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Down on Luck…chapter 2
When we arrived at the E.R., I explained what had happened and that the officer would be here shortly to take her statement…… I waited in the waiting room for what seemed like hours. Just sitting there, plotting ways to kill the man that had done this to Tina and our Angelica. I was so deep in thought that I never heard Tina’s name called out for visitors……the young nurse that I had told everything came to me, and said that Tina was asking for me…..
“Right this way” she said as she turned and walked ahead of me to show me where Tina was at……I stopped at the door and looked at Tina….I took in the site in front of me……a busted lip, and a black eye….I slowly walked towards her, not wanting to disturb her rest……as she had closed her eyes.
I sat down next to her in the chair…..and as I did….I guess she felt my prescense…..because she turned her head to me and spoke softly…..
“hey…”
“Hey there…” I said as I stood back up and sat next to her on the bed…..I reached out and ran my fingers from her forehead to the side of her face…… “I am soo sorry Tina…” I said……….it seemed that all of the anger had vanished…the anger of Henry, the anger of her taking Angelica from me, all of it…..Gone….all I cared about at the moment, was making sure that Tina recovered, and that she was never around that asshole again…….
“Listen Tina, I don’t want you staying with him anymore. You can use the spare bedroom at my house, or I can get you somewhere to stay, it doesn’t matter to me…..so long as you are not around him for another minute….”
“After all that I have put you through Bette, why do you even care what happens to me?” she asked.
“I love you Tina. I never stopped loving you…..and believe it or not, I do care for yours and Angelica’s well being….I would never warrant this to happen to you two…..or anyone else for that matter….”
“Thank you….”
“HUH?” I asked….
“I said Thank you …….”
“For what?” I asked. I just wanted to hear her say it…..I knew what she was thanking me for…..
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Gumby says
I better damn well be first…*happy dance*…gonna go read and brb Wildie!
Gumby says
OK so Henry needs to go and that’s an understatement! First, to abuse anyone emotionally or physically is just beyond unacceptable and I hate knowing that it is something that happens and not just in fanfic. I am very happy that Tina isn’t one of those women that would stay with Henry because at least she’d know what to expect and learn to cope with the abuse. I suspect Henry won’t go away quietly. I expect that he will have a huge run-in with Bette and it won’t be pretty for either. I just hope that in protecting Angie and Tina, Bette doesn’t forget about herself. People like Henry are crazy peanuts and need to be handled carefully or one can never tell what will happen next. Love this woman..of course you should continue!
azmama says
Why don’t they get a restraining order out on Henry? Have the popo handle his crazy ass.
asia says
Yes, please continue. Let them get her stuff before he gets back. Why does Bette not get the whole gang to help, it would be a lot faster. They should be back together, their is no way Bette will be able to be comfortable With Tina and Angela out of her sight with Henry’s crazy ass.
skycaptain says
Yes continue…you don’t even have to ask that. I think for the time being Tina should have taken Bette up on her offer to stay at the house. The house is big enough and it seems Tina couldn’t afford a place of her own…why create a financial strain on Bette…and what in the world would she need a 3 bedroom place for? I might sound cruel but it was Tina’s choice to move in with crazy Henry. I think the rest of the gang should get involved even if it is to keep an eye on Angelica. Bette & Tina are a long way off from getting back together. They have alot to talk about. Keep posting please.
Brooke says
They should definetly have a police there when they are collecting Tina stuff…I can’t believ he hit Angelica and he is still standing. Post soon
miamigrl says
I can’t believe Henry dared to lay a hand on Angelica. I hope Bette pommels his ass. I feel bad that Tina was abused, but maybe she’ll learn to appreciate what she had in Bette.
bettyvhall says
To ever hit a child is a very big No No. Found out a long time ago that most Males that abuse women an children want stand up and fight another man,The are cowards, Hope that if he comes to Bette house she uses a Bat on his body. Maybe even play some foot BALL with him Bette will never forget that he hit Angie. thanks
Atg11 says
Tina is very lucky Bette went after her..plz continue
xxjoey6 says
Plwase Continue, Henry has to get run down
gogk says
very good chapter. I will put Henry in the jail, nobody has the right to abuse phisically or emotionally is wrong but when they hurt a child is unforgiveble, but Henry is in a lot of problem cause Bette will kick him. definitly you should continue with ths
Keisha says
See now bad enough laying his hands on Tina, but Boo Boo too, Good Lord! If that was me, well Bette did the right thing, but knowin me, I wudda killed his A$$ and felt no way. I hope he gets what he deserves. and funny enough, I have a feeling this is what Henry is going to be like in the actual show. Anyhoo enjoyin this story keep posting!
pattifloatn says
Yes please continue. Bette is so into standing up for Tina and her baby girl. Someone like Henry should not be allowed around another human being or animal for that matter. He in unpredictable and could very well kill someone.
cabqbw says
DEFINITELY CONTINUE, Good story.
ut says
Damn this is bad, henrydick need to die, if he let Bette see him, she gonna kill him, was an asshole. Can’t believe he hit Tina and Angel, going to kill him, never like when man hit woman and children. Good that Bette was there to save Tina and help her. Ok post soon please, thanks!
akalittlered says
WOW!!!! So real!!! Thank you and PPS
fergz1 says
Henry is crazy and I hope the girls stay safe. thansk.