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Drowning 20
Thanks Marina, I appreciate the help. Bette said. Anytime. Marina answered, laughing as she walked away.
You are the only one I wake up to, and the only question I ask is how did I get so lucky?
Good answer. Tina said, leaning in, kissing her girlfriend.
Ew gross guys. Its still morning. Alice spat at the couple that slowly separated. See, even Marina agrees.
Bette sat up in her chair, Well, if you are so sure of yourself, why not put your money where your mouth is.
And what is that supposed to mean?
It means, if you are so sure, then you go hook up tonight and prove it to us.
Are you seriously challenging my ability to get laid? Bette, seriously, come on.
Suddenly not so sure of yourself, are you?
That is totally not it. But Bette, its not a fair bet, Bette. Ha, bet Bette. Get it? Alice said looking over at Tina and Bette, neither of whom was finding this nearly as amusing as Alice did.
We get it, Alice, its just not that funny. Bette answered.
Well, you just cant appreciate a good pun. Anyway, I cant just take your money like that. I dont need pride to hook up, thank you. Besides, are you promoting the one night stand life style?
Tina looked at Bette then at Alice and back at Bette again, I swear its like Im out with two four year olds.
She started.
I did not. Come on Alice. OK, if you arent going to hook up with someone today, get ten numbers. Real people Alice and no one you already know. If its so easy on Pride, lets see you get ten numbers tonight.
Alice thought about this for a few seconds before answering, No problem. Ten numbers in one day. I can do that. She rose from the table.
Where are you going? Tina asked.
Hey, its 11 am already, I need ten numbers today and I plan on having some fun, so I might as well start. Ill meet you back here tonight, at seven?
Youre crazy, you know that, right? Tina asked Alice.
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(69 votes, average: 4.26 out of 5)
I’m totally agree with lights, Dana is a difficult character, maybe for that the writers in the show don’t try to do something better with her and let us that job. Anyway thanks for this.
Really good job, again :) I hope that hug means something progress in Dana’s and Alice’s relationship. And Julia really needs to tell Tina how she feels.
I fucking love this story, update soon… waiting for more kills me!
This story is one of my favorites. Love the interaction between all the characters and the way you portray the Alice/Dana relationship. REally curious to know what is going on with Dana. Look forward to your next post. Yeah, Drowning and Laws of Attraction rule my fan ficton world!!!
I love this story…great work..
Really enjoyed it. And I really really want to know what Dana’s problem is, but then I fear we might be in for some angst next chapter. Loved “Dana you might want to close your mouth a little”. So gay! I would love to see that scene.
So long and so satisfying. I really can’t tell where this is going to go. You aren’t telegraphing your ending. Bette and Tina could or could not get back together.
Thanks!
Great job. I love this story.
This is fast becoming a favorite. I can see a nice love triangle between Bette, Tina and Julia.
I love this story…
Thank you.
Update soon =D
lucia – great job – i am dying to know what dana’s secret is. hurry up and post
I am really enjoying this story. I like how easily you make dialogue transitions between each of the characters. I love how Alice knows Dana so well and is trying to understand her. Dana is the hardest character to write, but you do a fabulous job in trying to make the reader “see” that she truly is a complex character. I love this story and I hope that you post soon.
Everyone else had said what was in my mind! You’re doing a much better job with them than the show. Now I’m looking forward to dinner ; )