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Don’t Fade Away Ch. 6
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The girls looked at the both of them. Bette sighed and looked at Shane. “I think we’re going to leave you two alone. Come on guys, let’s let them talk.” The girls start to walk away from the bed and walk towards the door. Carmen moved away and watched them walk out. Bette winked at her on the way out. She smiled faintly and took a deep breath. Shane looked away and picked at her fingernails.
Carmen ran her fingers through her hair. She walked over to the bed and sat down. “What happened?”
Shane looked at Carmen and sighed. “The guy that I would buy from attacked me because I wouldn’t buy from him.”
“But why would he do this?”
Shane looked up at the ceiling, hoping the tears wouldn’t fall. “I went to the rehab clinic yesterday, trying to get clean. So he beat me because I wanted out of this hellhole.” Carmen looked at Shane with sympathy. She grabbed a hold of her hand and rubbed it. “I wanted to get cleaned, I wanted to get cleaned if I want you back in my life. I’m trying my best to have you back in my life.” Shane finally looked at Carmen. “I’m just praying that you want me back.”
Carmen grabbed Shane’s face. “Shane, you don’t have to worry. I want to be with you, I just don’t know what to do.”
Shane sniffed and looked at Carmen. “What do you mean?”
Carmen got off the bed and lowered her head. “I’m sorry, I didn’t mean for this to happen.”
Shane looked at Carmen. “What’s wrong? Tell me”
Carmen began to cry. “I’m engaged.”
Shane felt a sharp pain going through her heart as if someone drove a stake through it. “W-What?”
Carmen brought her head back up. “Last night, Olivia proposed to me, and I said yes.”
Shane started to shake her head, didn’t want to believe a word she was saying. “Please tell me this is a lie. Tell me you’re lying.”
Carmen shook her head and held out her hand. “I’m not.”
Shane looked at her hand and saw the ring on her finger. “Get out.”
Carmen walked back over to Shane. “Shane please don’t do this.”
Shane shook her head. “No, if you really loved me, you wouldn’t of said yes. I can’t believe you, just leave.”
Carmen tried to touch Shane, but snatched her arm away. “I’m sorry, I didn’t mean-.”
“Get out!” Shane grabbed onto her stomach in pain. “Get out” Carmen walked away from Shane and walked out of the room. Shane dropped her head back onto the pillow and stared up at the ceiling. The tears began to fall down her face. Carmen walked out of the waiting room as everyone watched her. Olivia got up and started to run after to her. Bette shook her head in disappointment. She knew that Carmen told Shane about the engagement, and it didn’t go so well in there. Tina looked at Bette for answers, but Bette wants to wait and tell her in private.
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I feel bad for Olivia. She’s totally into Carmen, but Carmen isn’t being upfront with her and telling her that she’s in love with someone else.And Shane is doing well in trying to clean up. That’s hard to do. But it’s not Carmen’s responsibility to keep Shane clean (i thought it was unfair for Bette to lay this situation on Carmen like it’s her responsibility to keep Shane clean). Shane is a grown woman and it’s her own responsibility to get her shit together… which she needs to do.I hope it all works out for these 2. They love each other too much for it not to.(can you tell that i’m into this story? i love it. post again soon…i can’t get enough)
Wow , this story got some dramatic twist! I think Carmen should leave Shane alone. Shane needs to get her life back on track and Carmen isn’t helping. I think Shane should try and forget about Carmen, date other people. I mean Carmen accepted the proposal! It’s clear Shane&Carmen love eachoher but I think Shane should dae some other girl , Carmen should stay with Olivia and then when Shane is in good health and have her life back on track she should decide if she wants Carmen back.Update soon!
Will Carman ever be happy without Shane and we know that Shane want be happy without her. Shane will need to change for her self,and let the rest take care of it self. thanks
damn man! carmen better sort out her feelings and break up with olivia. hope shane continues to go to the rehab clinic. thx for the update!
cannot understand what carmen wants. she said she wanted to be with shane but would not break up with oliva? need to know if oliva is a good person.rhaks for the immediate update.
Damn! Carmen, Bette was right, it ain’t that hard to say ‘no’. Fuck spur of the moment . . . damn!!! I really hope that Shane will keep trying to get clean but for some reason I think that she is going to resort back to her old ways. Unless . . . Carmen hurry up and get her shit in check and dump Olivia, who I by the way do not like. Shane don’t need to let this get her down, hopefully she will go and stay with Jenny or somebody until she gets back on her feet. Anywaysm, this was an off the chain update . . . Please post soon and make it longer. LYLAS, C-Ya
bye olivia!!!!!!! stay clean shane
Damn! Did Carmen have to tell her about the engagement so soon. She could have waited until she got better. It would’ve given her time to sort out her feelings. Not sure how I feel about Olivia just yet. Great chap.
damn what is carmen thinking???there is no more reason for shane to go on with her live now and try to stay clean. and hey is Olivia blind??? can´t she see how carmen cares about shane?Thanx for the fast update!!! It´s great!
I dont get it..why Carmen told Shane about being engaged?? she has doubts…so why tell Shane?? That really sucks :/ Post soon!.
oh….shit. Can’t believe Carmen even had the nerve to tell Shane. She should have just broken up the engagement with Olivia. I love the way you portray Bette here. Goes to read your next update…