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Do you remember when… Chapter 11
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Bette’s body had never reacted like this with anyone she had ever been with, the instant their lips met, her blood started pumping to her nether regions causing the intense pulsating that was now confined to within a very small area that just happened to be pressed against Tina’s hip bone.
Bette felt Tina move against her thigh so she gently lifted her foot in order to bring her leg higher, digging her heel in the ground, giving her anchorage as her thigh pressed tighter against Tina’s centre, the movement was welcomed by the throaty noise Tina made, Bette’s hands snaked their way down Tina’s back so they eventually landed at their destination to grasp Tina’s bottom, gently encouraging the rocking of her body.
Their lips parted, their eyes met, intensely gazing into the depth of each other. Tina raised herself up slightly, pressing down on Bette’s thigh, her eyes gently rolling with the waves of passion overtaking her body taking her to another plain, as the gentle jerking movements confirmed their destination had been reached, she looked into Bette’s eyes, her body’s movements stilled, slight gasps coming from her heaving chest. Bette’s centre reacting to the sight before her, she curved her back slightly raising herself against Tina, their eyes still locked as Tina then felt the waves overtake Bette, her chin quivered, her breath rasping in her throat, her body jerked as her orgasm reached its peak. Bette’s eyes filled with the salty solution, emotion overtaking the intensity of their fully clothed union.
“Come here” Tina’s softly spoken words and arms comforted Bette, they laid in each others arms saying nothing, drifting in the moment between them, in the quietness, the only sounds was their breathing and the birdsong in the background, the splattering of reds, greens and blues from the stained glass window dancing on the grass beside them.
“Are you ok sweetie?” Tina gently whispered into Bette’s ear. Bette could feel the gentle warmth of Tina’s breath, goose bumps prickling on her skin with the intensity of the warmth against her flesh.
Bette moved slightly to look into Tina’s eyes. “Yeah, I’m more than ok, how about you?”
“I have the most amazing woman in my arms and I can honestly say I have never felt better.” Tina moved back slightly, looking deeply into Bette’s eyes, “what is it about you, huh?” she smirked.
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Hey..Im trying to think of what this chapter conjures up in my mind….apart from the very obvious..its passion…and sensuality…..but at the risk of sounding like a complete mush!….my first thought was magical….it just has that certain something…Sharing a private emotion..or place, has to be considered a special gift…and you`ve more than created that in this chapter….And then theres the Levis!!!!..lol…Really beauitful…Thanks!
WOW… Thanks for sharing your beautiful vision of love. To LOVE cheers!
SWEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTT longer
God, you write so well!
Jo, you’ve got me reading slowly again. And it is not due to dyslexia.
I love this Jo…just love it!
Jo, where is this place? It sounds so beautiful….is it real? Do they sell tickets? Is there a memorial that says, ‘Tibette was here’? There was such a beautiful melodic flow of nature and emotion.
This as fantastic….zi love this and the third request…U r a very clever writer…there is no need to disable the rating…5 + all the way….
Wow that was amazning and beautiful, love it. Let see whats next, thanks!
That was breathtaking JB! Thanks to you, now every time I see a stained glass window I will be forced to imagine a picture of your “healthy obsession” in my mind. Your writing in exquisite; and this story is divine. More…please!
WOW!!!! The visual imagery was over powering. In my mind I could see the blue color of the sky, the green grass growing throughout the scene, the birds flying and singing to their mates, and the gentle breeze of the lazy afternoon. Then the beautiful visual painting within the churches walls of the two women’s arms wraped around each other as their soft lips join together. Bette’s levis to you is like Tina’s black bra is to me, an obession.
-You have an “interesting” concept of what a “healthy obsession” is, Jo! lol Once again, a beautiful union, filled with love. passion and vulnerability!
You write T&B to perfection, this was such a deep, and very beautiful written chapter, you peel away at the layers and as always your written word for these two characters is truly amazing. Thank you.
Hey Smasher (thanks JT LOL) – I just couldn’t start the day before reading this….and don’t worry mate, it IS a healthy obsession and we definitely share it :o)) I can’t find the right words to describe the feelings I’ve running throught me after reading this!!!!! Thanks mate, you know I love The Jeans :o)) and is The Look next LOL….
Bette, Levis, Temple! makes for a great story in my book. I agree 100% that there is something about Bette Porter in a pair of jeans, I mean the woman can work a business suit but she totally brings life to a pair of boring denims.
Wow! Breathtakingly beautiful! Your writing just takes my breath away! Thanks Jo.
i want to believe that this kind of love really exists *sigh* wonderful chapter
Of course my dirty mind was thinking, “OMG they are so going to defile the church.” ;) I think we all have a places or places where we can go and think and find peace. When I was in college there was a stone near the chapel where I often sat and thought. Then at night I could walk off to the right toward the rear of New Main and look out over the small town. The way some of the lights were formed seemed to spell the word “Joy.” But I have yet to find a place that’s totally private. Beautiful chapter, Jo!
I seem to find hope and the utmost joy in this post. Fantastic as always, Jo.
OMG….what a chapter!!!! You’re the best, but don’t let it get to your head LOL……see a talking Christmas dec. :o))
Don’t you EVER get cured for this little obsession of yours for a certain pair of Levi’s!!! It would kill us all! ;)… Jo, once again you had me! Totally and beautifully… But hey, this happens every single time, so… Thanks a million!