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Do you remember when… Chapter 9
Bette edged her throbbing body forward, her hand gently parting the curtains to reveal her lover in the flesh. She could see that Tina’s eyes were closed, her breath held in her chest at the marvel before, her heart surged with so much love at that very moment. She quietly walked completely around the platform, taking in every single angle, her eyes roaming every inch of the creamy skin.
When Bette reached Tina’s feet, she leant forward and placed a tender kiss upon each sole, relishing each toe and running her tongue the length of her foot, along the outer edge toward her ankle, gently teasing the soft area beside her Achilles, she kept her hands behind her back, almost afraid that if she touched Tina she would come completely undone, she wanted to taste, to savour, to devour, to orally caress, to kiss and love every inch.
Tina felt the awareness of Bette as soon as she entered the room, goose bumps formulating across her skin with the mere presence of Bette near her, she gasped when she felt the first kiss upon her foot and the following tiny kisses on her toes, she smiled to herself as she knew how Bette had ‘a thing’ about kissing her toes, she would always make a point of spending time nibbling her toes, and it felt glorious, she could feel her tongue slowly running up the back of her leg, the licks interspersed with gentle kisses, she felt Bette halt at the back of her knees, taking her time at this sensual, erotic area, she could feel how Bette’s soft lips and tongue worked together along the crease, she felt how Bette blew on the wet trail she had left only to lick against the goose bumps that appeared from her breath.
Bette was nearing one of her favourite places, the crease immediately below Tina’s bottom, as she reached it she ran her tongue the complete length toward her centre, allowing her nose to also caress the skin, as she neared the middle, she slowed, breathing in, allowing the aromatic essence of her lover to permeate her nostrils, her eyes closed at the unique familiar scent, her already throbbing body doing somersaults as the effect took hold of her. She dipped her tongue at the centre where the tops of her legs met, the tip meeting the maker of the scent, the taste making her eyes roll, her throat to constrict and a groan try to escape.
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(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
Hey…what a chapter…well you managed to bring my favorite chapter of all time……And if at all possible make it even better!…The Portard porn really should have a health warning on it ..not only for Bette..but for the rest of us!.lol..Ok So Bette was caught in a compromising position…but ya know!…Tina was teasing her way more than she could handle…so really i think it only right that Tina finish what she started…and What a finish..lol…as always loved this!…
Oh…my…gosh! That was so hot! I should have known better than to read this at work…. Can’t wait for the next installment.
I forgot to breathe while i was reading that.That was tooooo Hot.Thud job. The gallery scene was so intensely Hot, and erotic. And The portard porn collectionTinaloving..Oh my Gawd. Loss for words.B&T are freaks(iloveit). I need air!
Oh how I remember that day at the gallery oh so well..actually i just read that chapter not so long ago..I love your stories…Thanks for posting..I look forward to them everytime..
I can’t believe I’m reading this at work. I swear I was holding my breath. Here I am trying to have lunch thinking I’ll just check and see whats been posted. OMG, the rest of the day is going to be so long.
Poor Bette was caigh doing what come naturally when you want your soul mate and lover and she isn’t there That was one of the best charter your wrote and you brough it back in such a beautiful way. thanks
i’m speechless…….maybe later my mind can process this, for now it’s blank…all i can think of is Holy f***
Damn woman! *Thud* Mouth is dy and i think I stopped breathing for a minute! Post soon!
HOT!!!!! HOT!!!!!!! HOT!!!!!!!!
That was the most erotic thing I’ve ever read.
This chapter only is the anthology of erotic “situations” and grandiose writing. You’re a maestro at building the scene and bringing it to its apogee, your description of the feelings going through their mind at those times leaves me breathless. Bravo!
What a great chapter. Love the story.
OMFG that was awesome! You made the little hairs stand up on the back of my neck! No one can write the Tibette chemistry like you do Jo! Yep, nobody even comes close! JB your the best!
Damn….this was pretty damn HOT!! – I have to add that while Tina wears her Nike Shox for running, I wear mine for fashion. A girl must always be cute!! ^_^
Jobadge, you’re AWESOME. That was????????? Go girl.
Damn, damn that was just toooo hoooot. I really need a copy of that tape of the very erotic gallery scene. You only enhanced that scene and brought out even more intense feelings and desires. I do believe that this chapter is tied with the original gallery scene as my favorite chapters. I also love your situations chapters.
Goodeness, Jo, I think I’m almost as dazed as Bette. Could my nub be swollen? I’ll have to sashay someplace to check it out. I think I told you when you put out the original gallery chapter about how slowly I read it, the better to enjoy it. Well, you did it to me again.
Jo….You’re just amazing. Your NC-17s are off the chain! I can barely breathe. I can hardly write a simple note and look what you can do w/moments.
wow…
wheeeeeeeeew wut a hot chapter! i very much enjoy ur writing! those cute lil situation chapters too! keep on writing! hope to see more (a lot more) posts soon!!! =)
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Triple THUD!! Jo you’re simply the best. Better than all the rest. Oh my God. What a way to start the weekend. Thank you for what you do.
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, can’t wait to see more. Ok post soon please, thanks!
lmao@honda90. Problems typing, sweetie? ;) As if I’m one to talk I typed “swttie” at first. lol I’d kinda like to see you write a short collection of gallery chapters.
This was just as hot, amazing and mind-blowing as I had expected, thanks for listen to my advise :o))
Cold shower… Be right back!!!
That’s what I’m talking about!
damn that waz hottttttttttttttttttt
Holy WOW!… What can I say? Awesome! Just absolutely awesome!!!!!