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Do you remember when… Chapter 11
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“Of course, where do you want to go…?”
“Will you take me to your temple…?”
Bette smiled; they hadn’t been there in a while, “of course…”
“I’m so glad you kept all of your promises Bette…”
“Always babe… always…”
Tina kissed the back of Bette’s neck as she recalled the first time Bette has taken her there, the week after she had returned from the disastrous visit to her parents, the week after she had pushed Bette away, the week after she came back, not able to go on any longer without her soul mate.
Bette had wanted to take Tina to a special place, somewhere where she knew they could have peace and quiet, but also a place that was very special to her, a place that she came to when things around her got too much.
A place that she had never told anyone about, a place she had never before shared with anyone, a place she hadn’t even thought about in the recent months since meeting Tina, such was the whirlwind that their intense romance was.
This place always brought her peace, harmony and sanctuary, she always came away looking at a situation in a completely different light, regardless of whether she had resolved the mental issue or not, she came away stronger, ready to face whatever was thrown at her.
And today, she wanted that for Tina too, she wanted Tina to feel stronger, ready to face the unknown, ready to face a life without the support of her very own loving family.
It was just them now, and even though they had made their plans for moving in together, their happy, passionate celebration of the decision to move in together, she knew Tina grieved for her family, grieved for the harshness of the words her father had spoken, and although her she had her mothers support, she knew that things would never be quite the same again.
Bette had held her as she had spoken of the dinner in which her father had spat the words, ‘she’s a fucking dyke’, and it hurt, she had remembered the intake of breath, the instant tears and anger. The anger that had been directed at her as the woman she had fallen head over heels in love with had pushed her away.
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Hey..Im trying to think of what this chapter conjures up in my mind….apart from the very obvious..its passion…and sensuality…..but at the risk of sounding like a complete mush!….my first thought was magical….it just has that certain something…Sharing a private emotion..or place, has to be considered a special gift…and you`ve more than created that in this chapter….And then theres the Levis!!!!..lol…Really beauitful…Thanks!
WOW… Thanks for sharing your beautiful vision of love. To LOVE cheers!
SWEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTT longer
God, you write so well!
Jo, you’ve got me reading slowly again. And it is not due to dyslexia.
I love this Jo…just love it!
Jo, where is this place? It sounds so beautiful….is it real? Do they sell tickets? Is there a memorial that says, ‘Tibette was here’? There was such a beautiful melodic flow of nature and emotion.
This as fantastic….zi love this and the third request…U r a very clever writer…there is no need to disable the rating…5 + all the way….
Wow that was amazning and beautiful, love it. Let see whats next, thanks!
That was breathtaking JB! Thanks to you, now every time I see a stained glass window I will be forced to imagine a picture of your “healthy obsession” in my mind. Your writing in exquisite; and this story is divine. More…please!
WOW!!!! The visual imagery was over powering. In my mind I could see the blue color of the sky, the green grass growing throughout the scene, the birds flying and singing to their mates, and the gentle breeze of the lazy afternoon. Then the beautiful visual painting within the churches walls of the two women’s arms wraped around each other as their soft lips join together. Bette’s levis to you is like Tina’s black bra is to me, an obession.
-You have an “interesting” concept of what a “healthy obsession” is, Jo! lol Once again, a beautiful union, filled with love. passion and vulnerability!
You write T&B to perfection, this was such a deep, and very beautiful written chapter, you peel away at the layers and as always your written word for these two characters is truly amazing. Thank you.
Hey Smasher (thanks JT LOL) – I just couldn’t start the day before reading this….and don’t worry mate, it IS a healthy obsession and we definitely share it :o)) I can’t find the right words to describe the feelings I’ve running throught me after reading this!!!!! Thanks mate, you know I love The Jeans :o)) and is The Look next LOL….
Bette, Levis, Temple! makes for a great story in my book. I agree 100% that there is something about Bette Porter in a pair of jeans, I mean the woman can work a business suit but she totally brings life to a pair of boring denims.
Wow! Breathtakingly beautiful! Your writing just takes my breath away! Thanks Jo.
i want to believe that this kind of love really exists *sigh* wonderful chapter
Of course my dirty mind was thinking, “OMG they are so going to defile the church.” ;) I think we all have a places or places where we can go and think and find peace. When I was in college there was a stone near the chapel where I often sat and thought. Then at night I could walk off to the right toward the rear of New Main and look out over the small town. The way some of the lights were formed seemed to spell the word “Joy.” But I have yet to find a place that’s totally private. Beautiful chapter, Jo!
I seem to find hope and the utmost joy in this post. Fantastic as always, Jo.
OMG….what a chapter!!!! You’re the best, but don’t let it get to your head LOL……see a talking Christmas dec. :o))
Don’t you EVER get cured for this little obsession of yours for a certain pair of Levi’s!!! It would kill us all! ;)… Jo, once again you had me! Totally and beautifully… But hey, this happens every single time, so… Thanks a million!