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Double Vision 14
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Just so you know, all this fuss about the little box is because it’s size is what you would expect of a box enclosing a ring. Not just a ring- a ring of significance.
But it wasn’t.
Finally realising what was making everyone hold their breath, Bette exclaimed “Oh!”
Pause
“Oh no no no no no!” continued Bette frantically. Her eyes darted to Peggy and Estelle- “It isn’t!” then to Tina, Alice, and Dana- “It’s too soon!”
She caught Helena’s hand between her hands, rubbing her thumbs over Helena’s knuckles “Baby… I love you… but, I wouldn’t…”
“Aw, Darling, shh shh… don’t look so worried. Breathe” murmured Helena, tucking a stray lock of hair behind Bette’s ear. She cupped the soft mocha cheek in her palm “You had me nervous for a second there”
Bette smiled “I had me nervous too. Sweetheart, you understand what I’m saying, don’t you? I wouldn’t ask that of you, so soon… and I wouldn’t presume to be able to offer it, so soon”
“I know, Love, I understand what you mean, completely” Helena leaned in to place a soft kiss on Bette’s lips “What I won’t let you get away with, is how you made such a hurried affair of telling me you loved me, for the first time, if I may remind”
“I know! But the gift was supposed to be a prelude to the actual… mmmm” Bette trailed off as she felt Helena lips upon hers again. When she felt the lingering kiss end, it took her a while to pry her eyes open- Helena’s kisses tended to leave her in a fine little stupor.
“And that’s because I love you too” whispered Helena, sitting back smilingly. “So, let’s see what’s in the little box, shall we?” She glanced up at the rest of their dinner companions, and saw the reason why they’d been quiet for this long.
Alice’s mouth was covered shut by Dana’s hand, who was also demonstrating the remarkable strength of her tennis elbow (not Tennis Elbow The Injury, just an elbow of an arm made strong by constant tennis-playing, aiiight?) by jutting it painfully on Alice’s left hand. On the other hand, Alice’s right hand
Am I first? What an honor. Master V this was an amusing chapter. I really liked your A/N included in the story. I’m curious to see where you’ll take this. Great job. PPS.
Am I first? What an honor. Master V this was an amusing chapter. I really liked your A/N included in the story. I’m curious to see where you’ll take this. Great job. PPS.
*surprised look…knocking on the story* Hey, what are you doin’ in there? hehehe Berrry cute V..hmmmmm….and interesting closing!! Did curiosity kill Felix 1? I thought he was just at the vet!!
Hahahaha! V, you can’t keep puuting those ‘author’s notes’ in there. I was laughing so damned hard, it took me forever to read the chapter. LOL! That was so f*cking funny! Thanks for the laugh. I had to stop and breathe for a minute before I could continue. Then, i had to stop to wipe away the tears. This was the best laugh of the day! Thanls. =)
Another amazing chapter! I was just going to bed and thought lemme check if you posted as yours was the only fanfic I’ve read in ages! Yep I’ve caught up :) (left you some comments on the others too) Anyhoo- amazing chapter! Now I see why they call you Master V!!! Your sense of humour knows no boundaries I see :) And as for your auther’s notes- LOL- you’ve gone and said what many of us think but dare not say at 2am in the morning! LOL Especially after your PC messes up and you lose them all! Sheesh. So…great chapter! Fantastic surprise. Thanks.
This chapter was funny even though seeing Bette & Tina with other people feels a little weird…and sad….especially with all of them breaking bread together and sharing witty banter.
Seriously you’re trying to get me to pee in my pants!! This was soo funny…i was chuckling out loud! Great job…no get back to work…lol
I came, I came! and will be coming back whenever you make it possible ;D ;D Just what I needed waiting for the cable guy to come! ^_^ Otherwise, it can get quite boring just sitting here…
Hey V ! Great chapter. I’m sorry I haven’t found time to comment (or read actually ) any sooner but as usual, I enjoyed your new chappie very much. I loved the “author’s intervention”. How funny was that ? You always come up with great brainwaves and “coinages”. I’m pretty amazed… Can’t wait for your next installment, Master V.
Come come come come! The coffee part is a little confusing though. What the hell was that?! :D Great fic, lets have them get it on soon! Mass orgy maybe, if you know how to write it.
Master V thanks for letting me know I missed it. I did laugh out loud at the authors note.Come as many times as they said, everynight. V you can do sexy.Great update
This is absolutely hilarious!! Just caught up and loved every part of it!! As for the authors notes… genius!! Can’t wait for more!! PPS
Thanks, V, for this long awaited chap… You made my day with those ‘author notes’. Very refreshing writing style… PPS
LOL! That chapter cracked me up. Especially the whole seating arrangement thing. Hahahaha!
vvitchy–your writing style is clever,your humor unique and…”interesting”–you have me giggling at your commentry as well as the dialogue, characters and situations! I am officially caught up on both stories now–keep churning them out, kid! Your public wants to continue the belly laughs–great exercise, you know!
I don’t know how you do it girl, but you do it every time. I start reading, I’m prepared, I know there will be lots and lots of humor but, and this is surprising me the most, it’s even beter that the previous chapter. Where is your limit, that’s what I would like to know girl. You’re gifted!
aaaaah look who’s back on earth and finally posted again??? LOL just kididng of course. Master V you did it again with this amazing chapter, it realy made me laugh and I was a bit sad it ended there. So please don’t wait another six weeks (j/k) before you post again. thanks
Damn that was so funny and Alice is crazy, love them all. Ok let see whats next, thanks!