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Do you remember when… Chapter 9
She glanced at the other tape, ‘Porter on a Pole’ as Tina had named it, she gave a smile as she remembered when she had done the pole dance, Tina’s face… the look of complete and utter astonishment written on her face, she had picked her out in the crowd immediately and their eyes had locked, she did it for her and for her alone.
But her eye was drawn back, back to the Gallery Tape, they hadn’t yet watched it together, they had spoken about watching it, whispering in the twilight hours under the duvet of the day at the gallery, the emotions it invoked, the sensations it stirred and the feelings it exposed, the raw naked want of one human being for another, and of the times they had quietly spoken about it, each occasion had ended with them making the most passionate love, full of intensity and desire as they remembered the moments upon the platform in the sensual surroundings.
Bette stood, turning her back from the TV and video, walking away, trying to free her mind of the thoughts still coursing through her mind, she sat back at her desk and looked at the screen of her laptop, why was her breathing becoming heavy, why was she wringing her hands, why did she feel so unsettled…
The feelings invading her body and mind left her disorientated, her concentration had escaped her and worse than that, the warmth of the dream had once again made its presence felt, and this time it wasn’t going away, hard as she might try and clear her mind, the nagging sensation of Tina’s mouth over her breast, teasing her nipple in her dream would not relinquish its hold on her, she was already having trouble with the thoughts invading her mind, but now she could feel how her body was reacting to the thoughts.
She once again got up from her desk, pacing with her hand running through her hair, her other hand on her hip, the feelings tormenting her, she needed something to ease her mind, to ease her body. Maybe she needed a run too, could she catch Tina up? No, stupid thought…, Tina had many routes that she ran, and she had told her she was going on a long run, but how long was long – long in time or distance?
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(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
Hey…what a chapter…well you managed to bring my favorite chapter of all time……And if at all possible make it even better!…The Portard porn really should have a health warning on it ..not only for Bette..but for the rest of us!.lol..Ok So Bette was caught in a compromising position…but ya know!…Tina was teasing her way more than she could handle…so really i think it only right that Tina finish what she started…and What a finish..lol…as always loved this!…
Oh…my…gosh! That was so hot! I should have known better than to read this at work…. Can’t wait for the next installment.
I forgot to breathe while i was reading that.That was tooooo Hot.Thud job. The gallery scene was so intensely Hot, and erotic. And The portard porn collectionTinaloving..Oh my Gawd. Loss for words.B&T are freaks(iloveit). I need air!
Oh how I remember that day at the gallery oh so well..actually i just read that chapter not so long ago..I love your stories…Thanks for posting..I look forward to them everytime..
I can’t believe I’m reading this at work. I swear I was holding my breath. Here I am trying to have lunch thinking I’ll just check and see whats been posted. OMG, the rest of the day is going to be so long.
Poor Bette was caigh doing what come naturally when you want your soul mate and lover and she isn’t there That was one of the best charter your wrote and you brough it back in such a beautiful way. thanks
i’m speechless…….maybe later my mind can process this, for now it’s blank…all i can think of is Holy f***
Damn woman! *Thud* Mouth is dy and i think I stopped breathing for a minute! Post soon!
HOT!!!!! HOT!!!!!!! HOT!!!!!!!!
That was the most erotic thing I’ve ever read.
This chapter only is the anthology of erotic “situations” and grandiose writing. You’re a maestro at building the scene and bringing it to its apogee, your description of the feelings going through their mind at those times leaves me breathless. Bravo!
What a great chapter. Love the story.
OMFG that was awesome! You made the little hairs stand up on the back of my neck! No one can write the Tibette chemistry like you do Jo! Yep, nobody even comes close! JB your the best!
Damn….this was pretty damn HOT!! – I have to add that while Tina wears her Nike Shox for running, I wear mine for fashion. A girl must always be cute!! ^_^
Jobadge, you’re AWESOME. That was????????? Go girl.
Damn, damn that was just toooo hoooot. I really need a copy of that tape of the very erotic gallery scene. You only enhanced that scene and brought out even more intense feelings and desires. I do believe that this chapter is tied with the original gallery scene as my favorite chapters. I also love your situations chapters.
Goodeness, Jo, I think I’m almost as dazed as Bette. Could my nub be swollen? I’ll have to sashay someplace to check it out. I think I told you when you put out the original gallery chapter about how slowly I read it, the better to enjoy it. Well, you did it to me again.
Jo….You’re just amazing. Your NC-17s are off the chain! I can barely breathe. I can hardly write a simple note and look what you can do w/moments.
wow…
wheeeeeeeeew wut a hot chapter! i very much enjoy ur writing! those cute lil situation chapters too! keep on writing! hope to see more (a lot more) posts soon!!! =)
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Triple THUD!! Jo you’re simply the best. Better than all the rest. Oh my God. What a way to start the weekend. Thank you for what you do.
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, can’t wait to see more. Ok post soon please, thanks!
lmao@honda90. Problems typing, sweetie? ;) As if I’m one to talk I typed “swttie” at first. lol I’d kinda like to see you write a short collection of gallery chapters.
This was just as hot, amazing and mind-blowing as I had expected, thanks for listen to my advise :o))
Cold shower… Be right back!!!
That’s what I’m talking about!
damn that waz hottttttttttttttttttt
Holy WOW!… What can I say? Awesome! Just absolutely awesome!!!!!