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Drowning 19
So what do I do now? Robin is so upset with me from last night. She really was hurt with the family comment. She looked up at Shane with apologetic eyes, Its not that she isnt my family, its that she isnt yours. You know? All of us, she isnt a part of that, not in the same way Tina is. I kept trying to find a good way of saying that to her, but it wasnt working.
What do you expect Bette? Is there a good way that you could hear that comment from your girlfriend? Come on.
I know. Its something that she and I have both accepted. You guys dont have the same relationship with her as Tina. But you guys are good to her and include her, even if it did take Alices prodding to get it started. It wasnt really that big of a deal, until she saw how it used to be. It makes the difference so much bigger. Her head dropped back down on the desk, What am I going to do Shane?
What do you want to do? Shane responded quite simply.
Ha! I want to go back five years and never ***** up.
Shane, totally ignoring Bettes sarcastic reply, Since that cant happen, what do you want to do?
I dont know. I feel like Im right back where I was five years ago. Like all of the progress I made in getting on in life went out the window.
I dont think so. Youre over thinking this Bette. Just take it for what it is. Tinas in for a weekend, you have an opportunity to get her back in your life, learn to be friends. Whats the problem?
Stop making it seem so simple. Its not. Bette replied quite tersely.
Hey – dont take this out on me, Bette. I came to check on you. Shane answered, raising her eyes to meet Bettes. And it is relatively simple. There arent a tremendous amount of options. You have a life, you keep it like it is and try to be Tinas friend. You have a life, you keep it like it is, you dont try to be Tinas friend. You have a life, you drop it and see if you can make one with Tina again. Did I miss other options?
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(79 votes, average: 3.62 out of 5)
Once again you have done a phenomenal job conveying all the Danish heartache. I am glad that you are trying to make sense of the lovely mess that Dana has created. Dana is probably one of the most misunderstood characters on the show. I am glad that you pointed out how she really isn’t wishy-washy. Please post soon.
Bette can be a little selfish at times. I’m happy Shane called her on it before it could get out of hand. “One day soon, she would have to explain all of this to her, and then who knew what would happen.” That sounds scary…
Great Chapter, post soon!
lights has said what’s on mind, being a big Dana fan, I’m really glad that you made sense of her action which is severly lacking on the show.
Lots of stuff happening in this one, but mostly, it looks like wheels have been set in motion for what could be a bumpy ride.
Great chapter. You’re killing me though! What in the world is going on in Dana’s mind? Can’t wait to find out.
Great chapter! You’re a tease with all this drama, but I’m loving it! Doing such a great job with Dana’s POV. I’ve got my fingers crossed for an (eventually) ON-FOREVER Danish!
Loved it, loved it! Can’t wait for your next post. I’m very interested to see what you’re going to do with B and T and love the Dana and Alice interaction!! You’re awesome! More please! :)
Great one! *5* I like that there’s other plot lines and not just Danish. But it’s going soooo slowly with Danish ;) but please, continue like this (Julia better tell Tina how she feels – situation reminds me of Alice and Dana). I still have hope for happy Danish ending.. and hopefully Dana is worrying for nothing, and Alice can handle what ever is coming.
Amazing. How true to character you portray ALL of them! I absolutly love this fic, update soon PLEASE!!!!
Great chapter…And Shane is absolutely objective with the whole B&T saga. *applaudes* Loved it!!
Another great chapter Lucia.
Thank you looking forward to the next one.
great chapter. can’t wait for the next.
5 stars as always.
I love it and i do hope that alice and dana can work though this and get back together even if it is a long road to go down I just hope that dana will find that there is only alice for her but I will have to wait and see please post very soon
Dana’s explanation of herself in this chapter was very well written. I can’t wait for her to explain her big dark secret to Alice though. I wonder if she will tell Tina at dinner! Its starting to look like Dana’s secret is wicked heavy. I liked how you gave Julia more depth as well. So… where is the next chapter. *looks around*