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Do you remember when… Chapter 9
She lifted her feet to the coffee table, planting them firmly on the edge as she lifted her hips, lowering the denim slowly while her eyes remained transfixed on the images on the TV screen.
The relative silence in the house closed in on her as her hand hovered over her thong, she gently lifted the material and allowed her hand to brush over her damp curls, the sensation immediately causing her to give a deep breath and a big swallow at the realisation of what she was about to do, she opened her eyes, the images before her giving her the encouragement of slipping her fingertips downward, the immediate velvety touch giving cause for an involuntary groan to escape her lips, she averted her eyes as the feeling invaded her, she scene of Tina undressing allowing her to quicken her pace…
The shirt dropped across Tina’s shoulders, the white bra straps coming into view, the shirt dipped lower, the horizontal strap now part of the visual, as Tina brought her arms to her sides, allowing the shirt to fall down the creamy skin of her arms, Bette’s eyes roamed the breadth of Tina’s back, taking in the curves of her shoulders, the curve of her waist, the dimples on her lower back.
Tina pulled her hands through the cuffs of her shirt and let the garment drop to the floor, her breathing becoming deeper, the thudding in her ears growing louder, she stopped for a few seconds, to steady herself.
She took a deep breath as she reached to the front of her cargo pants and undid the button, she slowly released the zip, and opened the front of the material, she brought her hands to the waistband at the side and slipped her fingers inside the material, gently easing them down, slowly moving her hips as the material manoeuvred over the curves.
Bette watched in amazement at the subtle dance that Tina was unknowingly performing; as the trousers lowered the top of her white thong came into view, the peachy firm cheeks gradually appeared, Tina bent forward slightly to lower them further. Bette’s breath caught in her throat at the view of Tina’s rear before her, the white lace fitting perfectly. The material dropped lower over the pale shapely thighs, slowly easing down past her knees to drop to the floor. Tina edged her shoes off and stepped out her trousers. She stood with her bra and thong on, still with her back facing Bette.
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(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
Hey…what a chapter…well you managed to bring my favorite chapter of all time……And if at all possible make it even better!…The Portard porn really should have a health warning on it ..not only for Bette..but for the rest of us!.lol..Ok So Bette was caught in a compromising position…but ya know!…Tina was teasing her way more than she could handle…so really i think it only right that Tina finish what she started…and What a finish..lol…as always loved this!…
Oh…my…gosh! That was so hot! I should have known better than to read this at work…. Can’t wait for the next installment.
I forgot to breathe while i was reading that.That was tooooo Hot.Thud job. The gallery scene was so intensely Hot, and erotic. And The portard porn collectionTinaloving..Oh my Gawd. Loss for words.B&T are freaks(iloveit). I need air!
Oh how I remember that day at the gallery oh so well..actually i just read that chapter not so long ago..I love your stories…Thanks for posting..I look forward to them everytime..
I can’t believe I’m reading this at work. I swear I was holding my breath. Here I am trying to have lunch thinking I’ll just check and see whats been posted. OMG, the rest of the day is going to be so long.
Poor Bette was caigh doing what come naturally when you want your soul mate and lover and she isn’t there That was one of the best charter your wrote and you brough it back in such a beautiful way. thanks
i’m speechless…….maybe later my mind can process this, for now it’s blank…all i can think of is Holy f***
Damn woman! *Thud* Mouth is dy and i think I stopped breathing for a minute! Post soon!
HOT!!!!! HOT!!!!!!! HOT!!!!!!!!
That was the most erotic thing I’ve ever read.
This chapter only is the anthology of erotic “situations” and grandiose writing. You’re a maestro at building the scene and bringing it to its apogee, your description of the feelings going through their mind at those times leaves me breathless. Bravo!
What a great chapter. Love the story.
OMFG that was awesome! You made the little hairs stand up on the back of my neck! No one can write the Tibette chemistry like you do Jo! Yep, nobody even comes close! JB your the best!
Damn….this was pretty damn HOT!! – I have to add that while Tina wears her Nike Shox for running, I wear mine for fashion. A girl must always be cute!! ^_^
Jobadge, you’re AWESOME. That was????????? Go girl.
Damn, damn that was just toooo hoooot. I really need a copy of that tape of the very erotic gallery scene. You only enhanced that scene and brought out even more intense feelings and desires. I do believe that this chapter is tied with the original gallery scene as my favorite chapters. I also love your situations chapters.
Goodeness, Jo, I think I’m almost as dazed as Bette. Could my nub be swollen? I’ll have to sashay someplace to check it out. I think I told you when you put out the original gallery chapter about how slowly I read it, the better to enjoy it. Well, you did it to me again.
Jo….You’re just amazing. Your NC-17s are off the chain! I can barely breathe. I can hardly write a simple note and look what you can do w/moments.
wow…
wheeeeeeeeew wut a hot chapter! i very much enjoy ur writing! those cute lil situation chapters too! keep on writing! hope to see more (a lot more) posts soon!!! =)
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Triple THUD!! Jo you’re simply the best. Better than all the rest. Oh my God. What a way to start the weekend. Thank you for what you do.
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, can’t wait to see more. Ok post soon please, thanks!
lmao@honda90. Problems typing, sweetie? ;) As if I’m one to talk I typed “swttie” at first. lol I’d kinda like to see you write a short collection of gallery chapters.
This was just as hot, amazing and mind-blowing as I had expected, thanks for listen to my advise :o))
Cold shower… Be right back!!!
That’s what I’m talking about!
damn that waz hottttttttttttttttttt
Holy WOW!… What can I say? Awesome! Just absolutely awesome!!!!!