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Do you remember when… Chapter 9
The twelve images flashed up onto her screen as she quickly began to scan each one, slight panic building within her as she furrowed her brow, concentrating on finding the intruder, she couldn’t see any movement when suddenly it once again caught her eye, someone walking into the south gallery. Panic rose in her throat, her heart began pounding, she brought the south gallery camera to full screen, and zoomed on the impostor, just as the impostor turned, the face came onto Bette’s monitor.
Tina.
“Holy shit,” Bette sat back in her chair and took a deep breath to calm her pounding heart, she looked up to the ceiling, trying to fathom what she would of done if it had truly been an intruder. She sat back forward and watched Tina on the security monitor, ‘she must of came in when James left’, she moved the camera’s angle, following the woman around the gallery. She switched cameras, so she could watch from a different perspective, watching the animated posture studying the art before her.
Bette zoomed the camera in to study Tina’s face, she again switched camera’s to observe from another viewpoint, she began to smile to herself, feeling voyeuristic at watching her love wandering around, completely unaware that her every move was being studied, she moved the camera angle downward, looking Tina up and down, slowly, zooming, retreating, zooming on a body part she wanted a closer inspection of, pulling back, altering the slant once again, gaining a view of her back, she lowered reaching Tina’s bottom as she leaned forward to study a piece of art closer, Bette took in the curves, excitement beginning to bubble in the depths of her stomach, her own temperature rising slightly as she realized she was enjoying being in this position of watching while her subject is completely and utterly unaware.
Tina heard a slight buzz behind her, a feeling of uncomfortable ness overcoming her, being the sole person in an empty, silent gallery, slightly unnerving with the eyes from the surrounding portraits seemingly watching her every move, the buzz once again, this time coming from a different direction, she again looked around, a fear creeping upon her, she tried to tell herself that she was alone, Bette was up in her office, there was no-one else in the building.
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(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
Hey…what a chapter…well you managed to bring my favorite chapter of all time……And if at all possible make it even better!…The Portard porn really should have a health warning on it ..not only for Bette..but for the rest of us!.lol..Ok So Bette was caught in a compromising position…but ya know!…Tina was teasing her way more than she could handle…so really i think it only right that Tina finish what she started…and What a finish..lol…as always loved this!…
Oh…my…gosh! That was so hot! I should have known better than to read this at work…. Can’t wait for the next installment.
I forgot to breathe while i was reading that.That was tooooo Hot.Thud job. The gallery scene was so intensely Hot, and erotic. And The portard porn collectionTinaloving..Oh my Gawd. Loss for words.B&T are freaks(iloveit). I need air!
Oh how I remember that day at the gallery oh so well..actually i just read that chapter not so long ago..I love your stories…Thanks for posting..I look forward to them everytime..
I can’t believe I’m reading this at work. I swear I was holding my breath. Here I am trying to have lunch thinking I’ll just check and see whats been posted. OMG, the rest of the day is going to be so long.
Poor Bette was caigh doing what come naturally when you want your soul mate and lover and she isn’t there That was one of the best charter your wrote and you brough it back in such a beautiful way. thanks
i’m speechless…….maybe later my mind can process this, for now it’s blank…all i can think of is Holy f***
Damn woman! *Thud* Mouth is dy and i think I stopped breathing for a minute! Post soon!
HOT!!!!! HOT!!!!!!! HOT!!!!!!!!
That was the most erotic thing I’ve ever read.
This chapter only is the anthology of erotic “situations” and grandiose writing. You’re a maestro at building the scene and bringing it to its apogee, your description of the feelings going through their mind at those times leaves me breathless. Bravo!
What a great chapter. Love the story.
OMFG that was awesome! You made the little hairs stand up on the back of my neck! No one can write the Tibette chemistry like you do Jo! Yep, nobody even comes close! JB your the best!
Damn….this was pretty damn HOT!! – I have to add that while Tina wears her Nike Shox for running, I wear mine for fashion. A girl must always be cute!! ^_^
Jobadge, you’re AWESOME. That was????????? Go girl.
Damn, damn that was just toooo hoooot. I really need a copy of that tape of the very erotic gallery scene. You only enhanced that scene and brought out even more intense feelings and desires. I do believe that this chapter is tied with the original gallery scene as my favorite chapters. I also love your situations chapters.
Goodeness, Jo, I think I’m almost as dazed as Bette. Could my nub be swollen? I’ll have to sashay someplace to check it out. I think I told you when you put out the original gallery chapter about how slowly I read it, the better to enjoy it. Well, you did it to me again.
Jo….You’re just amazing. Your NC-17s are off the chain! I can barely breathe. I can hardly write a simple note and look what you can do w/moments.
wow…
wheeeeeeeeew wut a hot chapter! i very much enjoy ur writing! those cute lil situation chapters too! keep on writing! hope to see more (a lot more) posts soon!!! =)
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Triple THUD!! Jo you’re simply the best. Better than all the rest. Oh my God. What a way to start the weekend. Thank you for what you do.
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, can’t wait to see more. Ok post soon please, thanks!
lmao@honda90. Problems typing, sweetie? ;) As if I’m one to talk I typed “swttie” at first. lol I’d kinda like to see you write a short collection of gallery chapters.
This was just as hot, amazing and mind-blowing as I had expected, thanks for listen to my advise :o))
Cold shower… Be right back!!!
That’s what I’m talking about!
damn that waz hottttttttttttttttttt
Holy WOW!… What can I say? Awesome! Just absolutely awesome!!!!!