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    Drowning 18

    Story written on June 29, 2005 by lucia.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=55111
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    The night isn’t over yet…just read!

     

    Tina, Im worried about Dana. Somethings wrong with her. I mean really wrong.

     

    What do you mean, Alice? As she said this, they heard Dana coming down the stairs.

     

    Later, ok T? Tina nodded in agreement.

     

    Good morning. Wow, Alice, what happened to you?

     

    What? So I got a little flour on me, what is it with you two? Dont you ever get dirty cooking?

     

    No! They answered in unison.

     

    Thats because you guys dont know how to have fun. Right Cara?

     

    Wight! Do we get to eat this soon, Im hungwy.

     

    Yeah, little one. Well come up now, ok? Dane, you didnt hear Shane moving around when you were up there, did you?

     

    No, I checked on her, she was still asleep.

     

    OK, well save her food. Alice walked over to the coffee maker and poured a cup, Here you go, Hon. You look like you could use it. She said smiling, handing the cup to Dana.

     

    Thanks, yeah I could use it through an IV right now. Dana said, sitting down at the table. So, Tina, what are going to do today?

     

    Oh, I thought I would surprise a friend of mine for lunch. Other than that, nothing.

     

    Alice spun around to face Tina, What friend would that be?

     

    Oh, just a friend from NY, she moved out here last week. I think I told you about her, Julia? Thought I would say hi.

     

    Julia? Julia from the Village Voice, moved out here for a new job?

     

    Yes, why, do you know her?

     

    Shes my new editor, T. I cant believe you know her. No, you never mentioned her.

     

    Wow, its a small world. We hung out wit her at Milk the other night. Shes nice, Tina. Dana added.

     

    Mommy, we going to see Julia? I miss her.

     

    I hope so honey. Ill call her in a little later, its too early to call.

     

    Alice was wiping her hands on her shorts walking over to the phone. Oh no its not. She called me yesterday before seven. Its 7:15 now, so we can call her. She was already looking for Julias number.

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    1. I’m first! *Dances around* Can I just say how much I love that little girl? She’s so adorable, “Aunt Awice” so cute! Cant wait to see how she reacts to meeting Bette.

    4. This has got to be my fsv. fanfic ever! It’s awesome and it kinda incorperates all the best couples (danish, sharmen and bettina). Cara is a doll, can’t wait for bette to meet her! I hope you fix up all these broken realitionships soon, I don’t know if I can handle weeping like a baby again!

    5. OMG – I was crying for like three pages! Hats off to you, luce! I love how involved the gang is in your story. And your original characters are so believable. You’re killing us AND Alice here –come on, what the flip has got Dana so freaked?! Post soon, i’m loving it.

    7. Applause!! I think I have page two inscribed into my memory for all time now. Evil lucia keeping Alice on the edge of her seat with Dana’s big secret. ;-)

    9. The Alice and Dana was so touching…what’s up with Dana? Inquiring readers want to know.
      Bette and Cara will be interesting. Julia and Chris…what’s the story there? I have a feeling that there is one.
      Now I want pancakes.

    12. I love it and I hope that dana speaks to alice soon and I also hope that they can sort though this as they are so good together please post soon

    13. I like the way you have the rest of the group involved in the Danish story. I’m wondering what’s going to happen with all of them, but mostly wondering what’s going on with Dana. Loved the first scene, poor Alice. Please update soon (and your other fic).

    15. lucia- i am completely absorbed in this. that opening scene is just knee knockin, slack jaw good. what is going on with Dana?! really? what?? i too love how this tale is about the whole gang. the tina/bette/cara/robin/julia/CHRIS thing is juicy and fun.post soon. thanks!

    17. Great as always :) I’m afraid that Dana’s secret is something HUGE.. and Alice will freak out and.. but in the end I know (or hope, more likely) that there will be a happy DANISH ending :D

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