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    Drenched Ch 9

    Story written on August 18, 2006 by lacoop.
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    “Bette, please don’t move unless I tell you to…and then do exactly as I say and nothing more. Do you understand?” Shane spoke softly with total control.

     

    “Go to Bette” she whispered, “give her some indication of your love and trust and tie it around her head, covering her eyes, securely.  Then come back and sit quietly on the bed.”

     

    Bette gazed out the window as Tina approached her.  Tina slipped her hand in Bette’s, “Baby,” she softly placed her lips next to Bette’s ear “I love you so much.” Kissing her jaw and breathing warm, moist air against her ear caused a shiver down Bette’s spine.  Tina planted tiny licks and kisses down her jaw until she reached her mouth and sucked her bottom lip into her own.

     

    Tina’s erect nipple brushed against Bette’s arm as she savored the taste and feel of Tina’s tongue swirling against her own. 

    “Mmmm T, God, I love you too.”

     

    “Can I put this on you babe?”  Tina asked with pure adoration shining in her eyes.

     

    “You know I can’t refuse you, T.” Chuckling, “I think Shane knows it too.”

     

    Tina rolled the scarf and placed it gently across Bette’s eyes and tied it firmly behind her head.  She then swept a hand behind Bette’s neck and pulled her into a scorching lip lock as she leaned her drenched vulva into Bette’s exposed thigh, raising the stakes and the temperature just a tad.  She abruptly pulled away and walked to the bed, leaving Bette in the dark and breathing heavy by the window.

     

    What seemed like minutes passed as Bette stood silently pressing her index finger against

     the spot where her lover’s wetness had left its mark.

     

    She suddenly felt Shane’s body very close to her own.  Her scent was distinct from Tina’s, so there was no mistaking the two.

     

    “Bette,” Shane whispered, barely audible.

     

    “Hm?”

     

    “May I kiss you?”

     

    “Mmm…yess.”

     

    Bette was intrigued by how unusual it felt to anticipate kissing someone who wasn’t Tina with one of her senses blocked off.  The first sensation she encountered was Shane’s breath on her neck just below her jaw line, and then her lips very delicately grazing her chin.  They skimmed lightly toward the edge of her mouth and across her lips, but Bette felt more aware of her warm breath than the actual touch of her lips.  It was sexy as hell.

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    4. Hot Damn!!! That was pure torture… but I loved every excruciatingly slow moment of it! =) I don’t even have to mention how Sexy it was! For cryin out loud, woman!… ‘peoples be tryin ta werk an stuff… and you writin thangs like dis’ LOL That was damn good! Are you stopping here or continuing or writing others similar to this one? I got a cravin that you’re fulfilling. Excellent chapter!

    8. God, you hit just about dead on what I was thinking. Your are unbelievable. Earlier today I checked your stories to see if I missed your update and saw “Unzipped” and had to read. Oh my God!!!! You should be winning the hot shower awards all over the place.

    14. Well, that was, well………. drenched indeed. Damn, can Bette have a daydream about me and Tina that we can act out at some later date. Shane just might be the luckiest ladt in weho, besides Tina that is who gets to sleep w/ Bette everyday. Post soon.

    15. Holy fucking cow!!!!!! That’s absolutely one of the hottest post I’ve ever been reading. And this whole story is just too fucking amazing, it should come with a health-warning LOL. Post more and soon please :o))

    18. LACOOP! I thought you forgot about us? So happy to see your post and thank you for taking time to respond to all our comments. Okay, this wish…was UNF*CKING BELIEVABLE! I found myself mesmerized by your words and breathless by the end of the story. You are definately one of the best NC-17 writers on this site. After reading all the comments that have been left, it looks like I’m not the only one who feels that way. You absolutely, unequivocally , ROCK us with this story. I hope you will post again soon.

    21. This is crazy…good thing it was only 3 wishes cause I don’t think I could take anymore…lol…whew talking about HOT! What’s gonna happen next?

    22. sweet jesus!!!(mental note: NEVER AGAIN read NC-17 stories at work. Very painful!!)Great job lacoop. Keep up the good work (Though that might prevent us from doing any…)

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