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Drenched Ch 10
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“Bette you know I’m a pro at keeping everything contained and in its proper place. That’s normal for me. If anything’s going to make me sick it’s letting these emotions come up…and having to deal with them.”
“Well if that’s really true Shane, making love with Tina and me – and just for the record – we discussed it and we both feel it was more like making love than just having sex… Anyway, if the best thing for your life is to live like a stoic, unfeeling woman moving from one meaningless sexual transaction to the next and keeping everything “contained”, then these muscle memories would not have happened. Fuck, your own body is telling you that you are in love with that woman and it’s not going to let you forget it. Loving her is living Shane. Anything else you do is just existing. Don’t you see that?”
“But I fucked up so bad…I don’t think she’ll ever speak to me again.”
“Well my friend, I have to say, you did aim high on the fuck up scale” Bette chuckled and Shane couldn’t help falling into a fit of giggles combined with tears and a couple of hiccups as her emotions settled slightly.
“But listen to me sweetheart, if anyone knows about meaningless sexual transactions and finding redemption when you think you’re the last candidate on earth for it, it’s me. And I’m here to tell you, you’ve got to try, because I’m willing to bet you, Carmen is no more over this (laying her hand on Shane’s chest) and no less haunted by it than you are. In fact, she’s probably more so, because if I recall correctly, she actually acknowledges most of her feelings.” Bette joked.
“Asshole.” Shane shot back.
“Hell, she’s Latina; she probably experiences emotions you and I haven’t even heard of.” Bette teased.
A moment passed as their laughter settled and Shane said,
“What do I do?”
“Isn’t she living with her mom? Bette asked
“That’s what I’ve heard, but I’m not certain.”
“Find her, go to her, prostrate yourself before her and bare your soul. If she’s anything like Tina you’ve got your work cut out for you. But if she loves you like I think she does, if you really work at it and don’t give up, I think she’ll come around. Shane you are one of the most determined people I know when it comes to doing anything possible to guard your heart. For once, turn that around, and do anything possible to reveal it… to the woman you love.”
“God, I want to…it’s just I feel like I have so many ghosts that fuck with my head”
“What are you saying, that you don’t think you’re worthy?” Bette challenged.
“Half the time that’s what I think.”
“What about the other half?” Bette pushed
“Um…that’s the part of me that thinks we could be so fucking happy together.”
“Shane, you are a beautiful, intelligent, successful woman, and I’ll never say this again, but you are so fucking sexy and good in bed that it’s scary. So you need to tell that first, negative half of your brain to sit down and shut up because it’s bringing nothing but pain and stagnation to your life.
If you need to go to therapy to deal with it, then do it, but go after your happiness. Change the percentages. Work at getting your girl and soon your doubting side will only have 25% and eventually zero control of your psyche.”
Shane listened intently to Bette’s words and thought for a moment.
“You think I’m good in bed?”
“Asshole!” Bette shot back as she ruffled her friend’s hair.
TBC
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Aww…that’s awesome! Glad to see that Bette can talk to Shane, need to make the wrongs right Shane, it’s the only way! Great chapter…
I’ll be sad to see this end, but I loved the talk between Bette and Shane. I hope Shane will find happiness with Carmen (and B&T will have more amazing sex). Thanks
It’s good to know that they didn’t hurt their friendship with SHane. I hope that Bette’s talk with prompt Shane to go after the love of her life. Oh and LACOOP, keeping someone on the edge is not as much fun as taking them over it. (LOL)But them I’m sure you already know that. Great chapter.
I’m gald that their threesome has alerted Shane to her feelings for Carmen. Maybe this experience not only served as sex between the best of friends, but the door leading to Shane’s soul mate.
lacoop, I seem to have come late to the party. Had a day off, caught up. In an effort to give away my advancing age, I quote a ‘T Rex’ song from my youth: “You’re dirty sweet and you’re my girl”.
Man although the ex scene has been hot as hell I am still trying to process that they had a threesome with Shane. It’s not the threesome just that it was with a friend. Aside from that I am loving this story! This had potential to turn into some drama but I don’t beleive you will go there. Post Soon!
nicely done coop – glad they can talk! & you are continuing?
So thanks to Bette Shane might go try and reclaim Carmen–good for her. And hi praise from the one and only Bette Porter on her sexual prowess has to make her feel good–it is Bette after all.
Awesome! Thanks for letting Bette be Shane’s shoulder. I never liked Carmen. Could we possibly find Shane another true sole mate other than Carmen, PRETTY PLEASE!!!!
awesome chapter…glad to see that Bette was there for Shane just like Shane has been there for Bette. When she started talking about muscle memory…I thought she was gonna say something like when you hugged me Bette, my thigh muscles locked up like they were locking around your head as you….oh I’m sorry I just went off in my own little world…lol….please post soon.
Darlin Thank you so much for the most Amazing ride you took us on ….I would hate to see this story end but you knwo wht? What a fuckin ride love it love it love it
You know as much fun that the three of them had together, it takes Bette to break into Shane’s overwhelming grief over loosing Carman. Hopefully, Shane will do what Bette has suggested and then go after her woman.
1.) Bette and Tina secure in their relationship? Nah. Never happen.2.) Bette calling Shane by a bunch of pet names (‘sweetie, sweetheart, kiddo – kiddo?!) is out of character.3.) Writing script-style stage directions mid-dialogue is lame.
Good chapter. Good to see Bette and Shane have a talk and their friendship is awesom. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Well, coop, I’m happy that you have someone to share your imagination with, because a mind is a terrible thng to waste and so are multiple orgasms. ;-)
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Last orgasm, fireside?? What did I miss? Awesome story. Your sensitive ending wrapped up the hottest story I ever read! Thanks for the ride.
Wow what a great and amazing chapter, you really nailed the feelings and emotions in this one!!!!!……..I hope you will continue with this story, let B&T get little Angel home, I would love to see how the happy famiy is doing and how B&T are struggleling with their desire for eachother with a baby around LOL. And there are of course Shane, will she ever get Carmen back??? – you have to let us know :o))……..Do I have to beg???????
Hell, what the f*ck was that????I just read your whole story and I´m totally amazed. That´s really a great story! I love the way Tina and Bette care about Shane even in a sexual way.Awesome story line! Great!
I’m so glad that they were able to all talk through their feelings about what has happened. Though I’m not as convinced that Carmen and Shane belong together, I’ll go on for the ride if that’s your plan! You’ve made it a plausible thing, and I thank you for continuing this awesome story!
Excellent twist!! The threesome triggers Shane’s muscle memory and makes her crave for Carmen. Congrats are in order. You good…Can we please have more sex now?? (LOL)