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Do you remember when… Chapter 11
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Bette smiled, “what do you mean?”
“Nobody has ever made me feel like you do…, in every single way possible, you have changed my life like I never thought possible Bette Porter…, I’ve never felt so in love, never felt so safe, never felt so looked after… I have certainly never had such an intense orgasm, fully clothed. Actually,” Tina looked deep into Bette’s eyes, “I don’t think I have ever experienced anything quite like you in my entire life…” Tina averted her eyes slightly, not sure if she should say what was coursing through her mind at that very moment.
“Hey, what’s up,” Bette asked, seeing the faraway look that suddenly clouded Tina’s eyes, “tell me what’s on your mind T, you know you can tell me anything, don’t you, anything at all. I’m not going anywhere babe, I’m right here for you.”
Tina gave a little laugh as she looked back at Bette, “Now who is being perceptive eh! Actually I was …..Uh…..just thinking that you were so easy to fall in love with, but uh…… I’m not sure I wanted to be another notch on that Lesbian Jedi belt, it’s still so new between us Bette, it scares me how deeply I’ve fallen in love with you…”
Tina’s honesty hit Bette with a force, confirming that her status in the lesbian community was not one that she much liked.
“Tina, I already told you that you broke that spell the moment you walked into my life…, the Lesbian Jedi is no more… The Jedi has officially retired…, and I was never the Lesbian Jedi anyway, I think Shane holds that crown…”
Tina smiled at the words, “babe, Shane was handed that crown by you and only you…”
“T… honey… I don’t want to be anywhere else but here, with you.”
“I really love you Bette… and I love your temple, it’s the most amazing place I’ve ever seen, and thank you so much for bringing me here, I can’t tell you what it means to me that you shared this precious place with me… but there are three requests that I have, and its serious…, and if you don’t agree then I simply don’t see any future for us…”
Bette visibly gulped, the words striking concern deep within her, the serious tone to Tina’s voice unsettling her.
“Three requests… what… what are they T…?”
“Promise me…?”
“I promise…” she internally vowed she would agree to anything to keep Tina in her life, she simply couldn’t face life without her. She would do anything…
“Promise me you’ll bring to your temple again…”
“I promise…”
“Make love to me again…”
“Absolutely…” Bette smiled as she leaned in, placing her lips against Tina’s, the softness and bruising still apparent from their earlier dual.
Bette suddenly broke their kiss, looking at Tina with her brow creased, “you said three requests, that was only two…”
“Yeah… I did… didn’t I…?” Tina smiled as her hands roamed Bette’s thigh, her hand meandering around, cupping Bette’s rear in her hand, squeezing the cheek as she looked into Bette’s eyes. “If… you… ever… throw these Levis away…, I’m afraid I will have no choice but to leave you…”
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Hey..Im trying to think of what this chapter conjures up in my mind….apart from the very obvious..its passion…and sensuality…..but at the risk of sounding like a complete mush!….my first thought was magical….it just has that certain something…Sharing a private emotion..or place, has to be considered a special gift…and you`ve more than created that in this chapter….And then theres the Levis!!!!..lol…Really beauitful…Thanks!
WOW… Thanks for sharing your beautiful vision of love. To LOVE cheers!
SWEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTT longer
God, you write so well!
Jo, you’ve got me reading slowly again. And it is not due to dyslexia.
I love this Jo…just love it!
Jo, where is this place? It sounds so beautiful….is it real? Do they sell tickets? Is there a memorial that says, ‘Tibette was here’? There was such a beautiful melodic flow of nature and emotion.
This as fantastic….zi love this and the third request…U r a very clever writer…there is no need to disable the rating…5 + all the way….
Wow that was amazning and beautiful, love it. Let see whats next, thanks!
That was breathtaking JB! Thanks to you, now every time I see a stained glass window I will be forced to imagine a picture of your “healthy obsession” in my mind. Your writing in exquisite; and this story is divine. More…please!
WOW!!!! The visual imagery was over powering. In my mind I could see the blue color of the sky, the green grass growing throughout the scene, the birds flying and singing to their mates, and the gentle breeze of the lazy afternoon. Then the beautiful visual painting within the churches walls of the two women’s arms wraped around each other as their soft lips join together. Bette’s levis to you is like Tina’s black bra is to me, an obession.
-You have an “interesting” concept of what a “healthy obsession” is, Jo! lol Once again, a beautiful union, filled with love. passion and vulnerability!
You write T&B to perfection, this was such a deep, and very beautiful written chapter, you peel away at the layers and as always your written word for these two characters is truly amazing. Thank you.
Hey Smasher (thanks JT LOL) – I just couldn’t start the day before reading this….and don’t worry mate, it IS a healthy obsession and we definitely share it :o)) I can’t find the right words to describe the feelings I’ve running throught me after reading this!!!!! Thanks mate, you know I love The Jeans :o)) and is The Look next LOL….
Bette, Levis, Temple! makes for a great story in my book. I agree 100% that there is something about Bette Porter in a pair of jeans, I mean the woman can work a business suit but she totally brings life to a pair of boring denims.
Wow! Breathtakingly beautiful! Your writing just takes my breath away! Thanks Jo.
i want to believe that this kind of love really exists *sigh* wonderful chapter
Of course my dirty mind was thinking, “OMG they are so going to defile the church.” ;) I think we all have a places or places where we can go and think and find peace. When I was in college there was a stone near the chapel where I often sat and thought. Then at night I could walk off to the right toward the rear of New Main and look out over the small town. The way some of the lights were formed seemed to spell the word “Joy.” But I have yet to find a place that’s totally private. Beautiful chapter, Jo!
I seem to find hope and the utmost joy in this post. Fantastic as always, Jo.
OMG….what a chapter!!!! You’re the best, but don’t let it get to your head LOL……see a talking Christmas dec. :o))
Don’t you EVER get cured for this little obsession of yours for a certain pair of Levi’s!!! It would kill us all! ;)… Jo, once again you had me! Totally and beautifully… But hey, this happens every single time, so… Thanks a million!