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Drenched Ch 10
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“You know what honey?
“Hmmm?”
“When I think about it, except when Shane really got her groove on with that third wish, I feel that so much of what we did was about sharing our love with Shane and making her feel special. Don’t get me wrong, it was beyond sexy watching her make love to you, but in the end, to me, it was more about love than sex.”
“I think you are so right, and I think that’s probably why I feel ok with it. I just hope that she does.”
“Well I’ll talk to her. I know…get my ass in the shower.” Bette said as she trotted down the hall.
“And hurry because I’m starving.” Tina called after her.
Shane’s house
“Knock knock” Bette called as she peered through the screen door.
“Yeah…come in!” Shane replied from her seat on the couch.
“Hey girl… you awake?” Bette replied as she entered the house, not yet knowing Shane’s location.
“Sure, can I get you some coffee?” Shane said as Bette rounded the corner to the living room.
“Nah, I’ve already had my quota for the day.”
“I’ve got juice or water if you like.”
“I’m good.” Bette responded as she sat down at the other end of the couch, looking at Shane who was not really making eye contact.”
“Hey kiddo are you alright?” Bette asked as Shane looked at her for the first time.
“Well given the circumstances, that’s a pretty loaded question wouldn’t you say?” Shane chuckled.
“Yeah, I guess you’re right there.” Bette couldn’t help smiling.
“Well, Tina and I were a little worried about you and I just wanted to check in…”
Shane had her eyes directed to the ground and did not immediately respond to Bette’s show of concern.
“Hey” Bette said as she began to worry. When Shane finally lifted her eyes they were shining with unshed tears.
“Hey sweetie”, Bette breathed as she scooted over to Shane and wrapped her arm around her. “Fuck, did we make a huge mistake last night?”
“No…you guys were wonderful.” Shane muttered between sobs as the tears rolled down.
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Aww…that’s awesome! Glad to see that Bette can talk to Shane, need to make the wrongs right Shane, it’s the only way! Great chapter…
I’ll be sad to see this end, but I loved the talk between Bette and Shane. I hope Shane will find happiness with Carmen (and B&T will have more amazing sex). Thanks
It’s good to know that they didn’t hurt their friendship with SHane. I hope that Bette’s talk with prompt Shane to go after the love of her life. Oh and LACOOP, keeping someone on the edge is not as much fun as taking them over it. (LOL)But them I’m sure you already know that. Great chapter.
I’m gald that their threesome has alerted Shane to her feelings for Carmen. Maybe this experience not only served as sex between the best of friends, but the door leading to Shane’s soul mate.
lacoop, I seem to have come late to the party. Had a day off, caught up. In an effort to give away my advancing age, I quote a ‘T Rex’ song from my youth: “You’re dirty sweet and you’re my girl”.
Man although the ex scene has been hot as hell I am still trying to process that they had a threesome with Shane. It’s not the threesome just that it was with a friend. Aside from that I am loving this story! This had potential to turn into some drama but I don’t beleive you will go there. Post Soon!
nicely done coop – glad they can talk! & you are continuing?
So thanks to Bette Shane might go try and reclaim Carmen–good for her. And hi praise from the one and only Bette Porter on her sexual prowess has to make her feel good–it is Bette after all.
Awesome! Thanks for letting Bette be Shane’s shoulder. I never liked Carmen. Could we possibly find Shane another true sole mate other than Carmen, PRETTY PLEASE!!!!
awesome chapter…glad to see that Bette was there for Shane just like Shane has been there for Bette. When she started talking about muscle memory…I thought she was gonna say something like when you hugged me Bette, my thigh muscles locked up like they were locking around your head as you….oh I’m sorry I just went off in my own little world…lol….please post soon.
Darlin Thank you so much for the most Amazing ride you took us on ….I would hate to see this story end but you knwo wht? What a fuckin ride love it love it love it
You know as much fun that the three of them had together, it takes Bette to break into Shane’s overwhelming grief over loosing Carman. Hopefully, Shane will do what Bette has suggested and then go after her woman.
1.) Bette and Tina secure in their relationship? Nah. Never happen.2.) Bette calling Shane by a bunch of pet names (‘sweetie, sweetheart, kiddo – kiddo?!) is out of character.3.) Writing script-style stage directions mid-dialogue is lame.
Good chapter. Good to see Bette and Shane have a talk and their friendship is awesom. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Well, coop, I’m happy that you have someone to share your imagination with, because a mind is a terrible thng to waste and so are multiple orgasms. ;-)
cool
Last orgasm, fireside?? What did I miss? Awesome story. Your sensitive ending wrapped up the hottest story I ever read! Thanks for the ride.
Wow what a great and amazing chapter, you really nailed the feelings and emotions in this one!!!!!……..I hope you will continue with this story, let B&T get little Angel home, I would love to see how the happy famiy is doing and how B&T are struggleling with their desire for eachother with a baby around LOL. And there are of course Shane, will she ever get Carmen back??? – you have to let us know :o))……..Do I have to beg???????
Hell, what the f*ck was that????I just read your whole story and I´m totally amazed. That´s really a great story! I love the way Tina and Bette care about Shane even in a sexual way.Awesome story line! Great!
I’m so glad that they were able to all talk through their feelings about what has happened. Though I’m not as convinced that Carmen and Shane belong together, I’ll go on for the ride if that’s your plan! You’ve made it a plausible thing, and I thank you for continuing this awesome story!
Excellent twist!! The threesome triggers Shane’s muscle memory and makes her crave for Carmen. Congrats are in order. You good…Can we please have more sex now?? (LOL)