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Down on Luck…chapter 2
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“Right this way mam…” I said as I walked to the first apartment on the left….I put the key in the hole and turned the lock…….we walked in……together…….
“I picked the best one out of all of them…..it is a suite…..lots of space, 3 bedrooms, and a big kitchen….”
“Wow, its beautiful Bette…..”
“And look….” I said as I attempted to grab her hand and pull her towards the bathroom….I quickly let go….. “I am sorry….” I stated……. “It’s ok…..” she said as she followed me……..
“This was the only suite that had a whirlpool bathtub…..for those relaxing nights after working a hard day…..”
“Wow Bette….u really did outdo yourself this time……it is perfect…….u still know what I like…”
“Of course….” I said with a smile……..I turned to her, and held my hand out…… “and there is only 1 key….and you have it……”
“Thank you again …you have made me a very happy woman in the last 2 days….just by being here for me….”
“you are always welcome….you know I would do anything for you and Angel…..right Angel?” I asked as I kissed my baby girl on the forehead……. “Now that you have seen the place, we need to get you some furniture, and go to Henry’s to get your things…….when will he not be there?”
Tina looked at her watch…. “He usually doesn’t get home till after 7.…so it will be good if we can get it done today….”
“Ok….I am going to call Kit, and see if we could use her truck to get everything you need…..”
“Sounds great…..” said Tina…….
“I’ll just be outside for a few…..” I said as I pulled my cell from my pocket and exited the suite…
“Hello?” answered Kit……
“Hey Kit, look, is there any way that I could use your truck today…..I have a few things that I want to move……”
“It wouldn’t be Tina’s things would it?” asked Kit……
“Well maybe…….why do you ask?”
“Because you wont believe who was here earlier making a complete ass outta himself….I had to have him removed from the premises…”
“Do I get just one guess?” I laughed…….
“2.…..and the first 2 don’t count….”
“Why the hell was he there?” I asked……..
“Asking where Tina was and if she was with you….”
“Next time u see him, tell him that it would not be wise to let my eyes focus on his face….it may be dangerous for his health…..can I use that truck?”
“Sure….just be careful…..he is fuckin crazy…..”………
“You arent telling me anything I don’t know already Kit…..” I hung the phone up and headed back inside……
Tbc………. Still continue?
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I better damn well be first…*happy dance*…gonna go read and brb Wildie!
OK so Henry needs to go and that’s an understatement! First, to abuse anyone emotionally or physically is just beyond unacceptable and I hate knowing that it is something that happens and not just in fanfic. I am very happy that Tina isn’t one of those women that would stay with Henry because at least she’d know what to expect and learn to cope with the abuse. I suspect Henry won’t go away quietly. I expect that he will have a huge run-in with Bette and it won’t be pretty for either. I just hope that in protecting Angie and Tina, Bette doesn’t forget about herself. People like Henry are crazy peanuts and need to be handled carefully or one can never tell what will happen next. Love this woman..of course you should continue!
Why don’t they get a restraining order out on Henry? Have the popo handle his crazy ass.
Yes, please continue. Let them get her stuff before he gets back. Why does Bette not get the whole gang to help, it would be a lot faster. They should be back together, their is no way Bette will be able to be comfortable With Tina and Angela out of her sight with Henry’s crazy ass.
Yes continue…you don’t even have to ask that. I think for the time being Tina should have taken Bette up on her offer to stay at the house. The house is big enough and it seems Tina couldn’t afford a place of her own…why create a financial strain on Bette…and what in the world would she need a 3 bedroom place for? I might sound cruel but it was Tina’s choice to move in with crazy Henry. I think the rest of the gang should get involved even if it is to keep an eye on Angelica. Bette & Tina are a long way off from getting back together. They have alot to talk about. Keep posting please.
They should definetly have a police there when they are collecting Tina stuff…I can’t believ he hit Angelica and he is still standing. Post soon
I can’t believe Henry dared to lay a hand on Angelica. I hope Bette pommels his ass. I feel bad that Tina was abused, but maybe she’ll learn to appreciate what she had in Bette.
To ever hit a child is a very big No No. Found out a long time ago that most Males that abuse women an children want stand up and fight another man,The are cowards, Hope that if he comes to Bette house she uses a Bat on his body. Maybe even play some foot BALL with him Bette will never forget that he hit Angie. thanks
Tina is very lucky Bette went after her..plz continue
Plwase Continue, Henry has to get run down
very good chapter. I will put Henry in the jail, nobody has the right to abuse phisically or emotionally is wrong but when they hurt a child is unforgiveble, but Henry is in a lot of problem cause Bette will kick him. definitly you should continue with ths
See now bad enough laying his hands on Tina, but Boo Boo too, Good Lord! If that was me, well Bette did the right thing, but knowin me, I wudda killed his A$$ and felt no way. I hope he gets what he deserves. and funny enough, I have a feeling this is what Henry is going to be like in the actual show. Anyhoo enjoyin this story keep posting!
Yes please continue. Bette is so into standing up for Tina and her baby girl. Someone like Henry should not be allowed around another human being or animal for that matter. He in unpredictable and could very well kill someone.
DEFINITELY CONTINUE, Good story.
Damn this is bad, henrydick need to die, if he let Bette see him, she gonna kill him, was an asshole. Can’t believe he hit Tina and Angel, going to kill him, never like when man hit woman and children. Good that Bette was there to save Tina and help her. Ok post soon please, thanks!
WOW!!!! So real!!! Thank you and PPS
Henry is crazy and I hope the girls stay safe. thansk.