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    Drowning 20

    Story written on July 18, 2005 by lucia.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=55474
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    Lunch at the planet and the gang’s all here – how did they all meet shane and dana?

     

    Crazy like a fox, TK, crazy like a fox. See ya!

     

    And she was off on her quest. It wasnt a bad quest actually, she got to spend the day chatting it up with a bunch of women. Nothing wrong with a quest like that. By 6 pm, she had 8 numbers and was feeling pretty good about herself. What she was most impressed with was the diversity in the women. She met tall women, short women, thin women, heavy women, built women, hot women and not so hot women. She was indiscriminate. She couldnt get all of their numbers. She tried. But alas, a few held out. But she did get a lot of free drinks, which always adds the goodness of a day.

     

    She was wondering back towards the hoards of people in the street when her eye caught a young, slim boy. He was taking in the scene and had a veiled smile on his face. Alice decided to go say hello. It seemed sort of sad to Alice to see the kid leaning on the telephone booth alone. As she approached, she realized that she was looking a beautiful, sad girl.

     

    Hey! Happy Pride Alice said as she walked up the girl.

     

    The girl lifted her head slightly and raised her eyes to meet Alices, Hey. She said as she quickly dropped her eyes back down.

     

    Im Alice.

     

    Shane.

     

    So, is this your first pride? You look a little overwhelmed.

     

    Yeah. Im just moved here. So this is my first.

     

    Pretty cool though, huh?

     

    Yeah. Its pretty cool.

     

    Youre not exactly talkative, are you? Alice said, eyeing the girl that stood in front of her. She looked to be about 18. The strange part was the mixture of innocence and sadness that appeared in equal measure in her eyes.

     

    Nah. Small talk isnt my thing. I speak when its worth it. Shane answered.

     

    Hmm, I guess I should take is as a compliment that youre talking to me then?

     

    Sure, you can do that.

     

    Alice looked at Shane and figured she might as well try for her number, since conversation didnt seem to be Shanes strong suit.

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    Comments

    1. I’m totally agree with lights, Dana is a difficult character, maybe for that the writers in the show don’t try to do something better with her and let us that job. Anyway thanks for this.

    2. Really good job, again :) I hope that hug means something progress in Dana’s and Alice’s relationship. And Julia really needs to tell Tina how she feels.

    4. This story is one of my favorites. Love the interaction between all the characters and the way you portray the Alice/Dana relationship. REally curious to know what is going on with Dana. Look forward to your next post. Yeah, Drowning and Laws of Attraction rule my fan ficton world!!!

    6. Really enjoyed it. And I really really want to know what Dana’s problem is, but then I fear we might be in for some angst next chapter. Loved “Dana you might want to close your mouth a little”. So gay! I would love to see that scene.

    7. So long and so satisfying. I really can’t tell where this is going to go. You aren’t telegraphing your ending. Bette and Tina could or could not get back together.
      Thanks!

    13. I am really enjoying this story. I like how easily you make dialogue transitions between each of the characters. I love how Alice knows Dana so well and is trying to understand her. Dana is the hardest character to write, but you do a fabulous job in trying to make the reader “see” that she truly is a complex character. I love this story and I hope that you post soon.

    14. Everyone else had said what was in my mind! You’re doing a much better job with them than the show. Now I’m looking forward to dinner ; )

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