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Drenched Ch 9
As Shane teased in this fashion, Bette let the tip of her tongue slip out and make contact with Shane’s lips ever so slightly as they drew near.
“Mmmmh” Shane moaned at Bette’s reciprocal tease…and, without warning, bit her lower lip playfully and sucked it into her mouth as a battle of tongues ensued. Their bodies, on the other hand, made no contact at all.
Pulling away Shane instructed, “Bette I need you to take off your robe and lie down on the bed.”
Without a sound Bette, let the silk slip from her shoulders as Shane took her hand and led her across the room.
“Lay down on your stomach.” Shane insisted quietly. Bette lay in the middle of the bed with her head resting to one side on a pillow.
Shane turned to Tina and motioned for her to follow. They walked away from the bed and Shane picked up the strap-on and harness as she moved. Whispering so as not to alert Bette to her intentions, Shane asked,
“Have you worn one of these before?”
“Yes.” Was all she said as she stepped into the leather straps Shane held out for her. Careful not to make a sound, Shane cinched the straps and buckled them to fit snug to Tina’s hips and butt.
Tina placed her hands on Shane’s hips to steady herself during this process. When Shane had accomplished the proper fit Tina pulled her close and pressed her new friend against Shane’s thigh. Shane, still clad in nothing but her button-down shirt, instinctively pulled her in tighter and dipped her head to engage Tina in a wet, hot kiss.
Shane’s mind flashed for a split second on the difference in these women’s kisses: one a bit reserved and smoldering, the other playful, brash and sexy.
“Tina, I want you to touch Bette any way you wish to arouse and stimulate her but without letting her know you’re wearing this… until I say so. Just follow my lead.”
Bette was growing anxious lying quietly on the bed, not knowing what else was going on in the room. The ironic thing was that, on an energy level, there were a million charged particles flying around the room; wreaking havoc with her imagination and sending electric pulses directly to her clit. Suddenly she felt movement on the bed and warm breath against her ear.
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(58 votes, average: 3.88 out of 5)
DAMN!
Well alrighty then
Double damn, I knew it was a bad idea to read this story at work. Where is my cold shower? La, you are so bad.
Hot Damn!!! That was pure torture… but I loved every excruciatingly slow moment of it! =) I don’t even have to mention how Sexy it was! For cryin out loud, woman!… ‘peoples be tryin ta werk an stuff… and you writin thangs like dis’ LOL That was damn good! Are you stopping here or continuing or writing others similar to this one? I got a cravin that you’re fulfilling. Excellent chapter!
takin my jaw back and puttin it wher it belongs :) and i belive my work is not gonnabe done today since i would be havin vivid utterly erotic thoughts of them makin delicious lustfull sex…U FUCKING RULE
Holy hell, that was good. I loved that Shane made Bette give up control. Please don’t let this weekend ever end :)
Bette definitely gave it up! OK, this story ROCKS~!
God, you hit just about dead on what I was thinking. Your are unbelievable. Earlier today I checked your stories to see if I missed your update and saw “Unzipped” and had to read. Oh my God!!!! You should be winning the hot shower awards all over the place.
Crikey. That was intense as f*ck at the end there.
What a wonderful, vivid imagination you have. I hope you have someone special to share it with.
omfg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! my computer fucking melted this was fucking hottttttttttttttttttttttttt damn
That was extremely steamy and erotic. Damn I need more than a cold shower. Any suggestions?
ok so that’s part 3 now can I get a clean freshly showered out of the bathroom in the bed B & T NC17?????
Well, that was, well………. drenched indeed. Damn, can Bette have a daydream about me and Tina that we can act out at some later date. Shane just might be the luckiest ladt in weho, besides Tina that is who gets to sleep w/ Bette everyday. Post soon.
Holy fucking cow!!!!!! That’s absolutely one of the hottest post I’ve ever been reading. And this whole story is just too fucking amazing, it should come with a health-warning LOL. Post more and soon please :o))
Damn damn damn, so fucking hot and awesome, love iy. OK post soon please, thanks!
WOW…*THUD*….a little help getting up please? I just hit the floor where my jaw was!
LACOOP! I thought you forgot about us? So happy to see your post and thank you for taking time to respond to all our comments. Okay, this wish…was UNF*CKING BELIEVABLE! I found myself mesmerized by your words and breathless by the end of the story. You are definately one of the best NC-17 writers on this site. After reading all the comments that have been left, it looks like I’m not the only one who feels that way. You absolutely, unequivocally , ROCK us with this story. I hope you will post again soon.
Wow!! I will be walking a little funny for the rest of the day!!! Thanks!
Ok Tina’s blonde ass is out and my blonde ass is in I want to be between those two erotic beauties. Great fantasy you painted in my head.
This is crazy…good thing it was only 3 wishes cause I don’t think I could take anymore…lol…whew talking about HOT! What’s gonna happen next?
sweet jesus!!!(mental note: NEVER AGAIN read NC-17 stories at work. Very painful!!)Great job lacoop. Keep up the good work (Though that might prevent us from doing any…)
holy hell
holy shit batman, just when i think you can’t possibly top yourself, your write this, i think breathing has become a problem!!!!