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    Double Vision 14

    Story written on January 19, 2007 by vvitch.
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    Number of Comments: 18
    Words: 4349
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=64095
    Author Notes:

    Come

     

    Grins all around, except on Estelle’s face. Her expression seemed to be saying ‘Uh oh…’

     

    “She’s the one and the same, Peggy” confirmed Bette.

     

    “Oh?” uttered Peggy, leaning back in her seat. She arched an eyebrow at the reddening Estelle.

     

    “Mm hmm. We have a daughter together” seeing the look Estelle was getting, Tina continued “It was amicable. We just decided to go our separate ways”

     

    “Not that separate!” chirped up Alice, finally finding her tongue “Y’see Peggy, we’re all connected…”

     

    “Oh god, no!” groaned Dana “Al, you’re not going to draw her The Chart!”

     

    “Great idea, Dana!” exclaimed Alice as she dug up some pen and paper “It’s like this…”

     

    “May I say, dear” interrupted Peggy “Its such a relief to hear you talking normally, without that… astonishing accent”

     

    Alice grinned “Yeah, I got tired of it too. Here, lemme show you…”

     

    ~ ~ ~

     

    (ten minutes later, during which Alice, Dana and Peggy sat engrossed with The Chart; Estelle and Tina tried to converse without blushing; Bette and Helena talked about everyone else, marvelling at how well the dinner was turning out)

     

    “Oh, I almost forgot, I brought you a little gift” said Bette, fishing through her bag, she again murmured absent-mindedly “Don’t look so expectant Alice, you know its not for you- its for Helena”

     

    “Oh puhlease” Alice rolled her eyes “We both know any gift you buy for me would not fit into that little bag”

     

    Laughing along with everyone, Helena looked down as an elegant little white box was placed in front of her. It was embellished so finely you would need some assistance to your naked eye to examine the intricacies, like, say, a microscope. But of course, if the characters of a story brought microscopes to the dinner table, then you’re probably reading fan fiction for CSI. Do check.

     

    “What?” asked Bette, getting increasingly worried about the silence that had settled over the table, and how everyone, including Helena, were staring at the little box “What is it? Too much? She likes white, right? You like white… right?”

     

    “Yes… I love white…” replied Helena, her voice a little shaky as she continued to stare at the box.

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    Comments

    1. Am I first? What an honor. Master V this was an amusing chapter. I really liked your A/N included in the story. I’m curious to see where you’ll take this. Great job. PPS.

    2. Am I first? What an honor. Master V this was an amusing chapter. I really liked your A/N included in the story. I’m curious to see where you’ll take this. Great job. PPS.

    3. *surprised look…knocking on the story* Hey, what are you doin’ in there? hehehe Berrry cute V..hmmmmm….and interesting closing!! Did curiosity kill Felix 1? I thought he was just at the vet!!

    4. Hahahaha! V, you can’t keep puuting those ‘author’s notes’ in there. I was laughing so damned hard, it took me forever to read the chapter. LOL! That was so f*cking funny! Thanks for the laugh. I had to stop and breathe for a minute before I could continue. Then, i had to stop to wipe away the tears. This was the best laugh of the day! Thanls. =)

    5. Another amazing chapter! I was just going to bed and thought lemme check if you posted as yours was the only fanfic I’ve read in ages! Yep I’ve caught up :) (left you some comments on the others too) Anyhoo- amazing chapter! Now I see why they call you Master V!!! Your sense of humour knows no boundaries I see :) And as for your auther’s notes- LOL- you’ve gone and said what many of us think but dare not say at 2am in the morning! LOL Especially after your PC messes up and you lose them all! Sheesh. So…great chapter! Fantastic surprise. Thanks.

    6. This chapter was funny even though seeing Bette & Tina with other people feels a little weird…and sad….especially with all of them breaking bread together and sharing witty banter.

    8. I came, I came! and will be coming back whenever you make it possible ;D ;D Just what I needed waiting for the cable guy to come! ^_^ Otherwise, it can get quite boring just sitting here…

    9. Hey V ! Great chapter. I’m sorry I haven’t found time to comment (or read actually ) any sooner but as usual, I enjoyed your new chappie very much. I loved the “author’s intervention”. How funny was that ? You always come up with great brainwaves and “coinages”. I’m pretty amazed… Can’t wait for your next installment, Master V.

    10. Come come come come! The coffee part is a little confusing though. What the hell was that?! :D Great fic, lets have them get it on soon! Mass orgy maybe, if you know how to write it.

    15. vvitchy–your writing style is clever,your humor unique and…”interesting”–you have me giggling at your commentry as well as the dialogue, characters and situations! I am officially caught up on both stories now–keep churning them out, kid! Your public wants to continue the belly laughs–great exercise, you know!

    16. I don’t know how you do it girl, but you do it every time. I start reading, I’m prepared, I know there will be lots and lots of humor but, and this is surprising me the most, it’s even beter that the previous chapter. Where is your limit, that’s what I would like to know girl. You’re gifted!

    17. aaaaah look who’s back on earth and finally posted again??? LOL just kididng of course. Master V you did it again with this amazing chapter, it realy made me laugh and I was a bit sad it ended there. So please don’t wait another six weeks (j/k) before you post again. thanks

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