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    Drenched Ch 9

    Story written on August 18, 2006 by lacoop.
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    “Bette, please don’t move unless I tell you to…and then do exactly as I say and nothing more. Do you understand?” Shane spoke softly with total control.

    Previously…

     

    “Can I ask you a question now?” Bette interjected as she looked lovingly at Shane.

     

    “I know you consented but I don’t know how you feel now…and I, we would never want to hurt you.  Are you ok with this?   ”

     

    “I am humbled that you would trust me on that level and flattered that two very sexy women who I admire more than…anyone, would want me in that way.” Shane confessed sincerely and a bit wistfully.

     

    “Shane?” Tina almost whispered.

     

    “Yes?”

     

    “It’s time for the last wish…and that one, my dear, is yours.”

     

     

     

    Shane stared into space for a long moment and then smiled devilishly. 

     

    “Ok, first, Bette may I speak with you for a sec?”

     

    “Sure,” Bette responded, not actually feeling so sure.

     

    She smiled a bit sheepishly at Tina and got up to follow Shane to the other side of the room.  Bette had, by this time, donned a silk robe, so as not to feel quite so exposed.

     

    Whispering in Bette’s ear, Shane asked, “Do you have a bullet or something like it?”

     

    “You mean a small bullet vibrator?”

     

     “Uh Huh.”

     

    “Yes it’s in the nightstand drawer on my side of the bed.”

     

    “Great, that’s all I need to know about that.  Now, I don’t want to tell you what I have in mind, but I’m going to ask you to trust me and know that if you feel at all uncomfortable as we proceed that you can just say stop.”

     

    “Alright,” Bette whispered, knowing that she had pushed Shane’s trust to the limit less than an hour ago and that she could not, in good conscience, refuse her now.

     

    “Thank you, now one more thing…may I blindfold you?”

     

    “Wow, I guess so.” Was all Bette could say.

    Leaving Bette where she stood, Shane walked to where Tina sat on the bed.

     

    Bending down she quietly inquired, “Do you have a scarf?”

     

    “Yeah,” Tina replied eyes wide in wonder.

     

    Tina went to the dresser and pulled out a silk scarf that she and Bette had used now and then for a little spice in bed.  She extended it to Shane, but Shane just shook her head.

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    4. Hot Damn!!! That was pure torture… but I loved every excruciatingly slow moment of it! =) I don’t even have to mention how Sexy it was! For cryin out loud, woman!… ‘peoples be tryin ta werk an stuff… and you writin thangs like dis’ LOL That was damn good! Are you stopping here or continuing or writing others similar to this one? I got a cravin that you’re fulfilling. Excellent chapter!

    8. God, you hit just about dead on what I was thinking. Your are unbelievable. Earlier today I checked your stories to see if I missed your update and saw “Unzipped” and had to read. Oh my God!!!! You should be winning the hot shower awards all over the place.

    14. Well, that was, well………. drenched indeed. Damn, can Bette have a daydream about me and Tina that we can act out at some later date. Shane just might be the luckiest ladt in weho, besides Tina that is who gets to sleep w/ Bette everyday. Post soon.

    15. Holy fucking cow!!!!!! That’s absolutely one of the hottest post I’ve ever been reading. And this whole story is just too fucking amazing, it should come with a health-warning LOL. Post more and soon please :o))

    18. LACOOP! I thought you forgot about us? So happy to see your post and thank you for taking time to respond to all our comments. Okay, this wish…was UNF*CKING BELIEVABLE! I found myself mesmerized by your words and breathless by the end of the story. You are definately one of the best NC-17 writers on this site. After reading all the comments that have been left, it looks like I’m not the only one who feels that way. You absolutely, unequivocally , ROCK us with this story. I hope you will post again soon.

    21. This is crazy…good thing it was only 3 wishes cause I don’t think I could take anymore…lol…whew talking about HOT! What’s gonna happen next?

    22. sweet jesus!!!(mental note: NEVER AGAIN read NC-17 stories at work. Very painful!!)Great job lacoop. Keep up the good work (Though that might prevent us from doing any…)

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