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Drowning 18
Its ok. Youre going to have to talk to me about this, you know, explain whats going on. Tell me about whatever has you so scared. I want to help Dana. I just dont know how to.
I know, Al. I just cant yet. Im not ready. Is that ok? Dana said, hesitantly looking up at Alice.
For now. But we really need to talk about this Dane. You said you need your best friend, well, use her and talk to her. Im here, when youre ready. She said as she walked into the bathroom.
Alices heart was breaking for Dana. But she is not good at waiting. It isnt exactly something she was known for. She also knew the longer she played the friend role, the harder it would be to ever work things out, if they ever could. At least she sort of understood what Dana was doing. It made no sense to her, but she could see where it did to Dana. The idea of waiting to figure out what could be so bad that Dana would do something this dramatic was going to drive her crazy. Did she cheat on me? Did she fall in love with someone else? What else could a friend hear, but not a girlfriend?
Alice finished brushing her teeth and walked back into the bedroom. Dane, Im going to head down and start breakfast with Cara. Youll be ok?
Dana got up off of the bed and walked over the Alice, I will be. Thank you. She pulled Alice in for a hug and whispered in her ear, You really are too good to me.
Alice smiled and responded, Thats only because I love you. She pulled out of the hug, placed a small kiss on Danas cheek before walking downstairs.
She found Cara and Tina snuggled up on the couch watching Blues Clues. The show always sort for baffled Alice. How did a grown man play off that innocence and exuberance around kids all time? Actually, it sort of creeped Alice out.
Hey girls. Are you ready to make some pancakes? Alice asked. Cara jumped off of the couch and ran to Alice, who scooped her up in her arms.
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(54 votes, average: 4.46 out of 5)
I’m first! *Dances around* Can I just say how much I love that little girl? She’s so adorable, “Aunt Awice” so cute! Cant wait to see how she reacts to meeting Bette.
Between Cara meeting Bette and Tina being ‘Chris’, I can’t wait for the next chapter.
ALice and Dana in the begining just killed me! Sooo good!
This has got to be my fsv. fanfic ever! It’s awesome and it kinda incorperates all the best couples (danish, sharmen and bettina). Cara is a doll, can’t wait for bette to meet her! I hope you fix up all these broken realitionships soon, I don’t know if I can handle weeping like a baby again!
OMG – I was crying for like three pages! Hats off to you, luce! I love how involved the gang is in your story. And your original characters are so believable. You’re killing us AND Alice here –come on, what the flip has got Dana so freaked?! Post soon, i’m loving it.
“hot, hot, hot” to quote a one miss Leisha Hailey
Applause!! I think I have page two inscribed into my memory for all time now. Evil lucia keeping Alice on the edge of her seat with Dana’s big secret. ;-)
Superb!!!
Thank you.
The Alice and Dana was so touching…what’s up with Dana? Inquiring readers want to know.
Bette and Cara will be interesting. Julia and Chris…what’s the story there? I have a feeling that there is one.
Now I want pancakes.
Awww….so sweet and I *nearly* cried…numerous times…must be my stubborn qualities keeping it in…Love it!!!
I am just dying to find out what is going on in little Dana’s mind and heart.
I love it and I hope that dana speaks to alice soon and I also hope that they can sort though this as they are so good together please post soon
I like the way you have the rest of the group involved in the Danish story. I’m wondering what’s going to happen with all of them, but mostly wondering what’s going on with Dana. Loved the first scene, poor Alice. Please update soon (and your other fic).
K
great chapter. Can’t wait for lunch.
lucia- i am completely absorbed in this. that opening scene is just knee knockin, slack jaw good. what is going on with Dana?! really? what?? i too love how this tale is about the whole gang. the tina/bette/cara/robin/julia/CHRIS thing is juicy and fun.post soon. thanks!
That was great!! Cant wait to see whats next. Please please please post soon!
Great as always :) I’m afraid that Dana’s secret is something HUGE.. and Alice will freak out and.. but in the end I know (or hope, more likely) that there will be a happy DANISH ending :D
Awesome story! More please!!! Can’t wait!