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Down on Luck…chapter 2
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“You never adopted her Henry….” Tina screamed……
“You bitch…..I didn’t because you wouldn’t let me….you didn’t want this lifestyle…..”
I had stood there and listened long enough…..I pulled my cell phone out and dialed 911. They were going to dispatch out an officer. I waited…..I didn’t want to enter the home by myself….that would be bad on my part……
Oh, thank god….they are here……they walked up to me…….and asked if this was the address……I said yes and they knocked on the door……….
“What the fuck do you want?” screamed Henry as he opened the door…..
“I had a domestic disturbance call Sir. Is everything ok here?” asked the officer as he looked around Henry. As he moved, Henry took Bette into sight……
“Is this the bitch that called?” he asked as he lunged towards Bette……
“Step back mam….” said the officer…. “Sir, if you do not calm down, I will be forced to take you downtown with me…..”
“Get that fuckin woman away from my house….” he yelled…….
I stood there listening to this, until I heard Tina’s voice…….
“Help! Please…..”
Instinctivly, I pushed past the officer and ran inside to Tina….. “Oh my god” I said….as I saw the blood covering her face… “What the fuck has he done to you?”
“He hit me…..” cried Tina……
“Call an ambulance…” I yelled to the officer……
“No….” blurted Tina…. “I can take myself…”
“No….absolutely not….I will drive you……” I said as I helped her up….and out the door……
“Mam, please, stay at the hospital so that I can come down and take your statement……” said the officer before they left….
“Yes sir….” I said as I led her to my car……..
Once inside, I started the engine, and started towards the hospital………
“Tina…..why didn’t you tell me this was going on?”
“Afraid….he said he would kill me….” Tina cried……
“But still Tina, you could have come to me…” I said….I had to slam on brakes to stop at the red light….I turned my blinker on to turn left….and before I knew it……Tina blurted it out……..
“He hit Angelica too…”
“Oh that is it…..He is toast….first he hit you, and then I find out that he hit our daughter?” Tina could see that I was about to explode with anger…..I was getting so close to losing it……BUT, right now, I had to hold down the forts so that I could be there for Tina, and Angelica was safe with Alice….well, as safe as you could get being with her…….
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I better damn well be first…*happy dance*…gonna go read and brb Wildie!
OK so Henry needs to go and that’s an understatement! First, to abuse anyone emotionally or physically is just beyond unacceptable and I hate knowing that it is something that happens and not just in fanfic. I am very happy that Tina isn’t one of those women that would stay with Henry because at least she’d know what to expect and learn to cope with the abuse. I suspect Henry won’t go away quietly. I expect that he will have a huge run-in with Bette and it won’t be pretty for either. I just hope that in protecting Angie and Tina, Bette doesn’t forget about herself. People like Henry are crazy peanuts and need to be handled carefully or one can never tell what will happen next. Love this woman..of course you should continue!
Why don’t they get a restraining order out on Henry? Have the popo handle his crazy ass.
Yes, please continue. Let them get her stuff before he gets back. Why does Bette not get the whole gang to help, it would be a lot faster. They should be back together, their is no way Bette will be able to be comfortable With Tina and Angela out of her sight with Henry’s crazy ass.
Yes continue…you don’t even have to ask that. I think for the time being Tina should have taken Bette up on her offer to stay at the house. The house is big enough and it seems Tina couldn’t afford a place of her own…why create a financial strain on Bette…and what in the world would she need a 3 bedroom place for? I might sound cruel but it was Tina’s choice to move in with crazy Henry. I think the rest of the gang should get involved even if it is to keep an eye on Angelica. Bette & Tina are a long way off from getting back together. They have alot to talk about. Keep posting please.
They should definetly have a police there when they are collecting Tina stuff…I can’t believ he hit Angelica and he is still standing. Post soon
I can’t believe Henry dared to lay a hand on Angelica. I hope Bette pommels his ass. I feel bad that Tina was abused, but maybe she’ll learn to appreciate what she had in Bette.
To ever hit a child is a very big No No. Found out a long time ago that most Males that abuse women an children want stand up and fight another man,The are cowards, Hope that if he comes to Bette house she uses a Bat on his body. Maybe even play some foot BALL with him Bette will never forget that he hit Angie. thanks
Tina is very lucky Bette went after her..plz continue
Plwase Continue, Henry has to get run down
very good chapter. I will put Henry in the jail, nobody has the right to abuse phisically or emotionally is wrong but when they hurt a child is unforgiveble, but Henry is in a lot of problem cause Bette will kick him. definitly you should continue with ths
See now bad enough laying his hands on Tina, but Boo Boo too, Good Lord! If that was me, well Bette did the right thing, but knowin me, I wudda killed his A$$ and felt no way. I hope he gets what he deserves. and funny enough, I have a feeling this is what Henry is going to be like in the actual show. Anyhoo enjoyin this story keep posting!
Yes please continue. Bette is so into standing up for Tina and her baby girl. Someone like Henry should not be allowed around another human being or animal for that matter. He in unpredictable and could very well kill someone.
DEFINITELY CONTINUE, Good story.
Damn this is bad, henrydick need to die, if he let Bette see him, she gonna kill him, was an asshole. Can’t believe he hit Tina and Angel, going to kill him, never like when man hit woman and children. Good that Bette was there to save Tina and help her. Ok post soon please, thanks!
WOW!!!! So real!!! Thank you and PPS
Henry is crazy and I hope the girls stay safe. thansk.