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Double Vision 7
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Bette sighed, her thoughts unsettled. God, she was not in the mood for introspection. She couldn’t even get a good grasp of her own thoughts. Like that music, playing much too softly in the car- what was that song? It was vaguely familiar but she couldn’t quite put her fing…
What??!
Bette started in her seat and leaned closer to the window. Wow, don’t tell me I’ve thought her into existence in DC! Making supreme effort to not hang her head out the car window, Bette peered to make sure it was indeed…
Helena?
Still not quite believing her eyes, Bette continued to stare. Something somewhere at the back of her head busied itself asking her how she was so sure it wasn’t Estelle. Honestly? Bette now relied on the presence of a slight ‘buzz’ she always got whenever she looked at Helena.
And now, the buzz was indeed there. Bette felt her world go schlooop! zooming in on the restaurant- not too far from where the car had stopped, oddly enough- to a table where sat two women, one of them a very stunning Helena. Bette recognised the other woman as Winnie. Bette felt a tinge of jealousy (where did that come from?) as she saw that Helena was hanging on her ex’s every word. She knew what it felt like to have those beautiful blues looking at her, only at her.
Sighing, Bette squinted again if only I could make out what they’re saying…and then felt her heart constrict painfully at what she saw… Helena was crying…
Bette’s hands flew to her lips. Oh no…no no no…don’t cry…please don’t cry… Bette desperately willed her inner mantra to comfort Helena. She couldn’t look away. Helena seemed to begging something of Winnie, her eyes imploring. Bette tore her eyes from Helena’s face and saw that her pleas were being received very coldly by her ex. Helena was being refused something. I would never refuse her anything intruded a thought, spurred on by anger at Winnie and a protectiveness she didn’t know she felt for Helena.
Bette was a thought away from leaping out of the car and running to Helena’s rescue (and say what? Asked that annoying little voice again. Seriously, she really did need to get rid of that voice). And then, the car moved! Stupid traffic couldn’t find any other time to clear! Bette swirled around frantically wondering if saying ‘stop the car’ would be a cheesy-yet-effective line.
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Yay first LOL. Good job V, this was again one very delightfull chapter. So who busted them this time our dear friende nosy nose AL??? LOL. Please don’t wait that long again to post another chapter although we understood you were really busy.
I really love this story, VVitch. I can’t wait for Shane to find out about Estelle and Helena. I certainly hope Bette’ll just toss caution to the wind and throw Helena on some flat surface and have her way with her. Great job.
Funny about Helena and Estelle, they all comfuse about these twin and now whos come behide them, Alice lol. Helena and Bette should talk and tell each other about their feeling. OK post soon please, thanks!
I’m so glad to see you continue this story Master V. I do believe Yoda Shane has figured out the mystery twins. I like the pace you are keeping the story. Very, very excellent job
phew! I might die a little inside if Helena continued on thinking Bette’s rejecting her… some kind of pheramone must be released when these two get together ’cause someone’s always there to catch them pwahah (Uh…well, I *wasn’t* going to comment so that you’ll have less work to do next time, but oh well…)
*waving* Yey V!! Glad you were able to come up for air and agreed to my proposal without me having to flex any muscle. I am so enjoying this as always. Who? I agree, Shane or Al. This indeed was not the KOD…just a sweet smooch ;)!
okay, that was so cute, but you gotta stop leaving us hanging for sooooo long….because this is soooo good. b&h have such chemistry. post soon. THANKS!
Yippi ! Yippi ! I’m so glad you’ve updated, Vvitch. I’m so enjoying your story ! Really, I already loved it in the very beginning, but it just keeps getting better and better… I am officially totally addicted !Anyway, about the cliffhanger, I too think it’s Shane, even though it would be more typical of Alice to make that kind of ( theatrical ) entrance ! LOL ! Thanks again for sharing your gift with us !
First off, official congrats this time! Second, great update! I love this story. I think it’s Kit–just to be different. But this story is really wonderful–I like how you’re bringing in all the girls and their take on what they think they see. Also like how you’re getting into their inner thoughts. Love those cliffhangers! Will I be right? And definitely post your next chapter immediately to make up for that far-too-long wait!
Fantastic chapter V!! Funny as hell, as usual! I LOVE your writing, your just so damn good at it! Eeerrmm i’m going to go with Shane too. i’m with Pands, i too would love Tina to suffer and be jealous. Congrats on finishing your dissertation, and being done with uni, you clever clogs you! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
i think youre flirting with the rating lines there buddy cuz for a minute i was all ” shouldnt this be an NC-17 LOL. Yeah i like speedy’s idea as well!!!! I love this story though!!!!!!!!
Just a quick note to what adumgenius said: Nooooo! Don’t avoid commenting to give me less work! i LIKE work, so do comment!!! :D Ok now that I’m here, many thanks to those who commented so far: BeL, Speedie, ut, Squirl, Dum, Niki, Choc (sweetie, I’m so very sorry for leaving u hanging! It won’t happen again, I’ll try my very hardest, ok? ok?)
vvitch, again a splendid chapter. After Bette seeing Helena in despair, Barbara wasn’t even in the picture anymore. Great character analysis. I just love Helena but I have also a weak spot for Estelle. It’s Estelle who is adressing them isn’t it?
Okie, I was instructed to use the next 3 minutes you have to leave a nice comment at your fic, but YEAH! I was meaning to msg u at work, but was busy. You want to know what I honestly think? It’s fantastic! Your writing style has evolved strongly into something that is sentimental, but not too angsty. I like the whole flow. The emotions of Helena and Bette, how they slowly realise that they can’t be without each toher… You get the drift. Fantastic work V. Great! loved it!
First off, I was a bit surprised by the sex scene…not that it wasn’t good…because a-hem..it was ..just that I was at work and read it…and got all flustered…hehehehe I feel bad for Helena thinking Bette doesn’t want her…I feel bad that Bette is still thinking about what all went wrong…I’m glad Bette didn’t sleep with the Sentor, AND I want Bette and Helena together now…ok? Also it’s just me maybe but I really want Tina to suffer and get jealous…but that’s just me…probably…Great job, keep up the good work, I eagerly await your next post!
pms i bet it was al
ohh, actually a little bumby, this chapter :D Indeed really really enjoying, as usual with you :) I only hope you can straight this big misunderstanding that is keeping those two beauties (Bette and Helena, of course :grin: ) from getting down on each other LOL And I must admin that I’m starting to like Estella as well, her nerve and wild spirit are always a bit lovely too me even when I hated her for all the shit toward Bette :P Good work, vicky :grin: Thanks a lot
Another masterpiece and a HOT one at it too!!! I like Speed_Racer’s idea a lot :) This is another brilliant chapter v. Just love the way you write and most especially your unique descriptions. Great stuff and can’t wait to see what you’ve got in store for us next! So, is it Shane?