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Drowning 19
Why are you giving me a hard time, Shane? I thought we were passed you blaming me for this.
Im not blaming you Bette. I was concerned so I stopped by. You seem to be falling right back into your old routine, which I must say, isnt nearly as pleasant as youve been the last few years.
Bette straightened up in her chair, taking a defensive stance, she locked eyes with Shane, What exactly does that mean?
Shane, meeting Bettes glance, I walked in and you were coming down hard on someone. And before you say anything, Im sure he deserved it, but you havent done it in a while, at least not that Ive heard. Then you start on what to do as though this is all about you. There are a few other people involved. Maybe you need to think about that. Take it one step at a time. Figure out if you even want to be friends with Tina, if you do, figure out how to do that without hurting Robin. And remember Tina comes with a kid. So if you decide to be her friend, mean it. Shane hesitated for a second and looked up at Bette to try and gauge her reaction, which looked pretty impassive, Look Bette. We all love you. We love who you used to be, but you have changed so much in the last few years and sort of got used to the kinder, gentler Bette. Dont stress yourself so much over this that we lose her. I just want you happy. K?
Bette shrugged her shoulders in a sign of defeat, Youre right. Its just overwhelming, Shane. But I need to think and not react, right? Shane nodded in agreement.
So, Shane?
Hm?
Whats Cara like?
Shanes eyes lit up immediately and a huge smile spread across her face, She is the sweetest, most beautiful little girl ever. Seriously. She is. You need to meet her for yourself, I wont be able to do her justice. But she is exactly what you would expect Tinas little girl to be like.
Bette smiled, imagining what Tinas girl would be like. As happy as she was for Tina, and she was really happy for her, she was a little resentful that Tina made for herself, the life and family that they were going to have. It wasnt that she didnt want Tina happy. It was that she knew that there was so much she had lost when she lost that relationship. Bette knew that she wasnt capable of moving forward with those plans alone, without Tina. Yet, somehow, Tina was able to move on and make the life that they were going to share. She knew that she caused it, but she couldnt help how she felt and she was absolutely hating herself for it.
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(79 votes, average: 3.62 out of 5)
Once again you have done a phenomenal job conveying all the Danish heartache. I am glad that you are trying to make sense of the lovely mess that Dana has created. Dana is probably one of the most misunderstood characters on the show. I am glad that you pointed out how she really isn’t wishy-washy. Please post soon.
Bette can be a little selfish at times. I’m happy Shane called her on it before it could get out of hand. “One day soon, she would have to explain all of this to her, and then who knew what would happen.” That sounds scary…
Great Chapter, post soon!
lights has said what’s on mind, being a big Dana fan, I’m really glad that you made sense of her action which is severly lacking on the show.
Lots of stuff happening in this one, but mostly, it looks like wheels have been set in motion for what could be a bumpy ride.
Great chapter. You’re killing me though! What in the world is going on in Dana’s mind? Can’t wait to find out.
Great chapter! You’re a tease with all this drama, but I’m loving it! Doing such a great job with Dana’s POV. I’ve got my fingers crossed for an (eventually) ON-FOREVER Danish!
Loved it, loved it! Can’t wait for your next post. I’m very interested to see what you’re going to do with B and T and love the Dana and Alice interaction!! You’re awesome! More please! :)
Great one! *5* I like that there’s other plot lines and not just Danish. But it’s going soooo slowly with Danish ;) but please, continue like this (Julia better tell Tina how she feels – situation reminds me of Alice and Dana). I still have hope for happy Danish ending.. and hopefully Dana is worrying for nothing, and Alice can handle what ever is coming.
Amazing. How true to character you portray ALL of them! I absolutly love this fic, update soon PLEASE!!!!
Great chapter…And Shane is absolutely objective with the whole B&T saga. *applaudes* Loved it!!
Another great chapter Lucia.
Thank you looking forward to the next one.
great chapter. can’t wait for the next.
5 stars as always.
I love it and i do hope that alice and dana can work though this and get back together even if it is a long road to go down I just hope that dana will find that there is only alice for her but I will have to wait and see please post very soon
Dana’s explanation of herself in this chapter was very well written. I can’t wait for her to explain her big dark secret to Alice though. I wonder if she will tell Tina at dinner! Its starting to look like Dana’s secret is wicked heavy. I liked how you gave Julia more depth as well. So… where is the next chapter. *looks around*