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Don’t Fade Away Ch. 6
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Carmen smiled and wiped the tears from her eyes. “Thank you Bette.”
“No problem, you’re family.” They walked away from the corner and headed back over to everyone else. Bette sat back next to a sleeping Tina, and Carmen sat next to Olivia.
Olivia grabbed her hand. “Is everything alright?”
Carmen looked at her and smiled softly. “Yeah, all we have to do is wait.”
Carmen was sleeping on the couch in the waiting room, Alice and Dana sitting in the chairs, sleeping, Bette and Tina sleeping on the love seat, Olivia running her fingers through Carmen’s hair. Jenny was on the floor curled up in a ball next to the love seat. The doctor came to the waiting room and smiled. Olivia looked up and saw the man standing there.
“Hi.”
“Hi, are you here for Shane McCutcheon?”
Olivia nudged Carmen to wake her up. “Yes, we are.”
“I just wanted to tell you that she’s up, and if you guys want to go visit her, you may.”
“Thank you doctor.” He smiled and walked away.
Olivia nudged Carmen once again. “Carmen, babe wake up.” Carmen slowly opened her eyes and woke up. She got up and stretched.
“What happened?” She ran her fingers through her hair and yawned.
“She’s awake. You can go and see her now.”
Carmen had a smile on her face and got up. She started to wake everyone up to go see Shane. The group started to move around and get up. They walked towards Shane’s room and knocked on the door.
“Yeah” The girls walked in and stood around the bed. Jenny ran up to her and wrapped her arms around her.
“Hey, be easy.” She winced in pain.
Jenny pulled away. “Sorry, I’m so happy that you’re alright. I’m glad you’re alive.”
Shane smiled at her best friend. “I’m glad that you saved me.” She wiped the tears from Jenny’s eyes. “How long have you guys been here?”
Alice looked at everybody. “We’ve been here all night?”
Shane looked at saw Carmen standing by the door. “Hey.”
Carmen looked up and smiled faintly. “Hi.”
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I feel bad for Olivia. She’s totally into Carmen, but Carmen isn’t being upfront with her and telling her that she’s in love with someone else.And Shane is doing well in trying to clean up. That’s hard to do. But it’s not Carmen’s responsibility to keep Shane clean (i thought it was unfair for Bette to lay this situation on Carmen like it’s her responsibility to keep Shane clean). Shane is a grown woman and it’s her own responsibility to get her shit together… which she needs to do.I hope it all works out for these 2. They love each other too much for it not to.(can you tell that i’m into this story? i love it. post again soon…i can’t get enough)
Wow , this story got some dramatic twist! I think Carmen should leave Shane alone. Shane needs to get her life back on track and Carmen isn’t helping. I think Shane should try and forget about Carmen, date other people. I mean Carmen accepted the proposal! It’s clear Shane&Carmen love eachoher but I think Shane should dae some other girl , Carmen should stay with Olivia and then when Shane is in good health and have her life back on track she should decide if she wants Carmen back.Update soon!
Will Carman ever be happy without Shane and we know that Shane want be happy without her. Shane will need to change for her self,and let the rest take care of it self. thanks
damn man! carmen better sort out her feelings and break up with olivia. hope shane continues to go to the rehab clinic. thx for the update!
cannot understand what carmen wants. she said she wanted to be with shane but would not break up with oliva? need to know if oliva is a good person.rhaks for the immediate update.
Damn! Carmen, Bette was right, it ain’t that hard to say ‘no’. Fuck spur of the moment . . . damn!!! I really hope that Shane will keep trying to get clean but for some reason I think that she is going to resort back to her old ways. Unless . . . Carmen hurry up and get her shit in check and dump Olivia, who I by the way do not like. Shane don’t need to let this get her down, hopefully she will go and stay with Jenny or somebody until she gets back on her feet. Anywaysm, this was an off the chain update . . . Please post soon and make it longer. LYLAS, C-Ya
bye olivia!!!!!!! stay clean shane
Damn! Did Carmen have to tell her about the engagement so soon. She could have waited until she got better. It would’ve given her time to sort out her feelings. Not sure how I feel about Olivia just yet. Great chap.
damn what is carmen thinking???there is no more reason for shane to go on with her live now and try to stay clean. and hey is Olivia blind??? can´t she see how carmen cares about shane?Thanx for the fast update!!! It´s great!
I dont get it..why Carmen told Shane about being engaged?? she has doubts…so why tell Shane?? That really sucks :/ Post soon!.
oh….shit. Can’t believe Carmen even had the nerve to tell Shane. She should have just broken up the engagement with Olivia. I love the way you portray Bette here. Goes to read your next update…