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    Drowning 18

    Story written on June 29, 2005 by lucia.
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    The night isn’t over yet…just read!

     

    Aunt Awice!! Mommy, can we go make bweakfast? Pwease?

     

    Of course. Just listen to what Aunt Alice says. Al, Ill be in a minute. I need still need to brush my teeth. I made coffee.

     

    Thanks, T. I need it. Lets go make pancakes.

     

    By the time Tina got back into the kitchen, it was a mess. There was flour everywhere and all over Alice and Cara.

     

    Hey! What happened in here?

     

    Alice looked up at Tina, a little startled. What do you mean? Were cooking, right little one?

     

    Look Mommy – Im cooking!!! Cara said, while using a spoon to mix her own little bowl of batter.

     

    Yes you are and youre doing great. Al, you have a box mix in your cabinet, why didnt you use that?

     

    A box? That isnt making breakfast, I promised your little girl that we would make breakfast. Besides, this is much more fun and were going make you clean up!! Alice said, smiling at her friend.

     

    So, Dana didnt make it down to the couch? Tina said, her eyebrow arched in question a huge grin in her face.

     

    Alice rolled her eyes. Do not give me that look, TK. It wasnt like that.

     

    So nothing happened? She looked pretty comfy when we woke you this morning.

     

    Old habits are hard to break. Nothing happened. Well, something happened, but nothing really.

     

    What exactly does that mean?

     

    Just what it sounds like, something started, but ended. Alice responded and looked over at Cara, Can we not discuss what happened right now? Its a little strange.

     

    Cant you talk without details? Im pretty confident you can. Ive seen you do it before.

     

    Hey sweetie, no, dont put the syrup in the pancakes, well put them on later, ok? Here you go Alice said as she grabbed the syrup bottle out Caras hands and handed her some chocolate chips, put some of these in and mix them up.

     

    Alice walked back to the counter debating whether or not to talk to Tina about her fears about Dana. She didnt want to betray her confidence. She knew everyone joked about how she couldnt keep a secret. But gossip is one thing. A real confidence, she would never break. You could hand Alice by her fingernails before she would ever do that. But she also knew that she needed perspective on this.

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    1. I’m first! *Dances around* Can I just say how much I love that little girl? She’s so adorable, “Aunt Awice” so cute! Cant wait to see how she reacts to meeting Bette.

    4. This has got to be my fsv. fanfic ever! It’s awesome and it kinda incorperates all the best couples (danish, sharmen and bettina). Cara is a doll, can’t wait for bette to meet her! I hope you fix up all these broken realitionships soon, I don’t know if I can handle weeping like a baby again!

    5. OMG – I was crying for like three pages! Hats off to you, luce! I love how involved the gang is in your story. And your original characters are so believable. You’re killing us AND Alice here –come on, what the flip has got Dana so freaked?! Post soon, i’m loving it.

    7. Applause!! I think I have page two inscribed into my memory for all time now. Evil lucia keeping Alice on the edge of her seat with Dana’s big secret. ;-)

    9. The Alice and Dana was so touching…what’s up with Dana? Inquiring readers want to know.
      Bette and Cara will be interesting. Julia and Chris…what’s the story there? I have a feeling that there is one.
      Now I want pancakes.

    12. I love it and I hope that dana speaks to alice soon and I also hope that they can sort though this as they are so good together please post soon

    13. I like the way you have the rest of the group involved in the Danish story. I’m wondering what’s going to happen with all of them, but mostly wondering what’s going on with Dana. Loved the first scene, poor Alice. Please update soon (and your other fic).

    15. lucia- i am completely absorbed in this. that opening scene is just knee knockin, slack jaw good. what is going on with Dana?! really? what?? i too love how this tale is about the whole gang. the tina/bette/cara/robin/julia/CHRIS thing is juicy and fun.post soon. thanks!

    17. Great as always :) I’m afraid that Dana’s secret is something HUGE.. and Alice will freak out and.. but in the end I know (or hope, more likely) that there will be a happy DANISH ending :D

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