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Double Vision 7
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Barbara met Bette’s eyes evenly “Is she the reason why you’ll be saying no to me tonight?” She knew a woman poised to take the deep plunge into love when she saw one.
Bette did not reply. Is she?
Ah thought the Senator, a small smile touching her lips, a woman who doesn’t know it yet
Am I really falling for Helena? Bette gazed back at the steadily retreating view of the restaurant and saw that the table occupied by Helena was now vacant.
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(Meanwhile, nearby hotel)
Helena strode into her hotel room and slammed the door shut. She didn’t bother putting on a Do Not Disturb sign, she would handle whoever disrupted her seething, God help them. One thing reduced Helena to this state of complete anger and utter frustration- being kept away from her children.
‘Total despair’ would also be an accurate description, for Helena was near tears again. She had been crying, back at the restaurant, but you know how it is with tears- finding that the person who sees you crying is not moved in the slightest by your heartfelt desperation, takes away the meaning of tears. And then you cry alone… as did Helena now.
If only she was in the warm embrace of someone right now. Not someone cold, unkind and vengeful, like her ex. Someone thoughtful… caring… strong, kind, intelligent, passionate, alluring, soft dark hair, soothing voice, with deep brown eyes that would hold you, strong arms that would encircle you, and lips… Helena’s breath quickened… lips that touch your own sweetly and then…
Bette was on top of her now, her lips moulding furiously with Helena’s. Bette’s hot tongue reached out to meet Helena’s and then withdrew to trace her lips, pulling her bottom lip into her mouth, nibbling softly, and bit down gently, making Helena moan. Bette’s mouth licked the way to Helena’s neck, found that special spot and sucked.
“Yes…yes…” gasped Helena, pushing Bette’s head down to her achingly taut nipples. Bette moved down and circled the left nipple with her tongue. Helena arched her back “suck them… please… I need to feel… aaaah!” she groaned as she suddenly felt Bette’s mouth clamp down on her nipple and felt the grazing of her teeth. Bette moved to the right breast, her mouth covering the nipple, she suckled hungrily, her tongue still swirling.
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Yay first LOL. Good job V, this was again one very delightfull chapter. So who busted them this time our dear friende nosy nose AL??? LOL. Please don’t wait that long again to post another chapter although we understood you were really busy.
I really love this story, VVitch. I can’t wait for Shane to find out about Estelle and Helena. I certainly hope Bette’ll just toss caution to the wind and throw Helena on some flat surface and have her way with her. Great job.
Funny about Helena and Estelle, they all comfuse about these twin and now whos come behide them, Alice lol. Helena and Bette should talk and tell each other about their feeling. OK post soon please, thanks!
I’m so glad to see you continue this story Master V. I do believe Yoda Shane has figured out the mystery twins. I like the pace you are keeping the story. Very, very excellent job
phew! I might die a little inside if Helena continued on thinking Bette’s rejecting her… some kind of pheramone must be released when these two get together ’cause someone’s always there to catch them pwahah (Uh…well, I *wasn’t* going to comment so that you’ll have less work to do next time, but oh well…)
*waving* Yey V!! Glad you were able to come up for air and agreed to my proposal without me having to flex any muscle. I am so enjoying this as always. Who? I agree, Shane or Al. This indeed was not the KOD…just a sweet smooch ;)!
okay, that was so cute, but you gotta stop leaving us hanging for sooooo long….because this is soooo good. b&h have such chemistry. post soon. THANKS!
Yippi ! Yippi ! I’m so glad you’ve updated, Vvitch. I’m so enjoying your story ! Really, I already loved it in the very beginning, but it just keeps getting better and better… I am officially totally addicted !Anyway, about the cliffhanger, I too think it’s Shane, even though it would be more typical of Alice to make that kind of ( theatrical ) entrance ! LOL ! Thanks again for sharing your gift with us !
First off, official congrats this time! Second, great update! I love this story. I think it’s Kit–just to be different. But this story is really wonderful–I like how you’re bringing in all the girls and their take on what they think they see. Also like how you’re getting into their inner thoughts. Love those cliffhangers! Will I be right? And definitely post your next chapter immediately to make up for that far-too-long wait!
Fantastic chapter V!! Funny as hell, as usual! I LOVE your writing, your just so damn good at it! Eeerrmm i’m going to go with Shane too. i’m with Pands, i too would love Tina to suffer and be jealous. Congrats on finishing your dissertation, and being done with uni, you clever clogs you! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
i think youre flirting with the rating lines there buddy cuz for a minute i was all ” shouldnt this be an NC-17 LOL. Yeah i like speedy’s idea as well!!!! I love this story though!!!!!!!!
Just a quick note to what adumgenius said: Nooooo! Don’t avoid commenting to give me less work! i LIKE work, so do comment!!! :D Ok now that I’m here, many thanks to those who commented so far: BeL, Speedie, ut, Squirl, Dum, Niki, Choc (sweetie, I’m so very sorry for leaving u hanging! It won’t happen again, I’ll try my very hardest, ok? ok?)
vvitch, again a splendid chapter. After Bette seeing Helena in despair, Barbara wasn’t even in the picture anymore. Great character analysis. I just love Helena but I have also a weak spot for Estelle. It’s Estelle who is adressing them isn’t it?
Okie, I was instructed to use the next 3 minutes you have to leave a nice comment at your fic, but YEAH! I was meaning to msg u at work, but was busy. You want to know what I honestly think? It’s fantastic! Your writing style has evolved strongly into something that is sentimental, but not too angsty. I like the whole flow. The emotions of Helena and Bette, how they slowly realise that they can’t be without each toher… You get the drift. Fantastic work V. Great! loved it!
First off, I was a bit surprised by the sex scene…not that it wasn’t good…because a-hem..it was ..just that I was at work and read it…and got all flustered…hehehehe I feel bad for Helena thinking Bette doesn’t want her…I feel bad that Bette is still thinking about what all went wrong…I’m glad Bette didn’t sleep with the Sentor, AND I want Bette and Helena together now…ok? Also it’s just me maybe but I really want Tina to suffer and get jealous…but that’s just me…probably…Great job, keep up the good work, I eagerly await your next post!
pms i bet it was al
ohh, actually a little bumby, this chapter :D Indeed really really enjoying, as usual with you :) I only hope you can straight this big misunderstanding that is keeping those two beauties (Bette and Helena, of course :grin: ) from getting down on each other LOL And I must admin that I’m starting to like Estella as well, her nerve and wild spirit are always a bit lovely too me even when I hated her for all the shit toward Bette :P Good work, vicky :grin: Thanks a lot
Another masterpiece and a HOT one at it too!!! I like Speed_Racer’s idea a lot :) This is another brilliant chapter v. Just love the way you write and most especially your unique descriptions. Great stuff and can’t wait to see what you’ve got in store for us next! So, is it Shane?