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Drowning 18
Dane? In answer, Dana, ran her hands up Alices side, moving them towards the center of her chest, her hands gently stroking the outsides of Alices *****.
Alice was lost in the sensation. Torn between the knowledge that letting this go further was a mistake and knowing that if she didnt, she might never get to feel this again. To feel the soft gentle touch of Danas hands, the electric feel of Danas lips on her skin or the feeling of home wrapped in Danas arms or feeling Dana inside of her. Alice began to move her body to press herself closer to Danas hands. She reached her arm behind her to feel for Danas body. She placed her hand on the small of Danas back pulling Dana closer to her. Alice closed her eyes as she felt tears building in her eyes. The knowledge that this could be the last time she experienced this with Dana was too much to bear.
She turned within Danas arm to face the brunette. As she turned to speak, Danas lips brushed against hers. Alice was momentarily stunned and instinctively pushed her lips against Danas. She allowed the sweet sensation of Danas lips to take over her mind. Alice led her tongue across Danas bottom lip, feeling Dana allow her tongue entry. The kiss was tentative and questioning. Both waiting for the other to pull away, when neither did, it deepened. Their tongues intertwined in a race to explore.
As they continued the kiss, their hands began to roam. Dana climbed on top of Alice to straddle her, never breaking the connection of their lips. She placed her hands under Alices shirt and took a gentle hold of Alices breast. She felt Alice moan into the kiss and opened her eyes and looked at Alice, whose eyes were open, gazing at Dana.
Their eyes and lips remained locked as Dana continued her exploration of Alices body. Neither of them was willing to look away, scared that if they did, even for a second, the moment would disappear into the night. In that look, all of the love and passion they felt was shared. There were no walls, no break ups, no fears. It was pure untainted love. The hopes and dreams for a lifetime were joined.
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(54 votes, average: 4.46 out of 5)
I’m first! *Dances around* Can I just say how much I love that little girl? She’s so adorable, “Aunt Awice” so cute! Cant wait to see how she reacts to meeting Bette.
Between Cara meeting Bette and Tina being ‘Chris’, I can’t wait for the next chapter.
ALice and Dana in the begining just killed me! Sooo good!
This has got to be my fsv. fanfic ever! It’s awesome and it kinda incorperates all the best couples (danish, sharmen and bettina). Cara is a doll, can’t wait for bette to meet her! I hope you fix up all these broken realitionships soon, I don’t know if I can handle weeping like a baby again!
OMG – I was crying for like three pages! Hats off to you, luce! I love how involved the gang is in your story. And your original characters are so believable. You’re killing us AND Alice here –come on, what the flip has got Dana so freaked?! Post soon, i’m loving it.
“hot, hot, hot” to quote a one miss Leisha Hailey
Applause!! I think I have page two inscribed into my memory for all time now. Evil lucia keeping Alice on the edge of her seat with Dana’s big secret. ;-)
Superb!!!
Thank you.
The Alice and Dana was so touching…what’s up with Dana? Inquiring readers want to know.
Bette and Cara will be interesting. Julia and Chris…what’s the story there? I have a feeling that there is one.
Now I want pancakes.
Awww….so sweet and I *nearly* cried…numerous times…must be my stubborn qualities keeping it in…Love it!!!
I am just dying to find out what is going on in little Dana’s mind and heart.
I love it and I hope that dana speaks to alice soon and I also hope that they can sort though this as they are so good together please post soon
I like the way you have the rest of the group involved in the Danish story. I’m wondering what’s going to happen with all of them, but mostly wondering what’s going on with Dana. Loved the first scene, poor Alice. Please update soon (and your other fic).
K
great chapter. Can’t wait for lunch.
lucia- i am completely absorbed in this. that opening scene is just knee knockin, slack jaw good. what is going on with Dana?! really? what?? i too love how this tale is about the whole gang. the tina/bette/cara/robin/julia/CHRIS thing is juicy and fun.post soon. thanks!
That was great!! Cant wait to see whats next. Please please please post soon!
Great as always :) I’m afraid that Dana’s secret is something HUGE.. and Alice will freak out and.. but in the end I know (or hope, more likely) that there will be a happy DANISH ending :D
Awesome story! More please!!! Can’t wait!