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Double Vision 14
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“Pff. Even so, a round table can stretch to only so many dimensions” Bette arched an eyebrow.
Estelle laughed “You’re just jealous because everyone wants to be seated next to me! You see, dear Bette, the story revolves around me”
“Oh please, the story does not…”
“Alright alright, you two, take it easy” interrupted the author. “I’ve figured it out. Alice, you get up and give Tina that seat next to Estelle. Don’t give me that look! You sit next to Tina and then Dana can be next to you. Ok? Are we all clear?”
Their was a chorus of groans and mumbles which the author chose to interpret as a ‘yes’ and she went back to her writing, thinking God, what a fussy bunch of characters! Nag nag nag nag nag! Alright, enough of that. On with the story.
Everyone looked at each other nervously as they tried to remember what they’d been talking about before they had leapt out of the page, or rather, before the author had leapt right in to the story. Peggy, being Peggy, snapped out of it first.
“Hello, my dears, I’m Peggy Peabody” She directed it to Dana first, and then turned to Tina “I take it you’re the lovely lady who has made Estelle lose her wits so?”
Estelle buried her face in her hands “Mummy!”
Tina blushed prettily “Well, I don’t know if I’ll put it like that. Its very nice to finally meet you Mrs Peabody…”
“Please- Peggy. To finally meet me?”
“…Peggy, it is. And yes, I’ve heard of you and of course, Estelle talked about you often, very fondly” smiled Tina.
And yet I’ve never heard Helena speak of her mother. Bette glanced at the other Peabody daughter. Helena now looked drawn, wary, and little lines appeared as she pursed her lips, as if she too had realised how rarely she spoke of her mother. Bette squeezed the soft hand placed in hers. She would ask about it later.
“And your name is Tina, did you say?” asked Peggy. Receiving a nod in the affirmative, she continued “My, there seems to be quite a few Tina’s. Wasn’t your partner also called Tina, Bette?”
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Am I first? What an honor. Master V this was an amusing chapter. I really liked your A/N included in the story. I’m curious to see where you’ll take this. Great job. PPS.
Am I first? What an honor. Master V this was an amusing chapter. I really liked your A/N included in the story. I’m curious to see where you’ll take this. Great job. PPS.
*surprised look…knocking on the story* Hey, what are you doin’ in there? hehehe Berrry cute V..hmmmmm….and interesting closing!! Did curiosity kill Felix 1? I thought he was just at the vet!!
Hahahaha! V, you can’t keep puuting those ‘author’s notes’ in there. I was laughing so damned hard, it took me forever to read the chapter. LOL! That was so f*cking funny! Thanks for the laugh. I had to stop and breathe for a minute before I could continue. Then, i had to stop to wipe away the tears. This was the best laugh of the day! Thanls. =)
Another amazing chapter! I was just going to bed and thought lemme check if you posted as yours was the only fanfic I’ve read in ages! Yep I’ve caught up :) (left you some comments on the others too) Anyhoo- amazing chapter! Now I see why they call you Master V!!! Your sense of humour knows no boundaries I see :) And as for your auther’s notes- LOL- you’ve gone and said what many of us think but dare not say at 2am in the morning! LOL Especially after your PC messes up and you lose them all! Sheesh. So…great chapter! Fantastic surprise. Thanks.
This chapter was funny even though seeing Bette & Tina with other people feels a little weird…and sad….especially with all of them breaking bread together and sharing witty banter.
Seriously you’re trying to get me to pee in my pants!! This was soo funny…i was chuckling out loud! Great job…no get back to work…lol
I came, I came! and will be coming back whenever you make it possible ;D ;D Just what I needed waiting for the cable guy to come! ^_^ Otherwise, it can get quite boring just sitting here…
Hey V ! Great chapter. I’m sorry I haven’t found time to comment (or read actually ) any sooner but as usual, I enjoyed your new chappie very much. I loved the “author’s intervention”. How funny was that ? You always come up with great brainwaves and “coinages”. I’m pretty amazed… Can’t wait for your next installment, Master V.
Come come come come! The coffee part is a little confusing though. What the hell was that?! :D Great fic, lets have them get it on soon! Mass orgy maybe, if you know how to write it.
Master V thanks for letting me know I missed it. I did laugh out loud at the authors note.Come as many times as they said, everynight. V you can do sexy.Great update
This is absolutely hilarious!! Just caught up and loved every part of it!! As for the authors notes… genius!! Can’t wait for more!! PPS
Thanks, V, for this long awaited chap… You made my day with those ‘author notes’. Very refreshing writing style… PPS
LOL! That chapter cracked me up. Especially the whole seating arrangement thing. Hahahaha!
vvitchy–your writing style is clever,your humor unique and…”interesting”–you have me giggling at your commentry as well as the dialogue, characters and situations! I am officially caught up on both stories now–keep churning them out, kid! Your public wants to continue the belly laughs–great exercise, you know!
I don’t know how you do it girl, but you do it every time. I start reading, I’m prepared, I know there will be lots and lots of humor but, and this is surprising me the most, it’s even beter that the previous chapter. Where is your limit, that’s what I would like to know girl. You’re gifted!
aaaaah look who’s back on earth and finally posted again??? LOL just kididng of course. Master V you did it again with this amazing chapter, it realy made me laugh and I was a bit sad it ended there. So please don’t wait another six weeks (j/k) before you post again. thanks
Damn that was so funny and Alice is crazy, love them all. Ok let see whats next, thanks!