time, so I can take mine exploring my favourite landscape…”
“I think that maybe we should have an early night tonight babe…” Bette said quietly as the effects of Tina’s gentle touch was having and impact on her concentration, a task that needed no concentration… washing up… and she couldn’t concentrate, the breathing on her neck sending shivers down her back, the hairs on the back of her neck standing on end.
“Bette…”
“Mmmm…”
“Do we have anything planned tomorrow…?”
Bette opened her eyes, wondering why Tina was asking such a question at this time, “I don’t think so babe…”
“Would you take me somewhere…?”
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Hey..Im trying to think of what this chapter conjures up in my mind….apart from the very obvious..its passion…and sensuality…..but at the risk of sounding like a complete mush!….my first thought was magical….it just has that certain something…Sharing a private emotion..or place, has to be considered a special gift…and you`ve more than created that in this chapter….And then theres the Levis!!!!..lol…Really beauitful…Thanks!
WOW… Thanks for sharing your beautiful vision of love. To LOVE cheers!
SWEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTT longer
God, you write so well!
Jo, you’ve got me reading slowly again. And it is not due to dyslexia.
I love this Jo…just love it!
Jo, where is this place? It sounds so beautiful….is it real? Do they sell tickets? Is there a memorial that says, ‘Tibette was here’? There was such a beautiful melodic flow of nature and emotion.
This as fantastic….zi love this and the third request…U r a very clever writer…there is no need to disable the rating…5 + all the way….
Wow that was amazning and beautiful, love it. Let see whats next, thanks!
That was breathtaking JB! Thanks to you, now every time I see a stained glass window I will be forced to imagine a picture of your “healthy obsession” in my mind. Your writing in exquisite; and this story is divine. More…please!
WOW!!!! The visual imagery was over powering. In my mind I could see the blue color of the sky, the green grass growing throughout the scene, the birds flying and singing to their mates, and the gentle breeze of the lazy afternoon. Then the beautiful visual painting within the churches walls of the two women’s arms wraped around each other as their soft lips join together. Bette’s levis to you is like Tina’s black bra is to me, an obession.
-You have an “interesting” concept of what a “healthy obsession” is, Jo! lol Once again, a beautiful union, filled with love. passion and vulnerability!
You write T&B to perfection, this was such a deep, and very beautiful written chapter, you peel away at the layers and as always your written word for these two characters is truly amazing. Thank you.
Hey Smasher (thanks JT LOL) – I just couldn’t start the day before reading this….and don’t worry mate, it IS a healthy obsession and we definitely share it :o)) I can’t find the right words to describe the feelings I’ve running throught me after reading this!!!!! Thanks mate, you know I love The Jeans :o)) and is The Look next LOL….
Bette, Levis, Temple! makes for a great story in my book. I agree 100% that there is something about Bette Porter in a pair of jeans, I mean the woman can work a business suit but she totally brings life to a pair of boring denims.
Wow! Breathtakingly beautiful! Your writing just takes my breath away! Thanks Jo.
i want to believe that this kind of love really exists *sigh* wonderful chapter
Of course my dirty mind was thinking, “OMG they are so going to defile the church.” ;) I think we all have a places or places where we can go and think and find peace. When I was in college there was a stone near the chapel where I often sat and thought. Then at night I could walk off to the right toward the rear of New Main and look out over the small town. The way some of the lights were formed seemed to spell the word “Joy.” But I have yet to find a place that’s totally private. Beautiful chapter, Jo!
I seem to find hope and the utmost joy in this post. Fantastic as always, Jo.
OMG….what a chapter!!!! You’re the best, but don’t let it get to your head LOL……see a talking Christmas dec. :o))
Don’t you EVER get cured for this little obsession of yours for a certain pair of Levi’s!!! It would kill us all! ;)… Jo, once again you had me! Totally and beautifully… But hey, this happens every single time, so… Thanks a million!