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Do you remember when… Chapter 9
She reached for her cell, selecting Tina’s number and hitting dial, she was met with Tina’s ringtone coming from the kitchen, she hadn’t taken her cell with her…
Bette looked back to the lounge, a feeling of defeat washed over her, she slowly walked toward the TV, trying to swallow the huge constriction that had suddenly appeared, trying to calm the pounding that had suddenly become so much louder in her chest, the pounding that was now making its presence felt in her head, the pulse in her neck matching that of her body.
She sat on the edge of the coffee table, directly in front of the TV, her hand slowly moving toward the video, her mouth becoming dry at what she was about to do, she lifted the case, wiping the invisible dust from the case, prolonging the decision of whether she should do this. She silently opened the cover and took the tape out, holding in front of her, her mind full of contemplation, should she, shouldn’t she, what was the harm, would she tell Tina she had watched it, would she fuck… she smiled as she gently chastised herself at her thoughts.
Her breathing became quicker as she leaned forward, the cool inward air, followed by the warmth of the expelled air through her nostrils, she began to insert the tape into the mouth of the video, she jumped slightly as it snatched if from her hand and swallowed it, she stood and stepped back to the sofa, with the remote on her hand, she took a deep breath, pointing and pressing the play button.
The image made her jump… the deep burgundy drapes, the voile, the sandstone silk ribbons, the image jumped to the thumbnails of all cameras, she creased her brow as she recalled the day in the office. Bette watched in fascination as the memories came flooding back.
Bette switched her monitor back to view the security thumbnails of all areas of the gallery, she glanced down at the floor plans and she caught something moving out the corner of her eye on the monitor, she thought the gallery was empty, but there was obviously somebody down there. She switched to view the individual camera as the person just walked out of view, she quickly switched back to the thumbnails to see where they had gone. She was sitting very upright in her chair waiting for the images to appear, her heart started beating a little faster, ‘what would she do if it was an intruder?’, ‘what if someone was trying to steal a piece of art’.
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(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
Hey…what a chapter…well you managed to bring my favorite chapter of all time……And if at all possible make it even better!…The Portard porn really should have a health warning on it ..not only for Bette..but for the rest of us!.lol..Ok So Bette was caught in a compromising position…but ya know!…Tina was teasing her way more than she could handle…so really i think it only right that Tina finish what she started…and What a finish..lol…as always loved this!…
Oh…my…gosh! That was so hot! I should have known better than to read this at work…. Can’t wait for the next installment.
I forgot to breathe while i was reading that.That was tooooo Hot.Thud job. The gallery scene was so intensely Hot, and erotic. And The portard porn collectionTinaloving..Oh my Gawd. Loss for words.B&T are freaks(iloveit). I need air!
Oh how I remember that day at the gallery oh so well..actually i just read that chapter not so long ago..I love your stories…Thanks for posting..I look forward to them everytime..
I can’t believe I’m reading this at work. I swear I was holding my breath. Here I am trying to have lunch thinking I’ll just check and see whats been posted. OMG, the rest of the day is going to be so long.
Poor Bette was caigh doing what come naturally when you want your soul mate and lover and she isn’t there That was one of the best charter your wrote and you brough it back in such a beautiful way. thanks
i’m speechless…….maybe later my mind can process this, for now it’s blank…all i can think of is Holy f***
Damn woman! *Thud* Mouth is dy and i think I stopped breathing for a minute! Post soon!
HOT!!!!! HOT!!!!!!! HOT!!!!!!!!
That was the most erotic thing I’ve ever read.
This chapter only is the anthology of erotic “situations” and grandiose writing. You’re a maestro at building the scene and bringing it to its apogee, your description of the feelings going through their mind at those times leaves me breathless. Bravo!
What a great chapter. Love the story.
OMFG that was awesome! You made the little hairs stand up on the back of my neck! No one can write the Tibette chemistry like you do Jo! Yep, nobody even comes close! JB your the best!
Damn….this was pretty damn HOT!! – I have to add that while Tina wears her Nike Shox for running, I wear mine for fashion. A girl must always be cute!! ^_^
Jobadge, you’re AWESOME. That was????????? Go girl.
Damn, damn that was just toooo hoooot. I really need a copy of that tape of the very erotic gallery scene. You only enhanced that scene and brought out even more intense feelings and desires. I do believe that this chapter is tied with the original gallery scene as my favorite chapters. I also love your situations chapters.
Goodeness, Jo, I think I’m almost as dazed as Bette. Could my nub be swollen? I’ll have to sashay someplace to check it out. I think I told you when you put out the original gallery chapter about how slowly I read it, the better to enjoy it. Well, you did it to me again.
Jo….You’re just amazing. Your NC-17s are off the chain! I can barely breathe. I can hardly write a simple note and look what you can do w/moments.
wow…
wheeeeeeeeew wut a hot chapter! i very much enjoy ur writing! those cute lil situation chapters too! keep on writing! hope to see more (a lot more) posts soon!!! =)
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Triple THUD!! Jo you’re simply the best. Better than all the rest. Oh my God. What a way to start the weekend. Thank you for what you do.
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, can’t wait to see more. Ok post soon please, thanks!
lmao@honda90. Problems typing, sweetie? ;) As if I’m one to talk I typed “swttie” at first. lol I’d kinda like to see you write a short collection of gallery chapters.
This was just as hot, amazing and mind-blowing as I had expected, thanks for listen to my advise :o))
Cold shower… Be right back!!!
That’s what I’m talking about!
damn that waz hottttttttttttttttttt
Holy WOW!… What can I say? Awesome! Just absolutely awesome!!!!!