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    Drenched Ch 9

    Story written on August 18, 2006 by lacoop.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=62121
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    “Bette, please don’t move unless I tell you to…and then do exactly as I say and nothing more. Do you understand?” Shane spoke softly with total control.

     

    “Bette, please don’t move unless I tell you to…and then do exactly as I say and nothing more.  Do you understand?” Shane spoke softly with total control.

     

    Bette hesitated with doubt and the slightest bit of fear-tinged lust.  She was not accustomed to relinquishing control but there was something so soothing and erotic about Shane’s voice and how she used it that made the letting go…electrifying.

     

    “Yes.”

     

    “Good, can you spread your legs a little?”

     

    Bette complied feeling moisture begin to gather at the base of her mons.

     

    “May I touch you?” Shane asked.

     

    Not sure exactly what Shane meant, but feeling warm and relaxed by the tone of her voice, Bette whispered,

     

    “Ok.”

     

    Shane softly yet deliberately placed her middle finger just under the hood of Bette’s clit and eased it back through the juicy, hot deliciousness of her labia before pulling it away.

     

    “Mmmmh, Shaane.” Bette moaned involuntarily.

     

    “My God you’re so fucking wet and…ready!”  Shane gasped.

     

    Before she could respond, Bette became aware of a warm, wet sensation at the base of her spine and knew it had to be Tina’s mouth.  It’s funny how you know the feel of your woman even in a dark room on a remote part of your body.  Instinctively she pressed her bottom up into the tingly touch.

     

    Tina very slowly let her tongue slide from the top of Bette’s crack up every vertebrae of her back depositing small kisses along the way.  Crouching at Bette’s side opposite where her head was turned, Tina leaned in and moved Bette’s hair away from her neck.  But instead of kissing her neck, she raised her ass and let her breasts dip down dragging one erect nipple after the other from Bette’s hair line all the way to her ass.

     

    Bette moaned and pressed her ass up in order to gain more contact with Tina’s luscious boobs as they slid against the crease between her cheeks.  Bette was now up on her knees as Tina’s breasts dropped down and around the curve of her derriere.  Careful to keep her hard one at bay, Tina eased her tongue passed dimples and into the lovely divide in her lover’s unbelievably fuckable ass.  If the 7” wonder were truly part of Tina’s body, it would have twitched right then reflecting the charge throbbing through its budding anatomical counterpart.

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    4. Hot Damn!!! That was pure torture… but I loved every excruciatingly slow moment of it! =) I don’t even have to mention how Sexy it was! For cryin out loud, woman!… ‘peoples be tryin ta werk an stuff… and you writin thangs like dis’ LOL That was damn good! Are you stopping here or continuing or writing others similar to this one? I got a cravin that you’re fulfilling. Excellent chapter!

    8. God, you hit just about dead on what I was thinking. Your are unbelievable. Earlier today I checked your stories to see if I missed your update and saw “Unzipped” and had to read. Oh my God!!!! You should be winning the hot shower awards all over the place.

    14. Well, that was, well………. drenched indeed. Damn, can Bette have a daydream about me and Tina that we can act out at some later date. Shane just might be the luckiest ladt in weho, besides Tina that is who gets to sleep w/ Bette everyday. Post soon.

    15. Holy fucking cow!!!!!! That’s absolutely one of the hottest post I’ve ever been reading. And this whole story is just too fucking amazing, it should come with a health-warning LOL. Post more and soon please :o))

    18. LACOOP! I thought you forgot about us? So happy to see your post and thank you for taking time to respond to all our comments. Okay, this wish…was UNF*CKING BELIEVABLE! I found myself mesmerized by your words and breathless by the end of the story. You are definately one of the best NC-17 writers on this site. After reading all the comments that have been left, it looks like I’m not the only one who feels that way. You absolutely, unequivocally , ROCK us with this story. I hope you will post again soon.

    21. This is crazy…good thing it was only 3 wishes cause I don’t think I could take anymore…lol…whew talking about HOT! What’s gonna happen next?

    22. sweet jesus!!!(mental note: NEVER AGAIN read NC-17 stories at work. Very painful!!)Great job lacoop. Keep up the good work (Though that might prevent us from doing any…)

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