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Drenched Ch 9
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Bette sensed the difference but was not certain what was now pressing with the same recurring force (or lack thereof) against her need.
“More what Bette?” Shane insisted.
“Break…shit…”
“What…break what Bette?”
“Break that…barrier”
“Tell me Bette…what?” Shane demanded now.
“Fuck….T…Shane…FUCK…FUCK MEEE! I need you INSIDE!!!”
Shane looked directly in Tina’s eyes shining black with lust and held up her hand.
“Bette…it’s yours…lean back and take it!! Shane stated, symbolically turning the key to sexual oblivion.
“GODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!” Bette screamed as she pressed her ass back, taking the length and width of the shaft into core. Pulling forward she pushed back immediately wanting to set the rhythm that would take her exactly where she wanted, needed and her body was screaming to go.
“NO!” Shane commanded.
“SLOW…you can only have it slow…or not at all” Shane’s voice was now hard and completely without mercy as she tweaked both of Bette’s nipples likewise.
Bette relented allowing Tina to grab her hips and dictate the speed and agony of the stroke that was currently legal in Shane’s little corner of heaven.
Without warning Shane rolled off the bed and opened the nightstand drawer. Grabbing the miniature pleasure toy she climbed back on the bed and removed her shirt as she pressed herself right up behind Tina. Tina now knew how much this little erotic production was getting to its director as she felt Shane’s wetness pressing into the firmness of her ass. Shane kissed and licked Tina’s neck wrapping her hands under and around her magnificent breasts.
“Unnnnnh” Tina arched her back pressing her head into Shane’s shoulder yet changing nothing about the slow, agonizing fuck she delivered to her woman with building lust and a need for release barely trailing Bette’s on the desperation scale.
Then she felt it; Shane’s hand reaching inside the harness between the leather and her drenched pussy. After rotating the flat end of the bullet to full vibrate Shane inserted the rounded end down Tina’s crotch nestling it between her lips just below her clit.
By itself the vibration offered lovely yet not very strong stimulation. When pushed against the harness as Tina drove the dildo deep into Bette the vibration intensified to just beyond exquisite.
“Ohh Fuck!” Tina moaned simultaneously at the pleasure she controlled and the torture of it being restrained by the pace Shane preordained. Now two women were despondent, pushed right up to the edge devoid of completely fulfilling means of throwing their bodies over it.
“Tina,” Shane whispered into her ear, “wrap your hand around Bette and circle her clit with your fingers, slooowly.”
“God Teeeeeeeee, don’t you dare fucking stop!!!!!” Bette cried when Tina began executing her assigned mission.
By this time Shane was rubbing her throbbing clit into Tina’s ass with each thrust that Tina made into the powder keg that was Bette’s vagina.
“Ok.” Shane groaned as she pressed a little harder and a little faster into Tina’s rear.
“Ok…Ok…OK…OK……..!!!! Shane began to chant as the beats per minute increased the slide of her slippery clit against Tina’s ass which triggered the buzz of the bullet into Tina’s clit as she twirled Bette’s, pressing the head of the erection harder…and faster…HARDER…FASTER…FASTER…FASTER into Bette’s absolutely fucking pulsating G-Spot.
Lightning slammed into and through Bette and cracked once and once again into the women pulverizing her core with ache after mesmerizing ache of SWEEEEET RELEAEAEAEAEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tina couldn’t stop her rapid pulsing thrusts of the shaft into Bette. They carried her on a huge wave through a splashing, undulating tunnel of convulsions that she rode as she was ridden by Shane…stung with flashes of the lightning…still reverberating through three bodies joined yet all together blown apart by the forces of this universe.
Crashing in to the coolness of the soft sheets and the safety of their breathless sensual shelter, the rapid intake and exhale air was the only sound…
“Jesus Shane …I don’t know… you are fucking…shit…where did you learn how to do that?!!” Bette breathed and giggled pulling Tina’s arms around her.
“Fucking never mind…I know you wouldn’t answer even if you could….”
TBC
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DAMN!
Well alrighty then
Double damn, I knew it was a bad idea to read this story at work. Where is my cold shower? La, you are so bad.
Hot Damn!!! That was pure torture… but I loved every excruciatingly slow moment of it! =) I don’t even have to mention how Sexy it was! For cryin out loud, woman!… ‘peoples be tryin ta werk an stuff… and you writin thangs like dis’ LOL That was damn good! Are you stopping here or continuing or writing others similar to this one? I got a cravin that you’re fulfilling. Excellent chapter!
takin my jaw back and puttin it wher it belongs :) and i belive my work is not gonnabe done today since i would be havin vivid utterly erotic thoughts of them makin delicious lustfull sex…U FUCKING RULE
Holy hell, that was good. I loved that Shane made Bette give up control. Please don’t let this weekend ever end :)
Bette definitely gave it up! OK, this story ROCKS~!
God, you hit just about dead on what I was thinking. Your are unbelievable. Earlier today I checked your stories to see if I missed your update and saw “Unzipped” and had to read. Oh my God!!!! You should be winning the hot shower awards all over the place.
Crikey. That was intense as f*ck at the end there.
What a wonderful, vivid imagination you have. I hope you have someone special to share it with.
omfg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! my computer fucking melted this was fucking hottttttttttttttttttttttttt damn
That was extremely steamy and erotic. Damn I need more than a cold shower. Any suggestions?
ok so that’s part 3 now can I get a clean freshly showered out of the bathroom in the bed B & T NC17?????
Well, that was, well………. drenched indeed. Damn, can Bette have a daydream about me and Tina that we can act out at some later date. Shane just might be the luckiest ladt in weho, besides Tina that is who gets to sleep w/ Bette everyday. Post soon.
Holy fucking cow!!!!!! That’s absolutely one of the hottest post I’ve ever been reading. And this whole story is just too fucking amazing, it should come with a health-warning LOL. Post more and soon please :o))
Damn damn damn, so fucking hot and awesome, love iy. OK post soon please, thanks!
WOW…*THUD*….a little help getting up please? I just hit the floor where my jaw was!
LACOOP! I thought you forgot about us? So happy to see your post and thank you for taking time to respond to all our comments. Okay, this wish…was UNF*CKING BELIEVABLE! I found myself mesmerized by your words and breathless by the end of the story. You are definately one of the best NC-17 writers on this site. After reading all the comments that have been left, it looks like I’m not the only one who feels that way. You absolutely, unequivocally , ROCK us with this story. I hope you will post again soon.
Wow!! I will be walking a little funny for the rest of the day!!! Thanks!
Ok Tina’s blonde ass is out and my blonde ass is in I want to be between those two erotic beauties. Great fantasy you painted in my head.
This is crazy…good thing it was only 3 wishes cause I don’t think I could take anymore…lol…whew talking about HOT! What’s gonna happen next?
sweet jesus!!!(mental note: NEVER AGAIN read NC-17 stories at work. Very painful!!)Great job lacoop. Keep up the good work (Though that might prevent us from doing any…)
holy hell
holy shit batman, just when i think you can’t possibly top yourself, your write this, i think breathing has become a problem!!!!