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Drenched Ch 9
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“Aaaah, Jesus,” Bette winced as her need was cranked up more than she thought possible given the already incredible arousal and release experienced this night.
“Bette,” Shane admonished, still close to Bette’s ear, “I didn’t tell you you could move.”
“No.” Shane spoke as Bette began to lower her hips. “Stay where you are now.”
Tina, undeterred by Shane and Bette’s interaction, was now placing small bites all around Bette’s round, firm butt. She moved closer and closer to Bette’s drenched opening, finally letting the tip of her tongue graze the sensitive skin, with unbearable lightness, on the puckered pinkness just north of it.
“Mmmm, T what are you doing?” Bette gasped.
“Does that feel good Bette…do you want more?” Shane intoned.
“God yess!”
Flattening her tongue, Tina let it slide south, lips against lips, tongue touching silken wet plumpness, nose dipping into Bette’s heady aching flow. Then she ran right over that swollen bump drawing a gasp from her lover but moving back to repeat the slide. Yes, to slide her flat member down that same path; undeterred by moans, unrelenting in her refusal to press more firmly into the throbbing woman who desired nothing more than the press of firmness right there. Even in the midst of this sensual trance, Bette remembered she was not allowed to move the ass she so desperately wanted to bear down on Tina with.
As if on the same wavelength, though without a word passing between them, Shane desired and Tina accomplished this repeated stroke with no variation. Master and slave, rendering one woman helpless as she edged centimeter by centimeter toward total loss of control, total giving in, giving up, giving everything to have one more ounce of pressure where she needed it most.
“What do you want Bette?” Shane whispered as she slid her arm under Bette and pinched a desperately hard nipple between thumb and forefinger.
“Ohhhh fuck…”
“Bette,” Shane repeated as she squeezed the fullness of her breast in her palm, “What do you need?”
“More…I need more!” Bette gasped breathlessly.
Tina removed her mouth causing Bette to inhale sharply in disappointment. Without delay but with Shane’s nod of consent, Tina leaned back and wrapped her hand around the black shaft. She leaned her hips in just enough to enable her hand to place the smooth round head into the juices just vacated by her mouth.
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DAMN!
Well alrighty then
Double damn, I knew it was a bad idea to read this story at work. Where is my cold shower? La, you are so bad.
Hot Damn!!! That was pure torture… but I loved every excruciatingly slow moment of it! =) I don’t even have to mention how Sexy it was! For cryin out loud, woman!… ‘peoples be tryin ta werk an stuff… and you writin thangs like dis’ LOL That was damn good! Are you stopping here or continuing or writing others similar to this one? I got a cravin that you’re fulfilling. Excellent chapter!
takin my jaw back and puttin it wher it belongs :) and i belive my work is not gonnabe done today since i would be havin vivid utterly erotic thoughts of them makin delicious lustfull sex…U FUCKING RULE
Holy hell, that was good. I loved that Shane made Bette give up control. Please don’t let this weekend ever end :)
Bette definitely gave it up! OK, this story ROCKS~!
God, you hit just about dead on what I was thinking. Your are unbelievable. Earlier today I checked your stories to see if I missed your update and saw “Unzipped” and had to read. Oh my God!!!! You should be winning the hot shower awards all over the place.
Crikey. That was intense as f*ck at the end there.
What a wonderful, vivid imagination you have. I hope you have someone special to share it with.
omfg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! my computer fucking melted this was fucking hottttttttttttttttttttttttt damn
That was extremely steamy and erotic. Damn I need more than a cold shower. Any suggestions?
ok so that’s part 3 now can I get a clean freshly showered out of the bathroom in the bed B & T NC17?????
Well, that was, well………. drenched indeed. Damn, can Bette have a daydream about me and Tina that we can act out at some later date. Shane just might be the luckiest ladt in weho, besides Tina that is who gets to sleep w/ Bette everyday. Post soon.
Holy fucking cow!!!!!! That’s absolutely one of the hottest post I’ve ever been reading. And this whole story is just too fucking amazing, it should come with a health-warning LOL. Post more and soon please :o))
Damn damn damn, so fucking hot and awesome, love iy. OK post soon please, thanks!
WOW…*THUD*….a little help getting up please? I just hit the floor where my jaw was!
LACOOP! I thought you forgot about us? So happy to see your post and thank you for taking time to respond to all our comments. Okay, this wish…was UNF*CKING BELIEVABLE! I found myself mesmerized by your words and breathless by the end of the story. You are definately one of the best NC-17 writers on this site. After reading all the comments that have been left, it looks like I’m not the only one who feels that way. You absolutely, unequivocally , ROCK us with this story. I hope you will post again soon.
Wow!! I will be walking a little funny for the rest of the day!!! Thanks!
Ok Tina’s blonde ass is out and my blonde ass is in I want to be between those two erotic beauties. Great fantasy you painted in my head.
This is crazy…good thing it was only 3 wishes cause I don’t think I could take anymore…lol…whew talking about HOT! What’s gonna happen next?
sweet jesus!!!(mental note: NEVER AGAIN read NC-17 stories at work. Very painful!!)Great job lacoop. Keep up the good work (Though that might prevent us from doing any…)
holy hell
holy shit batman, just when i think you can’t possibly top yourself, your write this, i think breathing has become a problem!!!!