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Do you remember when… Chapter 9
Bette’s heart was pounding, her throat constricting, making a necessary swallow near on impossible, she clenched and unclenched her fists, her palms becoming clammy as the scene before her unfolded. She had the most beautiful woman standing before her undressing, just for her, and when she bent forward with that thong, Bette just had to shake her head, that was some goddamn ass in front of her, and it was all hers. In the not too distant future, she would devour it, taste it, love it, bite it, lick it, she might even smack it. She smiled to herself; her next request would be interesting.
“Take your underwear off and lie face down on the platform.”
Tina’s head dropped back as her next instruction came from behind the curtain; she closed her eyes as the full force of Bette’s intentions hit her. She felt ‘on show’ even though it was only Bette watching her, she felt self conscious standing near naked in a gallery, but… she felt really turned on, she felt erotic and sensual within the warm closeted room, she felt her body responding.
She reached around and released the clasp of her bra, the straps dropping from her shoulders; she pulled the lacy article from her breasts, held it out and dropped it to the floor.
She heard a moan from behind the curtain, smiled to herself; revelling in the effect that her own part was playing in this seduction. She slipped her fingers under the thin straps at the front of her thong, pulling the material out slightly, she then slowly slid her fingers around to the sides, she again gently swayed her hips as she unhurriedly brought the material down over the thighs, she once again bent forward to ease the flimsy garment down her long slim legs. The pounding heart turning into a resounding thudding travelling from her chest throughout her body, making her legs weak, her hands clammy, her head spin and her centre ached with the most erotic pleasure pain she could ever remember.
Bette watched through the curtain as Tina gracefully ascended the platform and laid face down, she watched as Tina bent her arms in front of her and leaned her face on top of her arms. Bette took a deep breath as she gazed the full length of Tina, lying naked upon the floating platform, her breath caught in her throat as the vision before her became forever engrained in the memory bank of her mind.
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(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
Hey…what a chapter…well you managed to bring my favorite chapter of all time……And if at all possible make it even better!…The Portard porn really should have a health warning on it ..not only for Bette..but for the rest of us!.lol..Ok So Bette was caught in a compromising position…but ya know!…Tina was teasing her way more than she could handle…so really i think it only right that Tina finish what she started…and What a finish..lol…as always loved this!…
Oh…my…gosh! That was so hot! I should have known better than to read this at work…. Can’t wait for the next installment.
I forgot to breathe while i was reading that.That was tooooo Hot.Thud job. The gallery scene was so intensely Hot, and erotic. And The portard porn collectionTinaloving..Oh my Gawd. Loss for words.B&T are freaks(iloveit). I need air!
Oh how I remember that day at the gallery oh so well..actually i just read that chapter not so long ago..I love your stories…Thanks for posting..I look forward to them everytime..
I can’t believe I’m reading this at work. I swear I was holding my breath. Here I am trying to have lunch thinking I’ll just check and see whats been posted. OMG, the rest of the day is going to be so long.
Poor Bette was caigh doing what come naturally when you want your soul mate and lover and she isn’t there That was one of the best charter your wrote and you brough it back in such a beautiful way. thanks
i’m speechless…….maybe later my mind can process this, for now it’s blank…all i can think of is Holy f***
Damn woman! *Thud* Mouth is dy and i think I stopped breathing for a minute! Post soon!
HOT!!!!! HOT!!!!!!! HOT!!!!!!!!
That was the most erotic thing I’ve ever read.
This chapter only is the anthology of erotic “situations” and grandiose writing. You’re a maestro at building the scene and bringing it to its apogee, your description of the feelings going through their mind at those times leaves me breathless. Bravo!
What a great chapter. Love the story.
OMFG that was awesome! You made the little hairs stand up on the back of my neck! No one can write the Tibette chemistry like you do Jo! Yep, nobody even comes close! JB your the best!
Damn….this was pretty damn HOT!! – I have to add that while Tina wears her Nike Shox for running, I wear mine for fashion. A girl must always be cute!! ^_^
Jobadge, you’re AWESOME. That was????????? Go girl.
Damn, damn that was just toooo hoooot. I really need a copy of that tape of the very erotic gallery scene. You only enhanced that scene and brought out even more intense feelings and desires. I do believe that this chapter is tied with the original gallery scene as my favorite chapters. I also love your situations chapters.
Goodeness, Jo, I think I’m almost as dazed as Bette. Could my nub be swollen? I’ll have to sashay someplace to check it out. I think I told you when you put out the original gallery chapter about how slowly I read it, the better to enjoy it. Well, you did it to me again.
Jo….You’re just amazing. Your NC-17s are off the chain! I can barely breathe. I can hardly write a simple note and look what you can do w/moments.
wow…
wheeeeeeeeew wut a hot chapter! i very much enjoy ur writing! those cute lil situation chapters too! keep on writing! hope to see more (a lot more) posts soon!!! =)
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Triple THUD!! Jo you’re simply the best. Better than all the rest. Oh my God. What a way to start the weekend. Thank you for what you do.
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, can’t wait to see more. Ok post soon please, thanks!
lmao@honda90. Problems typing, sweetie? ;) As if I’m one to talk I typed “swttie” at first. lol I’d kinda like to see you write a short collection of gallery chapters.
This was just as hot, amazing and mind-blowing as I had expected, thanks for listen to my advise :o))
Cold shower… Be right back!!!
That’s what I’m talking about!
damn that waz hottttttttttttttttttt
Holy WOW!… What can I say? Awesome! Just absolutely awesome!!!!!