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Drowning 19
No problem. I get that you werent happy. I dont think you hid that too well, Bette. Shane answered, with a small smirk.
Bette replied with little humor, I wasnt trying to hide it. I am not happy with him and he should realize that his actions affect others. So, what brings you here today?
My appointment wrapped up early and thought Id say hello, see how youre doing after last night. It must have been a ***** of a night for you.
Bette laughed, Hmm, it certainly was. Robin was not happy with me.
Yeah, she hid that about as well as you hid your happiness on the phone just now.
Bette looked down, She is trying so hard Shane. I dont know what I would do if I was in her position. *****, I dont know what to do in my own position.
Well, how did you feel yesterday?
I dont know. I just dont know Shane. Bettes voice was gaining an edge and her frustration was obvious. It was so good to see her. She looks really good, doesnt she?
Yeah, she does Bette. Shane answered quietly.
It really was good to see her. Ive missed her so much, but I dont know how Im supposed to act. Somewhere along the line, I just got used to the idea that I wouldnt see her again. I started a new life. Robin is a great woman. She is so good to me. And now here is Tina and I dont know what side is up. Bette dropped her head into her hands and was just sitting there, unmoving.
Shane got up from the chair and walked over to the other side of the desk, putting her hands on Bettes back, trying to show her friend some comfort. Itll all work out. Dont do this to yourself. You had to know it wasnt going to be easy seeing Tina. It’s been five years, Bette. Stop being so hard on yourself. Did you honestly think you would just take in stride?
Bette lifted her head and looked up at Shane, Yeah, I actually did. Foolish, huh?
Shane let out a small laugh, shaking her head at her friend For a smart womanwow.
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(79 votes, average: 3.62 out of 5)
Once again you have done a phenomenal job conveying all the Danish heartache. I am glad that you are trying to make sense of the lovely mess that Dana has created. Dana is probably one of the most misunderstood characters on the show. I am glad that you pointed out how she really isn’t wishy-washy. Please post soon.
Bette can be a little selfish at times. I’m happy Shane called her on it before it could get out of hand. “One day soon, she would have to explain all of this to her, and then who knew what would happen.” That sounds scary…
Great Chapter, post soon!
lights has said what’s on mind, being a big Dana fan, I’m really glad that you made sense of her action which is severly lacking on the show.
Lots of stuff happening in this one, but mostly, it looks like wheels have been set in motion for what could be a bumpy ride.
Great chapter. You’re killing me though! What in the world is going on in Dana’s mind? Can’t wait to find out.
Great chapter! You’re a tease with all this drama, but I’m loving it! Doing such a great job with Dana’s POV. I’ve got my fingers crossed for an (eventually) ON-FOREVER Danish!
Loved it, loved it! Can’t wait for your next post. I’m very interested to see what you’re going to do with B and T and love the Dana and Alice interaction!! You’re awesome! More please! :)
Great one! *5* I like that there’s other plot lines and not just Danish. But it’s going soooo slowly with Danish ;) but please, continue like this (Julia better tell Tina how she feels – situation reminds me of Alice and Dana). I still have hope for happy Danish ending.. and hopefully Dana is worrying for nothing, and Alice can handle what ever is coming.
Amazing. How true to character you portray ALL of them! I absolutly love this fic, update soon PLEASE!!!!
Great chapter…And Shane is absolutely objective with the whole B&T saga. *applaudes* Loved it!!
Another great chapter Lucia.
Thank you looking forward to the next one.
great chapter. can’t wait for the next.
5 stars as always.
I love it and i do hope that alice and dana can work though this and get back together even if it is a long road to go down I just hope that dana will find that there is only alice for her but I will have to wait and see please post very soon
Dana’s explanation of herself in this chapter was very well written. I can’t wait for her to explain her big dark secret to Alice though. I wonder if she will tell Tina at dinner! Its starting to look like Dana’s secret is wicked heavy. I liked how you gave Julia more depth as well. So… where is the next chapter. *looks around*