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Do you remember when… Chapter 11
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Tina rested her forehead against Bette’s, their breathing still ragged from the intensity of their kiss, she looked to Bette’s face, seeing her eyes closed as she recovered herself from Tina’s kiss.
Tina moved her mouth back to the place it belonged, on Bette’s lips. Their lips moving in togetherness, Tina let her tongue gently move across Bette lips, requesting access.
Bette’s lips parted encouraging the moist probing tongue from Tina to explore the confines of Bette’s mouth.
Tina pushed on Bette’s shoulder so she slowly started to lay back against the lush green grass within the confines of the Temple, the birds continued to sing a lovers song from the trees above, as Bette moved back further Tina’s body followed, resting across the upper half of Bette’s body, Tina could feel their breasts pressing together, her heart beating faster every second, she could feel the pounding in her ears. A raw intense ache had begun to make its presence felt in the confines of Tina’s jeans, as she moved upward on Bette’s body her jeans became tighter around her groin, giving an easing pressure to her ache.
Their lips and tongues continued the dual; Bette’s arms encircled Tina to bring her closer, higher up on her body, their breathing becoming more ragged. Tina’s hand wandering across Bette’s shoulders, over the stretched skin of her clavicle’s as her beautiful neck craned to reach Tina’s lips, Tina’s hands moving up Bette’s neck, caressing every curve and vein straining with the lust filled blood coursing through her body, her hands reached behind Bette’s neck, her fingers entwining within the dark curls, grasping handfuls of hair to bring their mouths closer than they could possibly be already.
Tina broke the kiss looking into the deep onyx lust filled pools below her, “My god Bette, I don’t think I have ever wanted anyone as much as I want you right now,” Bette’s moan of a response only ensured Tina’s lips came crashing down once again for their battle.
Tina moved her leg so that it rested in between Bette’s, straddling one of Bette’s legs, she could feel the tight thigh muscle clenching on contact with her centre. Bette was producing almost animalistic noises from the confines of their co-joined mouths. Tina’s raw ache was intensifying with every slightest move and noise, now turning into an uncontrollable throb against Bette’s thigh.
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Hey..Im trying to think of what this chapter conjures up in my mind….apart from the very obvious..its passion…and sensuality…..but at the risk of sounding like a complete mush!….my first thought was magical….it just has that certain something…Sharing a private emotion..or place, has to be considered a special gift…and you`ve more than created that in this chapter….And then theres the Levis!!!!..lol…Really beauitful…Thanks!
WOW… Thanks for sharing your beautiful vision of love. To LOVE cheers!
SWEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTT longer
God, you write so well!
Jo, you’ve got me reading slowly again. And it is not due to dyslexia.
I love this Jo…just love it!
Jo, where is this place? It sounds so beautiful….is it real? Do they sell tickets? Is there a memorial that says, ‘Tibette was here’? There was such a beautiful melodic flow of nature and emotion.
This as fantastic….zi love this and the third request…U r a very clever writer…there is no need to disable the rating…5 + all the way….
Wow that was amazning and beautiful, love it. Let see whats next, thanks!
That was breathtaking JB! Thanks to you, now every time I see a stained glass window I will be forced to imagine a picture of your “healthy obsession” in my mind. Your writing in exquisite; and this story is divine. More…please!
WOW!!!! The visual imagery was over powering. In my mind I could see the blue color of the sky, the green grass growing throughout the scene, the birds flying and singing to their mates, and the gentle breeze of the lazy afternoon. Then the beautiful visual painting within the churches walls of the two women’s arms wraped around each other as their soft lips join together. Bette’s levis to you is like Tina’s black bra is to me, an obession.
-You have an “interesting” concept of what a “healthy obsession” is, Jo! lol Once again, a beautiful union, filled with love. passion and vulnerability!
You write T&B to perfection, this was such a deep, and very beautiful written chapter, you peel away at the layers and as always your written word for these two characters is truly amazing. Thank you.
Hey Smasher (thanks JT LOL) – I just couldn’t start the day before reading this….and don’t worry mate, it IS a healthy obsession and we definitely share it :o)) I can’t find the right words to describe the feelings I’ve running throught me after reading this!!!!! Thanks mate, you know I love The Jeans :o)) and is The Look next LOL….
Bette, Levis, Temple! makes for a great story in my book. I agree 100% that there is something about Bette Porter in a pair of jeans, I mean the woman can work a business suit but she totally brings life to a pair of boring denims.
Wow! Breathtakingly beautiful! Your writing just takes my breath away! Thanks Jo.
i want to believe that this kind of love really exists *sigh* wonderful chapter
Of course my dirty mind was thinking, “OMG they are so going to defile the church.” ;) I think we all have a places or places where we can go and think and find peace. When I was in college there was a stone near the chapel where I often sat and thought. Then at night I could walk off to the right toward the rear of New Main and look out over the small town. The way some of the lights were formed seemed to spell the word “Joy.” But I have yet to find a place that’s totally private. Beautiful chapter, Jo!
I seem to find hope and the utmost joy in this post. Fantastic as always, Jo.
OMG….what a chapter!!!! You’re the best, but don’t let it get to your head LOL……see a talking Christmas dec. :o))
Don’t you EVER get cured for this little obsession of yours for a certain pair of Levi’s!!! It would kill us all! ;)… Jo, once again you had me! Totally and beautifully… But hey, this happens every single time, so… Thanks a million!