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    Double Vision 14

    Story written on January 19, 2007 by vvitch.
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    Number of Comments: 18
    Words: 4349
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=64095
    Author Notes:

    Come

     

    “Alice” Estelle’s grip on her dignity was wavering but really, dear reader, she wasn’t a Pea-friggin’-body for nothin’. An omfg-ing Alice she knew how to handle “Your accent is slipping”

     

    “Oh I was second choice?!” Ad-libbed Alice, but not very well and the rest of her lines came out sounding more like questions than accusations. “Goodness gracious me? What nerve? How dare you, you… silly…lady?”

     

    “Al?” came a new voice.

     

    Alice turned “Dana?”

     

    “What the hell are you saying?”

     

    “What the hell are you wearing?!”

     

    Bette sighed happily at the drama before her and nodded approvingly “Good one, Tina. Bringing Dana as your date was ingenious”

     

    “Why, thank you, Bette, I thought so too. But it was a bit last minute… hence the skimpy tennis skirt she’s wearing. I had to grab her right out of training”

     

    “You two are horrible! I love it! Look at Estelle’s expression!” laughed Helena. “Gosh, look at us, still keeping you standing!” With that, Helena looked around and flicked her hand just so- a cool little flick that always got immediate results. Sure enough, two more chairs appeared at their table- courtesy of two male waiters who had been eyeing the stunning brunette all evening.

     

    “My” murmured Bette, as her hand moved instinctively to Helena’s arm, claiming what was hers “They seem keen to impress you”

     

    “Mmm Darling, I love a territorial woman” smiled Helena, raising Bette’s hand to her lips. She turned to the new arrivals “Come, Dana, Tina. Please sit with us”

     

    Graciously accepting the invitation, Tina began to take a seat next to Estelle.

     

    “Hey!” yelled Alice, startling everyone.

     

    Silence.

     

    Some more silence.

     

    You can just feel this is going to be another interlude from normalcy, can’t you?

     

    “Yes?” obliged Bette.

     

    “I thought I was sitting next to Estelle!” huffed Alice.

     

    All eyes turn towards the author, who hastily scrolls up to check.

     

    “That’s quite true” said Peggy thoughtfully “I thought I was seated to Estelle’s right and…”

     

    “You are, Mrs Peabody, you are” assured the author. “Helena, you’re next to your mother, and Alice, you’re sitting next to Estelle and so… is… Tina… hmm” trailing off, the author made another attempt to explain her logic “Well, that’s one of the wonders of a round table”

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    Comments

    1. Am I first? What an honor. Master V this was an amusing chapter. I really liked your A/N included in the story. I’m curious to see where you’ll take this. Great job. PPS.

    2. Am I first? What an honor. Master V this was an amusing chapter. I really liked your A/N included in the story. I’m curious to see where you’ll take this. Great job. PPS.

    3. *surprised look…knocking on the story* Hey, what are you doin’ in there? hehehe Berrry cute V..hmmmmm….and interesting closing!! Did curiosity kill Felix 1? I thought he was just at the vet!!

    4. Hahahaha! V, you can’t keep puuting those ‘author’s notes’ in there. I was laughing so damned hard, it took me forever to read the chapter. LOL! That was so f*cking funny! Thanks for the laugh. I had to stop and breathe for a minute before I could continue. Then, i had to stop to wipe away the tears. This was the best laugh of the day! Thanls. =)

    5. Another amazing chapter! I was just going to bed and thought lemme check if you posted as yours was the only fanfic I’ve read in ages! Yep I’ve caught up :) (left you some comments on the others too) Anyhoo- amazing chapter! Now I see why they call you Master V!!! Your sense of humour knows no boundaries I see :) And as for your auther’s notes- LOL- you’ve gone and said what many of us think but dare not say at 2am in the morning! LOL Especially after your PC messes up and you lose them all! Sheesh. So…great chapter! Fantastic surprise. Thanks.

    6. This chapter was funny even though seeing Bette & Tina with other people feels a little weird…and sad….especially with all of them breaking bread together and sharing witty banter.

    8. I came, I came! and will be coming back whenever you make it possible ;D ;D Just what I needed waiting for the cable guy to come! ^_^ Otherwise, it can get quite boring just sitting here…

    9. Hey V ! Great chapter. I’m sorry I haven’t found time to comment (or read actually ) any sooner but as usual, I enjoyed your new chappie very much. I loved the “author’s intervention”. How funny was that ? You always come up with great brainwaves and “coinages”. I’m pretty amazed… Can’t wait for your next installment, Master V.

    10. Come come come come! The coffee part is a little confusing though. What the hell was that?! :D Great fic, lets have them get it on soon! Mass orgy maybe, if you know how to write it.

    15. vvitchy–your writing style is clever,your humor unique and…”interesting”–you have me giggling at your commentry as well as the dialogue, characters and situations! I am officially caught up on both stories now–keep churning them out, kid! Your public wants to continue the belly laughs–great exercise, you know!

    16. I don’t know how you do it girl, but you do it every time. I start reading, I’m prepared, I know there will be lots and lots of humor but, and this is surprising me the most, it’s even beter that the previous chapter. Where is your limit, that’s what I would like to know girl. You’re gifted!

    17. aaaaah look who’s back on earth and finally posted again??? LOL just kididng of course. Master V you did it again with this amazing chapter, it realy made me laugh and I was a bit sad it ended there. So please don’t wait another six weeks (j/k) before you post again. thanks

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